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It was for the first time a really cold night after a long summer and
a mild fall. The group of punks, carrying beer cans, had fled from the
rain down to the dingy lower levels of the central station. A guard was
watching them distrustfully. They had a brief argument whether to go for
a less supervised station or to cadge some money first. In the end, one
of them departed and the rest headed for the subway. He was 6' tall,
thin, and wore a long black leather coat with dangling silver chains,
a battered black jeans, and a dirty T-Shirt. His Mohawk haircut had
suffered from the rain but his appearance was still fierce. Unlike
his friends he had no piercing-s and his boyish face made him look much
younger than his 18 years.

Most passers-by were long-time commuters and knew all tricks to avoid
beggars. Danny's frustration grew. He approached a tired looking
clerk or office worker who was heading for the exit. 'Can you spare
some change?', Danny asked. The man walked past him and pretended not
to have noticed the outstretched hand. Danny yelled: 'I am talking
to you, mister. Fuck you!'. People looked around what was going on,
but did not stop for a closer look. A couple came along. She was in
her mid-twenties and supported her overweight husband who was heavily
drunk. The punk walked over and said his usual line. To his surprise,
the woman stopped and reached for her purse and gave him a Euro. Her
husband mumbled something and suddenly lost his balance. Danny grabbed
him and helped him up. After a few steps he stumbled again and almost
dragged his wife along. The punk offered his help and the woman nodded
relieved.

The tramway station was not far, but it took them some time to pull
the drunkard all the way. When the train arrived, he threw up and
hit Danny's T-Shirt and trousers. 'I'll wash it if you come with us',
offered the woman hastily, with an embarrassed expression. At least they
didn't have to stand in the crowded wagon. The stench scared most other
passengers away. After a long and unpleasant ride, they arrived at their
destination. The way to the couple's apartment was a tedious business.
Every now and then, the man leaned over to vomit. Finally, they had
pushed him up those three stairs, into the apartment and into the small
bathroom. He was placed on a stool and his wife stripped him down to his
underwear.

After that, they jockeyed him into the bedroom. With a sigh of relief,
the women closed the door from the outside when a second door was opened
and a gawky teenager with thick, curled hair appeared. 'Pia, where have
you been and who's that?', he inquired and pointed at Danny. 'This is --
what was your name?', she asked. 'Call me Danny', said Danny. 'Danny's
helped to bring him home. He didn't feel well again.', she explained.
'You mean, he's drunk as usual', the boy said. 'Don't talk like that about
my husband, he's a good man!', she exclaimed. 'Danny, this is Martin,
the son of my husband's brother. His parents had a nasty divorce, and
he stays with us while his father is, uhm, out of town.'

'You can have shower and give me your clothes. I'll wash them right now.',
said Pia. The punk nodded and went back to the bathroom. Even without
all that throw-off, his clothes needed a wash very badly. He dropped
them on a heap and put a towel around his waist. 'Be careful, there's
stuff dropping off', he warned the woman when he handed her the bunch. He
returned to the bathroom and shut the door.

Curiously, he peered into the mirrored cabinet. As he had hoped,
there were some pills in there. Among other things, his fondness for
vividly colored pills was one of the reasons why he lived on the street.
To some people in the parks, you could sell any pills. He swallowed one
of them and hid the rest in his boots. After that, he removed the towel
and turned on the shower. The warm water made him relax while waited for
the pill to kick in. Nothing happened. Who knows what kind of pill this
had been. Perhaps he would not get pregnant now.

After about half an hour he turned the water off and reached for the
towel. Unexpectedly, his cock sprang to life when he started rubbing
his body with the towel. It grew harder as usual, though he didn't
even think of Cindy and their last encounter behind a bush in the
city hall's park. Someone was knocking at the door: 'Hurry up, it's
urgent!'. Danny wound a towel around his waist and tried to conceal his
enormous boner. He opened and Martin ran past him. Danny waited in the
corridor and tried to think of boring things, without success. His cock
seemed still to grow. Martin reappeared and Pia shouted from the kitchen:
'Martin, lend Danny some of your clothes.'

Martin's room was small, cramped, and the cupboard did not offer a
grand selection. 'You're a gay hustler, aren't you?', asked Martin
innocently. 'Only when nothing else works.', answered Danny cooly.

'Does it hurt when they thrust you in the arse?', Martin asked.

'Just give me that trouser, will you?', said Danny.

'Do you have to swallow their jizz?'

'Some want it, but it's too dangerous. Can I take that shirt?'

'Do you have to ejaculate at them?'

'Are you gay or what's the matter with you?', Danny asked angrily.

The boy blushed but replied: 'No, I'm not!'. Danny dropped his towel
and exposed his boner, which was still hard as a rock. He took the
trouser which Martin was holding and put it on. A big bulge was still
visible. Martin looked dreamily at Danny's crotch. 'The trousers are a
bit short, but it's OK.', Danny commented while he was looking at the
mirror in the cupboard's door. He tried the shirt, but the short sleeves
looked ridiculous, so he put it off. Pia entered the room and asked if
Danny would like something to eat. He followed her into a small living
room. She had made some sandwiches which he gorged in no time. 'You can
stay here tonight, if you like. But you have to leave before my husband
wakes up. He might get a wrong impression and he is very passionate, you
know.', she explained. 'Our washing machine broke down last week. I'll
fetch the stuff to the all-night laundry next door.' She took a laundry
bag and left.

Martin joined Danny on the couch and turned the TV on. 'You have a girl
friend?', asked Danny. 'No, not yet.', Martin replied. 'So you can jerk me
off now.', said Danny and grabbed his own cock through the cloth. Martin
blushed. 'I've told you, I am not gay!', he said. 'Of course not. Do you
like to see my dick?', asked Danny and removed his trousers. His cock
was raging hard. Martin looked at it and breathed heavily. 'Some guys
don't show their's, they're afraid it would be too small.', remarked
Danny and watched the boy closely. Martin touched his own belt buckle,
but hesitated. 'Yours must be very small.', Danny sneered, 'unlike this
piece of hard meat', he said and stroke his dick gently. Martin's eyes
widened. He did not move.

'Let's have a look, then.', said Danny and opened Martin's belt
and zippers. The boy was too surprised to stop him. 'Oops, I take
anything back. It's really nice.', Danny exclaimed when he freed
Martin's cock, which was solid and throbbing. Martin did not resist
when Danny elaborately licked his member. 'I like your smell, Martin.',
said Danny. The boy's cock glistened with pre-cum and saliva. Martin
panted heavily when the punk gave him a blow-job. He grabbed Danny's
prick and jerked it. Danny looked up and smiled at him. At this moment,
Martin shot a fat white load all over Danny's chest. 'Whow, not bad for
a straight guy.', Danny commented and kissed him.

Not long after, Martin was nude and cuddled himself in Danny's arms.
'All we need for this is a condom and some lube. It'll hurt a bit but
you'll like it.', Danny explained while petting his new friend. 'I
bet auntie and uncle have stuff like that in their bedroom.', he
said and stood up. 'I'll look for it', said Martin and headed for the
corridor. 'Trousers?', Danny reminded him and the nude boy returned
to fetch his briefs. After five minutes, Martin had not returned
yet. Danny started getting nervous, but at least he couldn't hear any
shouting. Finally the boy returned with a broad smile, waving something in
triumph. He removed his briefs and watched Danny, who was placing a condom
over his pre-cum covered dick. Martin knelt on the sofa and looked back
to see what Danny was doing.

'You're very smooth for your age.', he remarked while stretching
Martin's hole and putting lube there. 'I shave all of it', whispered
the boy and blushed once more. To his surprise, Danny got in without any
trouble. Martin didn't even groan when Danny's cock disappeared in his
ass. Danny started pumping and enjoyed the tight feeling. Martin was
whimpering softly when Danny reached for his dick and wanked it. This
wouldn't last long. 'Turn round', Danny commanded and retracted his
dick. The boy obeyed and took his lover's cock. He removed the condom
and jerked it. Danny came closer so that their hard dicks came in
contact. They squeezed their cocks together and jacked them off. The
shots came nearly at the same time and sprayed white hot cum on their
bodies. Danny leaned back on the sofa and Martin laid himself upon
him. Their chests slid together, lubed by their cum.

After some time of lazy kissing and petting, Danny mentioned that
Pia would return from the laundry soon. With a sigh, Martin stood up.
They went to the bathroom and cleaned each other. Martin heard steps
from the staircase and exclaimed: 'That's Pia!'. He fled into his room
while Danny tried to collect all the telltale items they might have
dropped in the living room. At the same time he forced himself into
the trousers. This wasn't easy as his dick simply refused to go flaccid.

Pia entered the living room, put the laundry bag on the floor and
announced: 'Everything's clean and dry, even the stain in your jeans.'
Danny looked up from a TV magazine and made a confirming grunt. 'Only
your briefs..', she hesitated and looked at the part of Danny's body
where he usually wore them, '..the machine tore it up.', she finished
her sentence with regret. 'I'll get a new one', said Danny. 'Maybe some
of Martin's will fit you', Pia suggested. 'Don't worry, I can go without
underwear for some time.', Danny replied. Pia shook her head and looked
at his crotch for the second time. Her face got a more vivid color. 'No,
Martin can spare one. He has bought some lately.', she argued and headed
for her nephew's room. Danny followed her.

They entered and Martin complained about his lack of privacy and his
aunt's refusal to knock before opening the door. He had emerged from
behind the cupboard's door and his clothes were a little untidy. When
Pia leaned forward to search for an appropriate item, Martin grinned at
Danny and pretended to fuck his aunt in her ass. Soon Pia returned from
the shelves. 'Try these three.', she said while Martin protested. 'OK.',
said Danny and put off the trousers. His hard cock pointed to the feeble
lamp at the ceiling. He tried the first one. 'Too small', he commented
and took the next. 'In the bathroom!', bursted Pia who had found her
voice again. Martin just stood there and grinned.

Shortly after Danny returned from the bathroom, still nude, still
with a hard-on. He found Pia in the living room and sat next to her on
sofa. 'None of them fits', he explained and handed her the underwear.
She angrily threw a pillow between his thighs and exclaimed: 'You can't
run around nude in this house. Either you put your trousers on or you
leave!' Danny looked sadly on the floor and grumbled: 'OK, first spew
on the stinking little punk and then just chase the stinking little
punk away. I thought you liked me a bit.' Pia sighed: 'You're not
stinking, Danny.'. She reached up and stroked his neck and continued:
'and actually I do like you a bit.'. He leaned down and kissed her on the
lips. She made a startled little sound and blushed. But she responded to
his kiss. The pillow dropped on the floor and after their lips parted,
Pia looked at his hips and giggled: 'And you're definitely not little..'.

They kissed again and Danny's hands slipped under her shirt. Pia's body
tensed and she said:'No, we can't do that. What if my husband's got to
pee? He will find us!'. Danny stood up and walk over to the wall and
turned the lights off. 'Now he won't see that anybody's in here.', Danny
explained and returned to the sofa. It was not really dark. A neon sign
from the opposite house sent its alternating green and red light into the
room. They continued where they had stopped and soon after, Danny could
finally remove Pia's shirt and bra. Her boobs were only a nice handful,
but she had unusually large and dark areolas. They felt warm and
soft, only the nipples were hard already. At first, Danny touched
her tits very carefully. When he felt her stiff nipples, he became bolder
and squeezed them. She moaned a bit and their lips met again. While
playing with their tongues, Pia held his cock and stroked it slowly.

'Your tits look funny in this green light', remarked Danny and licked
her nipples. She made him lay down on his back and knelt between his
legs. Now, she bent forward and rubbed her tits slowly along the boy's
stomach and chest. Danny gasped. When she reached his head, she kissed him
and rubbed her tits back downwards his body. 'This feels so good, do it
again.', begged Danny. Pia complied. After some rounds, she felt a warm
and sticky liquid being shot at her belly. 'Sorry, I've come. This was
too much.', said Danny. Pia told him not to worry and laid down on him.
'You're still hard', she remarked between two kisses. 'Not hard enough
yet', said Danny, petting her ass cheeks.

'Suck my dick, Pia', requested Danny and opened the button of her jeans
which she still wore. His fingers found her clit and started rubbing
around it. 'We can do other things, Danny.', she said, 'I don't like
that'. He continued to rub around her cunt and stuck his middle finger
in her hole. Pia drew a deep breathe wanked Danny's prick a little
faster. 'Wait a minute', she said and stood up to get rid of her jeans
and underwear. She started searching something under the table. 'What
are you doing?', asked Danny. 'I am looking for your condoms. I've found
them when I washed your clothes.', she answered. 'It's too dark under
the table, you'll never find them.', said Danny and went to the floor
lamp. When he turned it on, he had a good sight at Pia's ass and her
cunt as she knelt on the floor, searching the laundry bag that still
stood there.

'Found it!', she announced and stood up. Her belly and parts of her tits
were covered with his drying cum, just like his own body. She looked
at him and down her own body. 'We smell of your semen.', she commented
as she placed one of the condoms on his hard member. He turned off the
light again and pushed her back on the sofa. She laid on her back and
straddled her legs. Danny placed his cock on her cunt and rubbed it a
bit up and down. He put a finger in her hole and found it sufficiently
soggy. He pushed the head of his prick down to the entrance of her love
tunnel. 'Fuck me, Danny', she whispered. He made a deep thrust and leaned
over to lick the dried cum from her tits. After some more slow thrusts,
he started pounding her energetically, kneading her tits and kissing
her lips.

With every thrust, she made a little begging sound. They soon started
sweating and the neon light gleamed on the moist bodies. She grabbed his
ass cheeks and made him thrust even faster. Her screams became louder
and Danny placed a hand on her mouth to muffle her. An orgasm rocked
her body, but the boy did not stop pounding. She came a second time
and Danny pulled his dick out of her. He removed the condom and knelt
above her tits. They were barely big enough for a decent titty fuck;
nevertheless Danny enjoyed rubbing his dick between her boobs.

They heard a noise from the corridor. A door was being opened and somebody
walked around. Pia's eyes widened with shock. Her body stiffened and
she even started to tremble. Danny listened intently and looked at the
door. He bent down to hide in the shadow of the sofa's back. Pia closed
her eyes as if this could prevent her from being seen. A shape appeared
in the doorframe. Danny held his breath. The shape came nearer. Not the
heavy outline of Pia's husband but a smaller and slimmer one. The figure
walked into the shine of the neon lights and it was Martin. He was all
nude and a red neon glow illuminated his erect cock and his smoothly
shaved balls. Danny breathed a sigh of relief. When Martin realized
what was going on, it was his turn to be shocked. Danny made signs to
remain silent and pointed to the box of condoms on the table. He wanked
the boy's cock a few times and smeared the pre-cum round the glans.
Martin rolled a condom down his dick and Danny pointed at Pia's cunt
and made a 'fucking' sign.

A moment later, Martin inserted his boner into his aunt's slit. Pia opened
her eyes and looked a bit confused. 'Relax, it wasn't your husband, Pia',
Danny told her. He resumed rubbing his prick along her tits. 'Martin
is very good at it, isn't he?', he remarked. 'Martin? What's going
on? What are you doing? Ohmegawd!', she exclaimed. Pia couldn't see her
nephew. Only his hands were visible and it looked to her as if Danny had
grown an extra pair of them, grabbing her tits and rubbing his prick.
Martin pounded her even faster than Danny did before. She started her
little screams and Danny had to muffle her again. Pia's body was shaken
by her nephew's powerful thrusts. Pre-cum oozed out of Danny's cock and
she smeared it on her tits, which were already glistening of her sweat in
the alternating neon lights. A third orgasm filled her body and seemed
to last forever. When she opened her eyes, Danny's cock no longer ran
about her boobs. He was kneeling on all fours above her belly and Martin
was close behind him. 'Slowly, Martin', she heard Danny say.

Pia heard the boys' bodies slap together in a now familiar rhythm and
saw Martin's hands gripping Danny's waist. Danny's hard and glistening
cock was swinging around, dripping a dancing string of pre-cum on her
belly. Not long after, an astonishing amount of jizz splattered from the
groaning boy's penis and poured down her body. His first squirt had shot
up to her hair, the main load filled the valley between her mounds. After
one more minute, moaning Martin charged his condom with hot semen.
Exhausted laid Danny down on Pia's cum-coated chest and kissed her.
Martin did not retract his dick and tried to rest on Danny's back. Pia
protested, the two boys would be to heavy for her. So they sat up.

'My husband will kill me. He will kill all of us. Slowly and painfully.',
she told them. The boys nodded wearily. 'By the way, why don't we go
to my room? It's safer there.', suggested Martin. 'Good idea.', said
Danny. Shortly after, the three sat on Martin's creaking old bed and
examined each other in the light. Pia and Danny looked adventurous. Fresh
and drying cum covered their chests, Pia's hair looked rumpled and
she shrieked a little when she discovered a drop of the white stuff
even there. Only Martin looked decent, just the gleam on his dick gave
a hint. For a while, they sat silent. Pia said: 'Martin, I did not know
you were..', Danny interrupted her: 'Until this evening, he didn't know
either. But now, he can't get enough of it, right?'. He bopped him in
the side, grinning. Martin chuckled and slapped him on the back.

'You're sick', remarked Pia, shaking her head. 'Yeah, but you liked it
being fucked by your nephew, didn't you.', answered Danny. 'I know this
was sick.', she said. After a moment she continued: 'While we are at it,',
she said and hesitated. 'Yes?', asked Danny assuringly. 'No, I can't tell
you, forget about it', she replied, studying a lint on the sofa. 'We
already know you're a slut.', he said grinning, 'tell us!.'. It took
the boys some time, but finally she confessed: 'I've never been fucked
by two guys at once. I wonder if you and Martin..?'. The boys looked
amazed at her. Danny answered: 'I think it's cool. What do you think,
Martin?'. 'I don't think it's a good idea, Pia', said the boy. 'Oh,
don't be a killjoy. You can have her ass. We know you like asses.',
pleaded Danny. Martin looked to the ground. His cock had its own mind
and was already growing.

'I know what he needs.', claimed Danny; 'Look at us, we are coated with
jizz and you're the only one who is clean and smug.'. He pushed Martin back
on the bed and knelt alongside him, stroking his own dick. He grabbed Martin's
dick and wanked it, too. Martin giggled and tried to escape. 'Hold him,
Pia!', called Danny. Pia fetched his thighs and put her weight on them,
also taking over the task of wanking the restrained boy. He chortled
and snorted, beaming at Danny who was wanking himself and resorted to
tickling his squirming friend. Pia now licked the boy's cock and fingered
his ass hole. When she wanked him again, there was some pre-cum running
from his dick, which she immediately rubbed around his belly button.

'A good start', commented Danny. He shoved his dick in Martin's mouth,
muffling his excited laughter. Martin wriggled for escape without success.
'He has farted!', complained Pia and Danny threatened him jokingly: 'If
you do this again, I'll put my cork in.'. He pulled back his dick from
Martin's mouth who laughed all the time. Martin grabbed Danny's prick
and stroke it until it started splashing the white goo on his chest.
After the squirts subsided, Danny helped Pia licking and wanking the
boy. Shortly after, Martin began shooting squirt after squirt on his
chest and stomach. Danny and Pia milked the rest of cum out of him and
distributed it on his relaxing body.

Now that Martin had his share of jizz on him, they laid next to each
other and relaxed. The smell of drying cum filled the room. Danny was
between Pia and Martin who snuggled against him. While the boys looked
a bit spent, Pia was still aroused. She fondled Danny's inner thighs
and started working on his dick which had not gone flaccid for some
reason. 'Wait, Pia. It hurts.', said Danny to Pia's surprise. 'Just
give me some time.', he explained. 'How do you do this?', asked Martin.
Danny opened his eyes and looked at him. Martin pointed at his cock. 'Oh,
that. It's strange. It's like that since I am here. Maybe Pia has put
something in the sandwiches?', he answered. 'I wish, I had something
to put in sandwiches with that effect.', she sighed. 'Speaking of
sandwiches..', said Martin with a sporting twinkle in his eyes, 'You
two should change places.'.

Pia forced herself between the two boys with an expectant smile. Danny
complained a bit about this horny family. When she had settled in,
Martin ventured to put his hand between her legs. He explored her wet
cunt and rubbed inexpertly around it. Pia guided his hand and showed
him how he could satisfy her better. Her breaths became deeper as the
boy was working on her. He touched her round breasts and his fingers ran
over the dark areolas. Pia took his cock, which was growing in her hand.
Martin leaned forward and sucked her nipples charily. She ran her
fingers through his curly hair. Without leaving her tits, he placed
himself between her thighs put his dick on her cunt. With a free hand,
Pia fumbled for something on then shelf behind the bed. Someone tapped
at her shoulder. She turned around and saw Danny smiling and waving a
condom. She smiled back and took it from him. Soon Martin wore
a dark rubber on his cock and tried to insert it into Pia's wet hole.

After a while, Danny said: 'You're not hard enough. Pull it out and
let me help you.' The boy retracted his half solid cock and looked
bashfully at him. Danny took the boy's rubber-clad member and jerked it
forcefully. Then he took it in his mouth and sucked it, his head bobbing
quickly up and down. Martin groaned and fondled his nipples. A minute
later, Danny stopped sucking and Martin had perfectly hard boner. He
started fucking Pia again and this time Danny kneaded Martin's ass. 'You
two turn me on.', remarked Danny, 'May I join your little party?'. Pia
smiled at him, clenched Martin's upper body and and rolled around. After
that, she was lying on him and rode his cock. Danny had already placed a
condom on his dick and got behind the two. 'Stop it for me', he said and
placed his cock on her ass crack. He petted Martin's balls and carefully
pushed the tip of member into her ass hole. The condom was lubed, but at
first Pia did not manage to relax. He tickled her a bit and suddenly he
was inside her.

Danny did not move. He just watched how Pia's ass slowly went down on
their pricks. From time to time, she would lament about Danny's prick
hurting her, but she continued sliding down on it. Danny looked to the
ceiling with an expression of pure joy. Pia's tight ass hole squeezed his
dick just the way he liked it. When her ass finally touched his belly,
she started moving softly forward and backward. Her tits moved along
Martin's body who was already panting. The boys felt as if they were
thrusting her in perfect harmony. They could feel each other's prick
through Pia's guts and their balls were touching. Martin's old bed
creaked dangerously under its passionately rocking load. Danny cupped
Pia's tits from behind, placing kisses on her neck whenever he had the
opportunity. She accelerated her pace. She started sweating and Danny
almost lost his balance under her movements. Pia made her little screams
again every time she slid down on the boy's rods.

Martin felt her wetness on his balls, while he fondled Danny's sack. He
could hear her ass slapping against Danny's thighs and belly. Now,
he sat up as far as he could and tried to suck her moving tits. Danny
helped him by exposing the erect nipples and aiming them at his mouth.
She whimpered when the boy's tongue touched her. He couldn't do more
than that, as she was moving fast. Danny started to answer her screams
with deep grunts. This went for minutes until Danny tried to thrust her
and his cock slipped out. She stopped her movements, heavily breathing
and sweating, until the boy had inserted it once more. She flinched and
when Danny's stomach hit her ass again, moaned loud and held herself at
Martin's shoulders. They could almost see how a wonderful orgasm ran
through her gleaming body. She moved again and didn't stop moaning. When
Danny started looking nervously at the door after a while, she finally
dropped to the side.

Danny slipped out of her and removed the still empty condom from his
cock. Martin followed his example. Pia lay between the two and had
her eyes closed. She looked happy and had a broad, satisfied smile
on her face. A bit later she felt the boys' knees touching her as if
they were kneeling at her sides. Somebody was teasing her nipples which
went immediately hard again. 'You were awesome, boys.', she told them,
her eyes still closed. 'It felt so great.. That must have been at least
three or four times I..'. She got no reply. Her tits were being kneaded
by strong hands.

She finally opened her eyes and looked up. The boys were hugging
above her. She could see Danny and Martin cock to cock, jerking them
slowly. From time to time one of them would knead her tits with a free
hand. They were deep-kissing and breathing heavily. She reached up and
caressed the boys' ass cheeks. The stopped kissing and smiled down at
her, without stopping to wank each other. Without warning Martin came
and shot a white arch of cum with his first squirt. When the liquid hit
Pia's chest, Danny came as well. His first shot went even higher before
splattering on Pia. Their remaining squirts covered their abs with
cum. It ran down to their balls before dripping in Pia's belly button.
She giggled.
21 comments

anonymous readerReport 

2011-03-15 03:27:36
Omg this story was amazing. Write more!

Anonymous readerReport 

2008-06-16 08:54:56
thank you, thank you, thank you. I loved it.

READERReport 

2008-04-07 14:57:55
I loved it, cock and pussy together ....sucking and fucking.

READERReport 

2008-03-21 11:54:06
great story love bi sex here

READERReport 

2008-01-14 06:41:00
So becuase of the assholes that were too shit-brained to read the subject of the story it is a 7.4 rather than the deserved 9-10/10?
Bullshit i say

Great story man, keep writing and hope you ignore the son-o-bitches that are too idiotic to STOP READING WHEN THEY REALISE WHAT ITS ABOUT

lol

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