Gender: Male Age: 18 Location: Oregon
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A few days ago I had just gotten my license, I was so pumped that I didn't even remember that I had no car, and no money to buy one
I didn't really have a job either, I babysat for some neighbors but the pay was crap. I didn't like any of their kids either, they were all little brats who pissed and shat everywhere.
My brother would occasionally lend me his car, a 1997 Pontiac, but it was crap and beaten to shit. And plus, it never felt right driving someone else's car... The individuality of having a license all kind of fades away when it isn't even your car.
I eventually started mowing lawns and doing other house hold chores for my dads friend, David.
David was a nice man, nice house, great job, awesome pool, a NICE car, but no family. He also had a cute dog named Cookie
I envied the guy.
I had saved up about $650 and was looking around the neighborhood for any cars to buy. I saw a station wagon for sale, $479.
I laughed at myself, realizing that I was about to make myself into a soccer mom. I quickly shook the idea of getting this girl-repellant car, and walked home.
One night during dinner, my dad asked if any car opportunities had popped up. I told him no, and that I would keep looking. He quickly looked at me with enthusiasm, telling me about a car he saw for sale down the street.
So after dinner, we walked down the street and saw the car he was talking about.
It was a nice SUV, pretty cool when you have a lot of friends to drive around.
I immediately looked to my dad and told him I was ready for this car.
We walked up to the car and saw that there was a girl standing on the other side.
She smiled at us, "Hey! Are you guys the owner of this car? I'm interested in buying it!"
My heart jumped. "Um no, we were also interested in getting it."
She looked a little upset, "well I've been saving for 2 months to get a car and I was here first, so..."
I looked at my dad, who looked at me and chuckled
"Not my problem Son"
I quickly walked towards the door and rang the bell, and out came a elderly woman with a cane. She looked at me and asked in a quiet voice "yes?"
"Hello miss, I'm interested in your car, I have about $650 and would love to buy it."
"oh I'm sorry son, but I can't sell it for that price..."
Fuck! This old hag was screwing me out of an awesome car!
I walked over to my dad who quietly whispered "$650? Really son? I thought you said $6,500"
He laughed and walked home.
I soon followed, pissed off at how this turned out.
I glanced over at the lady and saw her talking to that girl, she was smiling and nodding a lot, then the girl walked into the house and the doors shut.
That bitch... She's buying the damn car.
About a month passed and I kept saving up for a car, awaiting the day an opportunity would arise
I kept doing yard work and such for David, I hadn't been in his house in a while, he hadn't really been home much. He usually just came home, paid me, then ran off to God knows where.
One day he wanted me to take his dog for a walk. I enjoyed time with Cookie, so I agreed, no questions asked.
We walked for about an hour, and then I decided it was a good idea to get on home before it was dark.
Cookie, being the little horn dog he is, noticed a Labrador retriever and ran after her, with naughty intentions I presume.
Now I haven't been to the gym in a while, so catching Cookie would be no easy task.
I sprinted after Cookie and the lab for about two blocks before seeing an SUV stop in the middle of the road. A girl popped out of the car and whistled with her fingers
"Here cookie! Come here boy!"
I watched as Cookie turned around, tail wagging rapidly. He ran towards her and jumped into her arms. She put him in the car and drove off.
"Holy shit!" she just fucking robbed Cookie!
What would David say? I just lost his dog to some stranger, how would he ever forgive me? And more importantly, who would pay me a shit load of cash to basically do chores?
My head was spinning, but all my body did was run after her.
I chased her car down for about 5 more blocks, and as she finally stopped and parked in a driveway, she noticed me and laughed.
I ran up to the car and gasped for air, hands on my knees trying to gather up something to say.
I looked up at her with furious eyes
She looked at me, now slightly annoyed.
"What do you want?"
I was finally able to say something
"Give me... Back... The damn dog!"
She looked puzzled
"Umm, he isn't yours, this is my friends dog, I found him in the streets just now."
"that's because I was walking him for my neighbor! He's my responsibility"
"Your neighbor?" she looked at the house she'd parked in front of
"You mean his?" she said, pointing at the house
I hadn't noticed that I had ran all the way back to David's house.
"Yea, he's my dads friend, I work for him doing house work."
"Oh... I'm sorry, I didn't know."
She got Cookies leash and handed it to me, then got back in her car.
I felt a little bad, maybe I had hurt her feelings by yelling at her
"Thanks for catching him... I chased him a good 2 blocks, I don't think I would have caught him if it weren't for you. "
She smiled, "No problem, tell David I said 'hey'."
She buckled up, then drove off
I watched as she turned the corner and disappeared. Right then, i realized that she was the girl who bought the car i wanted. I just stood there in shock, and a little bit of anger hit.
I took cookie inside and then went home.
About a week passed and I was again walking Cookie.
Not even 10 minutes into our walk, that girl drove by again and slowed down to our pace.
"Hey! It's you!" she yelled out with a huge smile on her face
I looked at her, and she instantly stopped smiling, I guess she saw the anger in my face.
"Hey... What's the matter?"
We had both stopped now, and Cookie was impatiently pulling at the leash.
"Your the damn girl who bought this car I wanted!"
Now SHE looked pissed.
"Um, I actually HAD money, unlike someone."
"Still, I haven't been able to find any cars for sale, this was the best deal I could find!"
She looked away and laughed
"Well that's a shame, it's really a great car too. I would have taken you for a ride in it, but I guess you and Cookie can keep walking everywhere."
She drove off quickly, and left a bunch of smoke in mine and cookies faces.
I hated that girl, and I wanted a car more than ever now.
I finally gave up and bought that shitty station wagon I had seen a while back, and tried fixing it up as much as possible.
I stopped working for David since the whole point of that was to get a car.
I took the car out for a spin, it felt nice having my own car, even if it was a girl repellant.
I was trying to get used to driving again, since I hadn't driven in a whole now.
I was fixing my mirrors while driving real slow, when suddenly-
Hit a car.
"Son of a bitch!!!" was all I heard
I hit a hummer, and I prayed that whoever was about to get out of the car did not match the voice of that yell I just heard.
A huge 6'5 guy who's had to have weighed about 220 lbs of pure muscle walked out and banged on my window
"Come on shit head! Get out here right now! Youre going to pay for this shit!"
I got out of the car slowly.
"I'm really sorry sir, I didn't mean to, I was distracted"
"Well son of a bitch! you were distracted!? Look at this fucking dent fuck-tard!"
He grabbed my shirt and I swear I felt myself lift a few feet off the ground
My life was flashing before my eyes, I was about to get the beating of a lifetime!
"Put him down Joey!"
I opened my eyes and saw that girl walking over to us, she was walking Cookie.
"Jane, you know this faggot?"
"Yea, we're friends, look I'll pay for the damage, please just let him go."
"Well, alright, if you say so... Tell your brothers and sisters I said hi."
"sure will. Thanks."
He dropped me on the hood of my car and drove off.
I was still in shock of what had just happened, I looked at her and she looked at me like my mom did when I failed a test in high school.
"Are you kidding me? You had this car for how long? A day?"
She puts her face in her palm for second and laughs
"Thank God you didn't buy the SUV"
"Hey lighten up, I was distracted, it couldve happened to anyone"
"Yea, whatever dude, just watch the fuck out next time. I can't save your ass all the time."
She started walking away with Cookie and I suddenly felt like an ass
She saved me from a serious beat down and I hadn't even thanked her
"Hey listen, thanks for what you did, I was seriously about to piss myself."
She looked back and smiled.
"Be careful next time."
And then she walked away.
I inspected my car, not to much damage, barely even noticeable.
I drove home safely, and went to bed, thinking about that girl...
The next day I went over to David's house and asked him who that girl was
"Jane? She's a friend of mine, she lives not to far from here. She's been walking Cookie ever since you stopped."
"Sorry about that..."
"don't worry about it, it's not a problem. She does it for free and Cookie really likes her."
"Oh, we'll I was just curious, she saved my ass by getting me out of an ass kicking last night."
"Haha really? Well I hope you thanked her properly."
"I didn't really get too."
"Well look, here's her address. Why don't you go on over later, and thank her."
"Thanks, I will."
I hopped in my car and drove over to the address he'd given me, it was really close, about a 5minute drive.
I got to the house and walked up to the door. I rang the door bell and heard kids screaming. Jane answered the door, she looked like shit. She had food all over her, her hair was a mess, she was sweating and she looked exhausted.
She turned around and yelled at what looked like a bunch of kids wrestling
"Hey guys, be quiet! I'm talking to a friend!"
She closed the door behind her folded her arms.
"Hey, what's up?"
"I just wanted to say thank you for what you did last night, that was awesome of you and I feel really bad about how bad I've treated you."
She looked down and smiled
"Look, it's ok. I just didn't want to see you get your face beaten inside out."
We both laughed, and then it got quiet.
"Those kids, are they...?"
"No, they are my brothers and sisters, I'm raising them."
"Where are your parents?"
"They left us here, told me that I had to be a big girl and raise them all."
She was looking at her toes now
"They left us a bunch of cash, its lasted about 2 years, but its been running out lately. we were running out of options until David, your neighbor, walked by with Cookie and saw me crying on the door step. He asked me what was wrong and i told him everything. He's offered to help us out. He's been paying bills and basically living here to help me with them.
So that's why he was hardly home.
"He's really amazing, he helps so much and doesn't ask for anything in return."
She was crying now
She was fighting to hold it back, but I could tell she really needed to get the tears out. She probably hadn't cried to someone in a long time. She was a tough girl.
Suddenly I felt like a bad guy, this girl needed that car and I hated her for taking it.
"Look I'm sorry about how I treated you, and for yelling at you that one night."
She wasn't crying anymore, but her eyes were puffy and red.
"It's fine, I understand. I felt bad about taking the car, but I really needed it-"
I cut her off, "It's fine, I totally get it."
I smiled at her and then it was quiet again.
A little girl opened the door from behind her and pulled at her shirt.
"Joshua hit me!"
Jane looked at me then back at the girl.
"ok ok, we will deal with him in a second. Go inside, I'll be right there."
I smiled at the girl who smiled back at me
"Is he your boyfriend Jane?"
We looked at eachother and laughed
"No he is just a good friend mine."
"He looks nice."
The girl then quickly ran inside and left us alone.
"Well I really have to go, I have to take care of them."
"Yea ok, I'll let you go, thanks again."
She rubbed my shaggy hair quickly, trying to mess it up
She smiled, then shut the door.
A few weeks passed and I hadn't seen Jane in a while. I guess she had gotten to busy to walk Cookie.
I went over to David while he was watering his lawn.
"Hey David, where's Jane been? I havent seen her walking Cookie."
"Hey Steven. Well Jane is really busy with her brothers and sisters, I can't ask her to walk Cookie for me anymore, she needs to be at home taking care of them."
I was a little disappointed, I actually missed seeing her around.
"Oh, yea I understand. Well, thanks."
I started walking home when David called for me.
"You know Steven, she could really use a friend HER age, you know? I can't always be there for her, and she doesn't really have anyone to talk to. She had to quit school a while ago."
Damn... I had no idea what this girl was going through.
"I guess I could help her with some chores?"
David laughed, "I said a friend, not a maid. Someone to go out and hang with, see a movie, you know?"
"Yea, I get you."
"Look Steven, that girl is an angel, I really want whats best for her. I'm going to talk to her tonight and ask her what she thinks about me setting her you and her up on a little 'play date', she could really take a breather."
"Who will watch her brothers and sisters?"
"I will. I'll go babysit them, I'm not busy during weekends. You guys could stay at my place, here is a key."
He was trusting me with his house now? I guess he really did trust me.
"Like i said, she is an angel, so please take care of her. Show her a good time, ok?"
I nodded, I was actually getting really nervous at the thought of being alone with a girl for that long. I only had one girl friend and she cheated on me with my best friend, so I was still kind of bitter.
David handed me the keys, then went over to Janes house.
I went inside, admiring the interior of the house. It was super neat, well decorated, and smelled great.
I really didn't mind sleeping over at his place, I had a bunch of awesome stuff; the pool, the jacuzzi, the HD flat screen tv, awesome DVD collection,fridge with good food... Dude had it made.
About 20 minutes later, I see Jane pull up to the drive way.
She has a few bags, probably clothes and stuff.
I walk outside to help her, and she quickly displays shock in seeing me.
"umm, what are you doing here?"
"David told me to watch his place while he's gone. He wanted me to help you relax and have some fun. He says that you should really take a break from babysitting."
She looked at me a bit uneasy
"Oh really? And how are YOU supposed to help me have fun?"
I didn't know what to say
"Um, well I don't know... But if you want, I'll just go home and let you relax on your own."
She didn't reply, she just stared at me
I started walking home when she soon followed
"Wait, I'm sorry. Don't leave me alone..."
I looked at her, and she was staring at me as if begging me to stay
She was really afraid to be on her own.
"Ok, I'll stay. Lets get your stuff inside."
She suddenly became really preppy and giggly
She said, Handing me one of her bags.
While she unpacked all her stuff, I made us some dinner and put on a movie. She came into the kitchen quickly sniffing around, then looked at me
"That smell is from here? YOU can cook?!"
I laughed, "yes I can cook, pretty well too."
"wow! It looks great! Spaghetti, meatballs, garlic bread, mashed potatoes... That's a lot to cook in such a short time!"
"Well I usually cook for my family, so I've had a lot of practice"
She looked at me and smiled
"Well maybe you can cook for us sometimes, my brothers and sisters haven't had a good meal in a while, I can't really cook"
"Haha sure thing, I'll make them my special homemade mushroom soup!"
She looked at me and wrinkled her nose like if he just smelled something gross
"that sounds nasty."
We both laughed, and I promised her I'd let her taste it one day.
The rest of the night was pretty nice, we spent the evening watching comedy movies with Seth Rogen in them, he's one of my favorite comedians.
The night was filled with a lot of laughter, something I'm sure she hadn't done in a while. After a while, I noticed she had fallen asleep on my shoulder. I turned off the tv, and carried her into David's room.
I looked at her and noticed how cute she was. She had a really girly complexion. Cute dimples, a little mole above her cheek, soft smooth skin. She was really beautiful. I tucked her in, then grabbed a blanket and went to go sleep on the couch.
After about an hour of trying to sleep, I woke up to use the restroom. On my way back down, I looked into the room to check on Jane. She was asleep, she looked really comfortable. She probably hadn't had a good nights sleep for a while.
I smiled, then went back down stairs and tried to fall asleep.
About another hour passed, and just as I was falling asleep, I was woken up by Jane coming down stairs and waking me up.
"Hey, boy, are you awake?"
"Yea. What's up?"
"I heard a noise upstairs, I'm scared to go back up there."
She was shivering, it was really cold that night.
"ok, let's go check it out."
I grabbed the blanket and wrapped it around her, then proceeded to walk up the stairs cautiously
After about 5 minutes of inspecting, we found nothing.
"it must have been your imagination Jane, it's safe"
She looked at me with a worried face
"Can you sleep with me? I don't feel safe... I'm not used to being alone in bed, I usually have my sisters with me"
I was afraid to actually get in bed with this girl, I didn't really want to make myself look like a pervert in any way. She DID ask though...
"yay! Thank you so much."
She gave me a big hug which felt like it lasted for ever
She was so soft and warm, I didn't want to let go. She smelled really good, like strawberries.
I got in bed with my jeans and sweater, while she was in panties and a tank top.
"you sure your comfortable with this?" she asked
I smiled, "Anything to make you feel better"
She gave me the most cute little smile ever, then nodded.
"Thanks, but you don't have to wear all your clothes! I mean who sleeps in jeans and a sweater?"
"Uh, well I don't want to make things weird for you..."
"nonsense! I want you to be comfortable too you know."
I did as she said, and took off my sweater and jeans, leaving me in only my t shirt and boxers.
She giggled, then tucked herself in.
I got in bed and faced to opposite way of where she was, and closed my eyes. This was way better than a couch.
I felt her moving around and squirming, then she finally came up behind me and put her arm around my waist.
"Thank you, I really needed this..."
I was so shocked, I actually stopped breathing for a second.
"You have no idea what it's like to live in a house full of people, and feel so alone. No one to talk to that isn't a child. No one who knew what I was going through, besides David."
She was struggling to get the words out now
"I- I just really needed this."
She layed her head on me and closed her eyes.
I didn't say anything, and we both fell asleep.
I woke up and looked around the room.
She wasn't here.
I went down stairs and smelled something terrifyingly gross
I walked into the kitchen to find Jane in front of the stove, with smoke everywhere.
"I'm sorry! I'm so sorry!"
I got the fire extinguisher under the sink and put out what looked like horribly burned omelette.
The smoke cleared and Jane looked at me with the saddest eyes I had ever seen
"I'm so sorry, I tried to make you breakfast to thank you for last night! But I couldn't get it right, and-"
I grabbed her and held her tight
"it's fine... don't worry about it"
"Now you probably think I suck at cooking, don't you?"
"Haha of course not, I bet you can cook a mean bowl of cereal!"
She punched my arm and laughed.
We spent the rest of the morning cleaning up the mess, then took turns showering.
When I got out, I found all her clothes on the floor of the living room. I walked out to the back yard, which was huge, and saw her inside the pool swimming.
"Hey! Come inside! The water is really nice right now"
I couldn't say no to that!
I took off my shorts and shirt and jumped in with nothing but boxers
"Woo! That a' boy!"
I came up and brushed my hair off my face
She looked at me then splashed some water around
"Haha I totally forgot he had this pool, it's amazing!"
I had to agree with her on that one.
"Yea, he would let me come over all the time for a swim."
"Lucky! I wish I had a pool, especially in those horrible summer days."
We went on to talk about a lot of stuff, hopes, dreams, school, old friends, ect.
She started getting closer to me every few minutes, I guess she was getting pretty comfortable with me.
"So your girlfriend cheated on you?"
"Yea, back in highschool. She was a real slutty type of girl. Apparently everyone knew except me."
Suddenly it was quiet
Then we both bursted into laughter
"Yea, she was a bitch haha. So what about you? How was your 'love life' in school?"
"Well I never really experienced anything in the short time I was in High school, but in middle school, boys never noticed me."
I couldn't believe that, she was stunning, she had an amazing personality, beautiful features, and a smoking hot body
"I remember at a dance, back in middle school, the boys all had to choose a girl they wanted to dance with. I had found the prettiest dress ever, and I tried my best to look cute so that a boy would choose me to dance with. So I sat on the girl side for about an hour, and no one ever asked me to dance."
"I don't know, I guess they didn't think I was pretty, no boy has ever really shown any sort of feelings for me."
I couldn't believe what I was hearing.
"But you're so pretty, I totally would have danced with you if I was there!"
She looked at me,surprised. then she started getting angry.
Now I was confused
She stormed out of the pool, got her clothes off the living room floor, and locked herself in the bathroom.
I stayed there, completely unknowing of what I had done.
I got out, got dressed, and sat near the door of the restroom waiting for her to come out.
About an hour later she walked out, with an apologetic face.
I stood up and walked up to her
"What happened out there-"
Suddenly she grabbed the back of my head and pulled me close to her face and started kissing me
I kissed her back passionately, feeling my heart race with emotions
She stopped kissing me and put her forehead on my chest
"No one has ever called me pretty before."
I froze up. I guess she didn't know how to react to what I had said before
"Well you are, you're gorgeous. I would love to have danced with you."
She smiled back at me with a few tears in her eyes
"Thank you... Why are you being so sweet to me?"
"I don't know, I guess I like you."
I smiled at her, "Yea, your an angel."
She looked at me and bit her lip, trying not to cry again.
Again, she pulled me in for a kiss- but this time she was more aggressive about it. She needed this badly
She wrapped her legs around my waist as I picked her up and carried her to the bedroom
She wasn't paying attention to anything else except my lips
She was sucking them, licking them, biting them, everything
She kissed me like she had never been kissed... Which was probably true
She ripped off my shirt and started kissing my chest
She became a lot more gentle now, slowly licking and nibbling on my chest and nipples. She made her way down to my crotch and look up at me, as if asking for approval.
I silently nodded, and watched as she slowly pulled down my shorts and boxers, revealing my fully erect penis.
She examined it for a second, trying to figure out what to do first.
She began kissing the tip of the head, gently placing her lips on it. She licked it softly, making my cock jump from excitement. She noticed how eager my cock was, so she began licking up and down my shaft, and cradling my balls.
She finally placed my cock in her mouth, going all the way down in one go, and staying there for about 5 seconds, slurping and sucking all the saliva and pre cum off. Her chin touched my balls, and she stuck her tongue out to lick them as much as possible while gagging on my cock and her saliva. She pulled her head up slowly, looked at me in the eyes and whispered
"I want to please you better than anyone else ever will."
She took my cock in her hands and began jerking be really slow, then finally took my cock in her mouth again, and started moving her head up and down my cock, progressively getting faster. My cock throbbed in her mouth, and I felt my balls begin to tighten
She started slurping and sucking harder and harder until I finally couldn't take it anymore, and I came into her throat, string after string of cum flowing down her throat. She closed her eyes as I pushed harder and stuffed my cock down her throat further and further. She gagged, but held her ground- making sure she swallowed every last drop.
I finally pulled out my cock and she gasped for air
She licked her lips and smiled up at me
"Was it good?"
I smiled, picked her up, and kissed her.
She leaned in and grabbed my half hard cock and whispered into my ear
"I want you inside of me... I want you to be my first"
She was still rubbing my cock which began getting hard almost instantly
She licked my ear then bit my lobe.
She slowly backed up and turned around, facing away from me
She took off her shirt and unhooked her bra very slowly, I could tell she was nervous
She slowly pulled down her pants and revealed her white cotton panties. She then began to lower those too, and finally- she was completely naked
She stood still, not facing me.
I waited about 25 seconds before she finally said, "Well? Say something..."
I walked up behind her and put my arms around her waist
"You're so beautiful..."
I couldnt see, but I knew she was smiling.
I reached around and felt her unshaven pussy.She was soaked
I felt her clit, gently rubbing it with my index finger- then inserted my middle finger into her
She held her breath a few seconds, then let out a sigh
I kept fingering her, speeding up and becoming more aggressive and pushing in deeper into her tight virgin pussy
Her moans started getting louder, her breathing heavier.
"oh god, oh god..."
She was beginning to whimper, letting out little cries that sounded so sexy and cute at the same time
Finally her pussy tightened around my fingers and her body spasmed
She stopped breathing and moaning, she didn't make a sound
Her mouth was completely wide open and her eyes TIGHTLY shut.
It looked as if she couldnt breathe, when she suddenly said...
I laughed quietly and turned her to kiss her
She grabbed me close and jammed her whole tongue down my throat. She was incredibly horny and needed more.
I picked her up and placed her on the bed, I slowly got on top and prodded her pussy with the tip of my cock
"It's going to hurt..."
"Yea I know, every girl knows that... It's ok"
I began inserting it, and about half way in...
"Holy shiiiiit... Uuuunh, slower please."
After I was in, she was crying a little, but she wanted to continue
I slowly moved my hips back and forth, going in and out of her tight pussy
She groaned from pain, but she didn't want to stop.
I sped up and the groans turned to moans, moans of love and joy
I started to thrust harder, pushing as far as my cock could go.
"I'm going to cuuuuuum!"
He pussy tightened up and a bunch of her pussy juice poured from her and all over my cock.
I wasn't done though.
I flipped her over and got her on all fours
She looked back at me, smiled, then popped her ass in the air
I bent over and licked her pussy while jerking myself
God she tasted amazing
I quickly inserted my cock and started fucking her like crazy
Her ass was slapping against my balls loudly, and it felt great!
I reached around and began rubbing her nipples and her body began to shake
"Oh yea! Fuck me harder! Please!"
I started going as fast as I could, dripping sweat all over her ass and back
I pulled out my cock just as she came again, this time squirting on the bed sheets
She relaxed her body and layed her face on the bed with her ass still in the air
I grabbed her thighs and slowly pushed my cock into her asshole
She looked over at me in fear
"aaaah... Wait no! What are you- aaaah!"
I fucked her hard, not letting her ass adjust to the pain of my cock stretching her little tight pink asshole
She finally accepted it and layed her face on the bed, grabbing the sheets and pulling really hard and trying not to scream from pain
"I'm almost there..."
Her asshole was so warm and tight, I couldn't hold it in anymore
With one finally thrust, I let out all my cum into her asshole, releasing stream after stream of cum into her
I finally pulled my cock out of her asshole, which made a loud "PLOP" noise from being so tight
She got on her back and sat up straight
"well I didn't expect THAT"
"Yea me neither, I just kinda went for it... Sorry"
"it's ok, I guess. Next time go slow!"
We laughed, then cuddled up on the bed and began to fall asleep.
She looked up at me and said, "hey..."
"I just realized something"
"what is it?"
"I don't even know your name"
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