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This is my first day at work

It was my very first day at a school holiday progam, when i first set my eyes upon the beautiful jessica. At 10 she was amazing her tight ass and the mould where her tits will be it a few years,

While on a trip she asked me if i could take her to the toliet, i happerly went. As she went inside i stuck in and went in to the other cubeicle. i saw a hole in the wall of jess's toliet and i new this could turn out to be great fun.
i start by looking though the hole and saw her hairless pussy and my cock instantly went rock hard. So i ripped my jeans off and stuck my cock though the hole. then i felt spmething warm and wet on my cocktip, she waas sucking my 9 inch cock. This was the greatest moment in my life but it was only the start of todays happening. i new i was about to cum so i ordered her to open the door, she did it happily when she realised it was me. i instantly asked if she had ever had a period and she said yes, i was stocked with this result as it ment she was fertile. then i grab her forcing my cock into her virgin pussy, it felt amazing. as i took her hymen she screamed which only made me go harder. i could feel my cock pushing into her womb ask i erupted my cum in her

i knew she was enjoying it by her instantly engulfing my sperm covered cock when i pulled out. it was the best blowjob i've had a came instantly down her thort.

six Months Later

i found out my darling jessica was pregant when her mom approched me at the shop and congrudate me.
She said we are a really cute couple and the age difference wasn't that that bad as i was only 15. i went start over to jessicas house when i finshed shoping , we started making out when she open the door. we went to her bedroom and started fucking, this was a huge change from where we first fucked six months ago.

...........................................To be Continued.........................
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All feedback welcome as this is my first story and i want to know how i did
12 comments

anonymous readerReport

2013-08-10 20:00:41
I hate to criticize an author, because I've written many stories on this site, BUT this story is just dreadful. I don't know if you have any talent, but the least you can do is present something that can be read. This looks like a first draft by a kid in junior high. If you want to write you must learn that a first draft is NOT a finished story. Every draft must be proofread at least once. Had you done that you would have found (hopefully) many of the typos and/or misspellings. If you won't do that, don't waste everyone's time by writing junk.

anonymous readerReport

2012-04-23 12:38:12
U are a fool for writing such a stupid story.

Ghostrider939Report

2012-04-23 02:27:12
Do us all a favor - DO NOT CONTINUE. Pure rubbish.

anonymous readerReport

2012-04-21 06:43:57
I'm not sure if the format or the story was worse. Keep trying:)

anonymous readerReport

2012-04-21 03:56:42
Best story I've ever read. Keep writin you can becum a world famus aurthor. You orta write a book.

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