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Introduction:

the galaxy is at war and is in need of protectors
The year is 3033 and the galaxy is in need of guardians to protect

We start off on the planet trench were their is a baby boy. The names of the parents were Jack and Lucie shadow. yes i know what you are think what a bad name for a family but what you don't know is that this two were the oldest on the planet at the age of 500 years old they had both meet in the war of 2050. the war was over a box with unimaginable power that it could destroy a solar system in a matter of seconds and still have power left. Jack and Lucie were sent from opposite sides to get this box so called the box of Pandora, yes i know a bad name for a box but it was the best i could think of. Jack and Lucie were sent to get the box but unbeknownst to them the empress and the emperor both knew that they would meet in hope that they would kill each other but something happened instead of kill each other they fell in love.

let me go back to the began as you are probably wondering how all this started it was the year 2020 mankind had just built their first star explore and jack was sent to over look its maiden flight but jack was not human in fact he was not even a bit human he was a Umbra or shadow in human. His race were once might being that were worshiped by the humans until they were betrayed by one of their own giving mankind knowledge that allowed them to kill. The Umbra fought with man for over 3 centuries but they were slowly die out as they were all getting to the end of there lives. The oldest was 10,000 years old which was pretty old for the Umbra.

As the Umbra were dying out they did one last action before they were all killed they created two. A pair of Umbra and set them to sleep until it was time for them to wake up this was 500 years ago from the present day. When Jack and Jucie woke up they were both in a lab on different sides of the planet. Jack woke up in a clean and brightly light lab in side his pod, were as Lucie was less fortunate and woke up in a dirty and not as brightly light lab. The lab looked like it had seen better days and looked like it had once been a pretty good lab by the equipment that was lying around on the floor.

Jack had awoke in a lab that looked like it was just built by the number of new equipment in it or this lab was just better kept. He also notice that he was moved out of his pod as he did not feel the worms that his pod gave him. Jack tried to sit up but he was hold down. he tried to see what kept him to the table, but all that he saw were wire of different thickness placed all over his body as he started to struggle to get up doors on both side of the room which were never there when he looked, bursts open with soldiers came in with guns start to line the walls. when on of the soldier said that it was OK for them to going in lab boys dress in suits and white lab coats came thought. As one of the lab boys came up to Jack,he was going to ask were and what was happening when he felt a pinch and then blackness as he was injected, with with some drug that put him to sleep for a bit. When jacks head hit the table the lab boys started to get to work to try and find out what and who he was.

Lucie was a bit better off but not by much as when she sat up she was not bound to a bed but bound to a cold and metal table with crude equipment on both side of the table which by the looks of it had seen better days. Lucie was looked around the room when she saw that the was one door in front of her and a lot of item that had also seen better days. when Lucie was about to try and get out of the table the door in front of her opened and a man the looked like he had drunk one to many beers came thought with a few other people, which by the looks of it were dressed in a crude manner looked like they were dressed in medieval clothing. The man steeped up to Lucie was about 5ft 8 with long black hair, slender frame, big boobs and was pretty will tanned. When the man get closer Lucie she could smell he had been drinking and it was not a pleasant smell even for an Umbra which have higher sense so to you ir would smell sick, but to Lucie it smelled like he claimed out of a dumpster then toke a shower with alcohol it was that unpleasant as he got close she heard him say " OK miss there was another like you but we could not get to him in time before he was taken by the us. He is also being tested on." Lucie was about to ask were she was she to felt a pinch as she was put to sleep to run test on her.

In the other lab Jack had woken up and now was in a room with a mirror or at least he thought it was a mirror one door on one of the walls and a bed in the corner. Jack was about 6ft 11 black hair that was cut short but he was ripped. Jack as about to walk over to his bed when the door behind him opened and a guy about 5ft 10 black greasy hair and fat around the middle. he also looked like he was high up in the chain of command. Their was also something that Jack did not like about him, it was as if the man was their to use Jack to win wars or test weapons on. Jack was about to ask when and were he was when the man put up a hand to stop him from talking, " do you know who you are and were you came from" he asked. Jack just shook his head. He sighed the Man then introduce him self " ok well my name is John and we found you in a pod in the middle of the Atlantic I am the presidents right hand man". John ask Jack "what what is your name". Jack being Jack "I will tell you my name if you tell me where am I", "You are in the middle of the Artic circle, the year is also 2018 if you were wondering."," do you know why when we try to find out what you are our equipment breaks when we turn then one or they break when we try to cut in to you."

"sorry i don't know what I am all that I know is my name". Jack said Lair thought his teeth, as his Pod told him every thing when he was growing up and Jack being around 450 years old he was still classed as an infant to the Umbra and their long lived lived. Jack knew what he was and what his people could do but jack just when't along with it to try and get out of the lab. As Jack is lead through the lab he see his pod, the further he walks the more he gets the felling that something is not right, as he keeps walk he fails to see John stop, bumping in to the short man almost tripping when Jack looks for why they had stop he sees a door that readied train room. "OK Jack if you would like to steep in to the room you will see a table with weapons on it please pick one up and you will be told more when you're ready." when Jack walks in to the room the door behind him is locked and a table full of Weapons is raised from the floor. jack walks over to the weapons and spots some weapons made by his own people one being the Nano abruptionis or nano rift the nano rift from what the pod told him, it make the target look like they get sucked in to a black hole from the inside out but in fact it make the target start to collapse in on its self which gave it the name of Nano abruptionis. But there was one problem with it, it could only be fired by a Umbra or the person holding the weapon would be killed from the sudden surge of energy that entered the holders body. It can be hold by the Umbra as their body were design to take up huge amount of energy.

As Jack is about to pick out a weapons Lucie has just woken up in the same sort of room as Jack but it was not as nice and instead of a bed it was just a mattress on the floor. Lucie was looking around the room with her heightened senses. she could see that their were a few small cracks in the wall as will as something else. Lucie was about to see what it was a speaker turned on in her room. There was muffled talking on the other side as a man started to talk "do you know who and what you are." Lucie being Lucie "yes i know who I am but I don't Know what I am" trying to see what they would do. This caused the door to burst open with with looked like bodyguard with pistols pointed at her, as Lucie started to panic. Jack felt something at the back of his mind as if someone he Knew was in danger. Jack just ignored it picking up the Nano abruptionis, John looking from the other side of the shield looking on with interest as everyone that they asked to fire the weapon was killed instantly from a feed back. "OK now that you have chosen a weapons you are going to see target pop up I want you to shoot the hostile one and not the others OK Jack" . Jack just nodded as he turned he saw targets start to appear he started to shoot the ones that had guns and miss the one that had baby or other things in their hands. Jack started to feel something inside him it was a tingle that grow stronger and stronger with each shoot John just looked on in awe as Jack was shooting a weapon that other had died from.
5 comments

anonymous readerReport

2013-07-31 20:35:21
This might have been a good story buy I could not get past the bad English. Get a good proof reader!!

shadowtitanloReport

2012-10-27 07:49:05
thanks for the kind word dino im wirting the next one now im just taking a break to think up new things and i will keep things posted on how its going

anonymous readerReport

2012-10-27 04:27:43
Lets move to the nx chapter. I'd luv to see how the storyline goes. As you move, try reading the story b4 posting. As you progress juz take note of constructive comments and ignore personal comments. You'll improve.

Take Care
Dino

anonymous readerReport

2012-10-26 19:48:12
Read some of the higher-rated stories. Notice that attention is paid to capitalization, punctuation and grammar. Learn the basics before wasting my time.

shadowtitanloReport

2012-10-26 14:08:51
this is the same as the first one just forgot to put revised im starting the second one now i will probably be up tomorrow or in 3 days time as im having problem with the word and how to word it

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