Hi guys! I just realized that Part 1 was working for some, but not all, so here is the fixed Part 1. Same text from before.
Hi, my name is greensauce, and this is my first story.
Let me start off with saying that life really is a dream come true. I have been blessed, and I am fortunate enough to write down what happened to me. Before I start the story, let me tell you a bit about my character.
I will be a 14 year old guy named Sam that enjoys school, playing music (percussion, guitar, bass), listening to music, and Jiu Jitsu. I am 5'8 and I have hazel eyes and short brown hair with a muscular mesomorphic build.
Now let's begin.
I am drifting through a void. My body is weightless and I am at peace. I feel safe and secure. I drift for what seems like hours, but I don't mind. I have nothing on my mind but blissful thoughts. I finally come to a stop as a harsh screech tears through the air. A bright green light flashes in front of me. It reads 7:15.
I'm brought back to reality and my eyes open. I feel as if I slept for days. I lay there until I realize my alarm still beeping. I turn it off and get ready for school.
I shower and put on my Beatles shirt along with a pair of cargo shorts. I sit down with my mom and my brother for breakfast. My mother, who is slicing apples and listening to worship music on the stereo, looks up and smiles at me.
"Morning, hun!" She says.
"Good morning, mom!" I reply.
My brother grumbles a greeting through mouthfuls of food.
Once I finish my breakfast of bacon apple cake, I brush my teeth and walk to the bus.
I arrive at my stop, and stand awkwardly with the other moody teenagers.
As I step on I immediately see my friend, Anette.
I walk down the aisle and sit with her. She smiles at me as I greet her.
Anette is a good friend of mine. I moved to this city about a year ago, and she was one of the first people I met.
She is a petit Asian girl with long black hair, and an adorable face. She is an artist as well as a gymnast, and her body definitely shows it.
"How has your morning been?" I ask.
"Awesome. I'm really looking forward to the game tonight" she replies.
Oh yeah, the football game. The one that the entire marching band including me has been anticipating.
"So am I. Hopefully this will get the instructors to calm down."
We talk more along the way to school. About sports and the exciting fun we're having as Freshmen.
She tells me about Art and Gymnastics and I tell her about Jazz and Marching Band.
"I'm really enjoying portfolio art, and my portrait skills are really improving. Maybe one day along the road, I can paint you like one of those French GUYS!"
At that, we both laugh, and I reply with "Make sure to put a lot of emphasis in my mallet!"
Oh, percussion jokes...
We both talk and joke for a while. After about five minutes, we hit a major pothole, which sends Anette flying onto me. I lurch forward, which sends our bodies into a tangle. I immediately feel my face get hot, but I like it. I straighten myself up, but she stays down. She moves her hand up towards my crotch, and rubs her fingers on it. It all happens so fast and unexpectedly, and I begin to grow a lot. I am now very turned on, and enjoy every second of this. At that, she stops and looks up at me with a smirk.
She kisses it, and straightens up, now with a 1,000 watt smile.
I can feel myself smiling too.
I look at her now with a burning passion for every inch of her body.
She stares at me the same way.
I reach for her pants. I start at her knee, and slowly work my way upwards. Her breath hitches, which drives me crazy. I never knew she was like this! But I take advantage. My fingers rub her gently, caressing what's under her jeans. Her face indicates that she loves it, but I knew she wants more. I move my fingers into her pants, and push her panties aside. I can feel her moisture, and it feels great. Since I've never gotten this far, I wanted to savor the moment. Now, she is moaning, and many people glare at us, so I give her one final twitch of my finger, and pull it out.
We sit there trying to continue our conversation for about five more minutes, then we arrive at school. Even though she has the window, I let her move first so I could grab her firm, tight ass, which hardened me quite a bit. We walk out together, and then walk to class separately.
For the rest of the day, no matter how interesting class is, I can't get my mind off of Anette. I want her VERY badly, but I know I have to control myself, so I decide to push her to the corner of my mind for the rest of the day.
Now at 7th Period, I can't contain my throbbing erection, which seems to grow every minute. I was counting the milliseconds until I got out, but what was I going to do with it? I can't fuck her in school, but that would be fun. I think back to her moist pussy. The warm wet feeling of it drives me crazy. Now my head starts to hurt. "Ugh, three more minutes." I tell myself. I try to finish my work, but my head starts to throb even more than my dick. I begin to sweat. "What's happening to me?" I wonder. Now I'm trembling and I feel like I'm about to pass out, so my hand shoots up. "Cn' I please th' bathr'm?" is all I hear myself say. My teacher looks shocked, but she lets me go.
I stumble down the hallway, and throw myself into the bathroom. I fall into one of the stalls, and undo my pants. Once I pull the zipper down, my cock springs out, only now it is about a foot long and growing. This is enough to send me out cold.
When I wake up, I look around to see... Nothing. Not a thing but whiteness all around. It looks a lot like the void from my past dreams, but this time it's... Different. It feels more energetic. I feel more in touch with the dream than before.
I look down and see that I'm wearing a white skinsuit of some kind. It feels very sleek to the touch, and very cool. I take a step forward, but realize that there is no ground there. I fall through nothingness. I know that I would normally be frightened, but this place does not give me fear. I come to my senses, and stop falling. I see that I can fly in this place. It's as if anything is possible. I try to imagine ground in front of me, and it appears. I walk upon the ground, admiring the feel of my feet on it. I then imagine of how fun it would be to have a trampoline here. Immediately, a large black trampoline materializes in front of me. I am amazed at my creative abilities, and climb onto it. I jump about 20 feet into the air, then fall down on my feet. I am astounded by this wonderful dream.
"I'm in Heaven!!!" I shout at the top of my lungs.
I then hear footsteps behind me. I turn to see Anette standing there completely naked.
"Close," she says "But this Paradise has a naughtier touch to it."