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Introduction:

its kinda short and more will happen in part 2
Joshua was 28 and Kristi was 15...Joshua was kristi's brothers friend, he was 6"1 ,white,muscley but not to muscley,blue eyes,and he was very hot alot of girls wanted him.
kristi was hot to she had dark hair,was white,brown eyes,and 5"3 ...she was still a virgin

Joshua wanted kristi bad and her brother ,david knew it.They talked about her alot and one day joshua asked kristi out on a date ....he came to pick her up and they went to the movies and everything went perfect,after that they went to the movies every friday
He asked her to be his girlfriend and they started officially going out

One day joshua picked kristi up and took her to his place ,deciding it was time to make a few things clear. Kristi sat on his bed cuz he asked her to and closed her eyes.
He got a belt and put it next to the bed where she didnt really see it. Then told her to open her eyes.
"Baby,there are a few things in our relationship that we need to talk about"
"umm ok what?"
"Well first of all i want you to know who's in charge"
she looked at him shocked "excuse me?"
"Baby your my bitch got it? you do as i say when i say"
"i dont think so, its so over"
"no,its not over" he came over and pushed her to where she was lying down then turned her over
"what the hell do you think your doing??"
he grabbed the belt "just showing you who the boss is"
he brought the belt down hard and she cried out "Now,tell me bitch who is the boss?"
she started crying "please stop it"
"No,i wont stop im gonna ask you who is in charge and your gonna answer , "you are master and im your dirty bitch and im just here to please you" ok?"
"Now, who is in charge?"
"please stop this"
he brought the belt down even harder and kept belting her "who's in charge?"
"you are master and i mm your dirty bitch and imm jjust here to please you"
"who's in charge?"
"you are master and im your dirty bitch and im just here to please you"
he asked again and again and she answered
"good slut, now from now on you are to call me master and whatever i want wherever i want it you are to obey you understand?"
"yes master"
"mmm good slut "
he smiled and let her up
"Now did you enjoy that?"
"yes master"
he kissed her "ok now lets get you home"


On friday joshua came by and picked kristi up because she was going to spend the weekend with him, he came in gave her a kiss and told her to go out and wait in the car. She went out and waited in the car for about 20 minutes before he came, he smiled at her and got in.
"What took so long"she asked
"i was just doing stuff slut"
they drove to his house then went into his house where he told her to get on her knees
"ok good bitch, now beg to suck my cock"
"please let me suck your cock, please.."
"mmmm please what?"
"please let me suck your cock master"
he unzipped his pants and pulled down his boxers "suck"
she licked the tip of his cock and made little circles with her mouth then started sucking the tip working down ,she slowly sucked and moved her head down, sucking soft at first but then she started sucking harder
"MMmmmm yeah baby" joshua moaned
kristi sucked harder and had his whole cock in her mouth now ,even though it was a bit difficult
she started moving her head up and down making slurping sounds as she sucked
joshua's cock had a little precum on it and when kristi tasted it she pulled back disgusted
"whats that?" she asked pointing
joshua was kinda mad she had stopped so he put his hands through her hair and pulled her head back to his cock "open up cockslut" she opened her mouth and started sucking again ignoring the taste, josh started fucking her mouth
"ok bitch when i cum if you dont swallow it all im gonna belt you" kristi sucked harder and he came in her mouth , she swallowed it but a little bit got out
"oops bitch you didnt get it all ,now do you remember what i said would happen if you didnt swallow it all?"josh asked
kristi nodded
"and what did i say?"
"master ,you said you would belt me"kristi obediently replied
"good cockslut ,now go lay on the bed belly down"
she hesitated and he slapped her "go now, and this time first take off your pants and underwear"
she went to the bed and started taking off her pants and then underwear afraid of what would happen if she disobeyed then she layed on the bed with her butt facing him
he came up behind her with his belt and landed a hard slap on her ass
"ouch, damn that hurt"
"what did you say slut?"
"nothing master" he landed another slap on her ass
"mmm you like this dont you?"
"yes master"
he hit her with the belt again and again
"get up bitch" she got up
"ok now take your shirt off"
she obediently took her shirt off
"bra"
she took her bra off and then waited totally naked in front of him
he grabbed her breast and squeezed it hard then did the same to the other one ,tweeking the nipples, nice tits perfect for a slut like you"
"thank you master"
"MMmmm your a gonna be a great slut"
he french kissed her "ok now you can go to bed,but keep your clothes off"
7 comments

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2006-05-25 01:25:00
the story line is good. young girls in relationships with older men are often manipulated. problem one: she wouldn't know how to suck a dick and would probably scrape her teeth and hurt the guy. problem two: is isn't feasible that a guy is going to take a belt to his friend's virgin sister. problem three: why didn't the parents protest their 15 year old dating a 28 year old? problem four: the grammar is awful.

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2006-01-25 11:36:13
OK start. She gave in too easily. Some rebellion would add to the realism.

READERReport

2006-01-10 14:58:15
Start with the basics and work your way up. Ignore those who down play your stories. The best way to get better is by writing and learning. This storycould use a bit more background info as well as. Try to be as believable as possible. She would have needed a more before submitting.

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2005-11-24 04:58:21
awful. simply awful.

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2005-11-23 17:03:53
if you know you don't av talent don't write.

this was a waste of time

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