This is one of my old creations it's decent and comment on how I can make it better.
Early Apologies for my crappy grammar.
Ah, fuck. Another week wasted in my office. My short brown hair curls a little at the ends, I never comb it, and my skin is tan even though I don't leave my office much. I have two jobs at Innotech: Head Programmer, and I have to show any new trainees the way of things, whether they're just receptionists or actual programmers. A double paycheck is worth it though.
I walked towards the front of the giant Innotech building to grab the new trainees. One of the local colleges was sending kids to local businesses to get "field experience." Great, just fucktastic, I'll have people following me around all day – although they do loosen up the workload a little. As I looked through the list of names a few unique ones caught my eye. Naudia and Carlioto were the only names worth mention. I finally made it to the waiting room and almost laughed at how wide all their eyes were. I scanned the room and spotted one beautiful woman, creamy white skin, coffee brown hair, slender and at least a B cup. I went through roll call and found out that she was Naudia, a beautiful name to complement a beautiful body. As I explained the basics I decided to crack a joke. "Those of you who don't make the deadlines will be raped." My Scottish accent slurred the words a little. I had perfected my straight face over the years. I looked around and saw a glint of amusement in Naudia's eyes but she kept a straight face. "You guys need to loosen up a bit, can't take a joke," I said, still keeping my straight face. "Anyway follow me, and by the way, my name is Thomm."
I walked out of the elevator leading to the parking garage and I could hear someone swearing loudly. The sound finally led to Naudia, in what looked to be a piece of shit Honda. "C'mon, you piece of shit, start, goddammit."
"Need any help?"
She looked at me as if I was a knight in shining armor. "No, I think I'll be fine, I just need to get this piece of shit started."
"You sure? You might be here all night," I said.
"Might as well," she said and got out of the car. She followed me to the center of the garage and I stopped next to a Harley and pulled out my keys. When I threw her my helmet she said, grinning, "A geek with a Harley, never seen that before."
"So, where am I taking you?" I said, partially to break the semi-awkward silence.
"Remington, over by Cleveland Ave."
She hopped on and away we went.
If only I had a clue where this was going.
The next morning I awoke with a start and realised it was the phone and quickly answered it.
It was Chad, one of my co-workers.
"Hey man, there's a party on Saturday at 7:00. Everyone at the company's invited, you in?"
"Sure, I'll be there," I said groggily.
"Did you just get up? It's already 10:00!"
"I don't give a shit." I hung up the phone and fell back asleep. I had the day off, so I had nothing to worry about.
Saturday came and I found myself daydreaming about when I gave Naudia a ride home, didn't seem like a big deal at the time, but it felt a little too good when see held her body against mine. It was 6:59 and I walked into the company's colossal lobby looking for my friends Byron and Chad. Byron was the Head Graphics Manager and Chad was Customer Service, I had known them both since first grade. After an hour they left, so I went outside and sat on one of the various benches, I just sat there and stared at the full moon. A feminine voice broke me from my trance.
"Mind if I join you?" It was Naudia. I felt my heart skip a beat.
"Not at all." I sounded a lot more calm than I felt. "Have you ever just stared at the stars and appreciated the small things in life?"
"Thomm, do you mind if I ask a personal question?"
"Why are you... never mind, it doesn't matter," she said, starting to get up.
I put my hand on her shoulder and said "Nonsense, ask away."
She sat back down, looking a little bit more confident, and continued. "Why are you... Atheist?"
Ahh, she'd been asking around about me… amusing, to say the least.
"I'm just a man with too much time to think. My parents disowned me for it. So be it."
Her eyes met mine and I could see a caring, almost motherly look in them, like she wanted to reach out and hug me. Right then, she looked so beautiful, I couldn't resist. Everything in my mind told me to stop, that I was being an idiot, but for once I didn't listen. I reached out and pulled her into a soft, gentle kiss. I pulled back just long enough to look into her eyes, hazelnut, that shone beautifully with passion. I kissed her on the cheek and got up and told her that we would finish up at my place. I held her hand tenderly and led her to the parking garage. Ours were the only cars there, her Honda next to my Harley.
When we got to our cars she moaned, "Thomm, I need you. Now."
I looked back at her. Her cheeks were rosy and her hard nipples were poking through her thin, white blouse. I pulled her close to me, and then I gently laid her on the hood of her Honda and kissed her collarbone. I undid the buttons of her blouse and lightly bit her nipples. Her moans reverberated around the empty garage. My shaft was straining against my pants so hard it hurt, but I ignored it, only Naudia mattered. I sucked on her nipples while doing the zipper of her pants. They fell down to her ankles and I started kissing up her thighs to her lacy red panties. I noticed an especially wet spot on her panties, which were soaked, and started rubbing her slit through her panties until she moaned out in a breathless voice, "Stop teasing me Thomm, I want you inside me".
I pulled down the silken obstruction and pulled out my throbbing shaft. I slowly entered her, her walls contracting tightly around my member. I finally came to her hymen, and in one quick movement, pulled back and plowed through her innocence. She moaned loudly in pleasurable pain while I gently fucked her. "Faster, harder," she moaned breathlessly. I happily obliged and started to pound her as fast as my legs could go. Suddenly, she tensed up real hard, about the same time that my legs started to tremble and I felt my hot cum shoot up inside her, and a torrent of hot cum gushed out of her all over my shaft. I pulled out and licked all of the warm, white cum off of her pussy.
After about 20 minutes she finally got up off of her cum-laden hood and pulled up her panties and jeans, redoing all of the buttons on her blouse. She didn't bother to put her bra back on. She just threw it in her car and hopped on my Harley to go back to my place and continue our session.
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