This is my first story so please be gentle. Also, constructive criticism is appreciated.

First, let me introduce myself. I am Brian. I’m 17, about 5 foot 11 inches and have a muscular build. I’m not the most attractive guy around but every girl I’ve met thinks I’m sweet and funny. This is the story of the best day of my life.

It was the day after prom and I had had a very shitty night. I ended up going to the prom with I girl that I had no interest in simply to get my buddy (who was going out with my date’s best friend) laid. He was grateful but the night left me depressed and with a severe case of blue balls.

The girl that I wanted to go with, Chelsea, already had a date to the prom by the time I got up the courage to ask her. Chelsea was in my eyes, a goddess. She was about 5 foot 7 with the most beautiful brown eyes you have ever seen. But her eyes were not the things that made the boys notice her. She had the biggest tits in our entire school. They were easily DD’s. The rest of her body was nothing to disrespect either. She had somewhat of a thick build, not to say she was fat at all, just that she had an attractive amount of girth on her at about 130 lbs. She had shoulder length brown hair and to top it all off, she had a perfect round and tight ass.

Chelsea and I had been friends for a long time, since kindergarten. Unfortunately, this friendship was without benefits. Since I became interested in girls, Chelsea and I had never been single at the same time. I never told her how I felt about her, because in all honesty, I assumed that a girl like her would never in a million years be interested in me.

As I said before, it was the day after prom and I had to work. I had taken this shift over for a friend of mine who, lucky him, had gone to the prom with a girl that did put out for him. I worked at a locally owned restaurant busing and waiting tables. It did not have great pay but the restaurant was a hangout for most of the kids at my school so my job allowed me to socialize while I worked. About an hour into my shift, who walks in but Chelsea. She and her friend Clarissa walked in and sat at a table in my section.

Now if you were to rate Chelsea on a hotness scale from 1-10, she would easily be a 10 and Cassandra would be a 9.5. She had C cup tits, and was shorter and skinnier than Chelsea but her ass was much hotter at only about 95 lbs. She had green eyes and her hair was slightly shorter and darker than Chelsea’s. Now Cassandra was new to our school, she had just transferred here from out of state and she and Chelsea had become quick friends. I didn’t know her very well but whenever I saw her I gave her a smile and said hello and she did the same.

As soon as they walked into the restaurant, I went on break and joined them at their table. We talked for a while about the prom. The usual things came up, “the dj sucked,” “the food was awful,” “who hooked up with who,” “who got drunk” etc. Finally, when I had to get back to work Chelsea said, “hey me and Cassandra are gonna be hanging out all day at my house so you should stop by when you get out of work”.

I said, “that sounds great, I get out in a couple hours.”

I got up and took their orders and things went pretty smoothly until the end of my shift. I went home and showered as my job serves a lot of fish and after work I always end up smelling like I just came from the docks. I quickly cleaned up and drove over to Chelsea’s house. As I was driving I thought about what this invitation could mean. Thinking about me and two hot girls alone in a house got me hard. But then I realized that both Chelsea and Cassandra had boyfriends and after last night I assumed that things between them would have only got more serious.

As I pulled into Chelsea’s driveway, I found it odd that all the lights were out in all the rooms downstairs. I let myself into the house and yelled “Chelsea I’m here where are you?!” she responded, “me and Cassandra are upstairs just come on up!” I went up the stairs and quickly found Chelsea’s room as it was the only one with light coming from it. As I walked in, Cassandra offered me a beer and I accepted. Chelsea said “we were just about to walk a movie.” I asked, “what movie?” and she said that it was a surprise. After Chelsea put in the movie, she and Cassandra joined me on the couch with one of them on each side of me. As the movie started, I quickly realized that Chelsea had put in an extremely hardcore porno. As soon as the first scene started, I asked her what the hell was going on.

She responded, “both me and Cassandra dumped our boyfriends last night after prom. They got drunk and started hitting on other girls and we found them making out with some 9th grade girls.”

I said, “they must be fools to give up two extremely beautiful and sexy girls.”

Cassandra goes, “that’s what we were hoping you would say. You see as upset Chelsea and I are about losing our boyfriends, we are more upset that our “needs” weren’t taken care off last night.” As she said this she started to stroke my cock through my pants. Chelsea said, “we were hoping that since you didn’t have a great time at prom that you could take care of us and that we could take care of you.”

Then both girls started making out with me at the same time. I broke off the kiss and said, “lets move this over to the bed.” We moved over to the bed and I tore off the girls shirts. I sat down on the bed as they took off their shorts. Two amazing teenage girls stood in front of me in nothing but matching black thongs and bras.

I said, “damn you two girls are what every man dreams of, now lets get started.” As I said this I took my pants off and unleashed my 8 inch cock. Chelsea looked at it with a look of lust and passion. She pushed me so that I laid back on the bed and started to suck my cock. As she did this Cassandra took off her thong and sat on my face, placing her shaved pussy right on top of my mouth. As I started my assault on Cassandra’s pussy, Chelsea was busy working on cock. She didn’t hesitate deepthroating me, taking a good six inches of me each time she bobbed her head down. After about 5 minutes of my non-stop assault on Cassandra’s pussy, she came. She screamed, “OH GOD I’M COMING!!!!!” and squirted all over my face and chest. She spasmed up and down on my face for at least 30 seconds. After her earth shattering orgasm, she rolled off my face and onto the bed. Not soon after Cassandra’s orgasm, Chelsea stopped sucking my dick and removed her bra and thong. She got on the bed and got on all fours, shaking her ass at me. I took the hint and started to fuck her doggy style. Each time I thrusted my cock in her dripping pussy, she moaned, and said, “you are so much better than my asshole ex-boyfriend and your cock fills me up so much better than his.”

As I took Chelsea from behind, Cassandra was shoving her fingers so far up her pussy that I thought her hand was going to disappear. Upon seeing this, I thought it was time for her turn. I pulled out of Chelsea and laid back down on the bed, motioning for Cassandra to hop on. She climbed onto me and turned around, straddling me backwards. She started to hop up and down on my cock and screamed everytime my cock pierced her pussy. Chelsea started to lick my balls and dick and Cassandra’s pussy as Cassandra rode me. Soon, Cassandra came once again, this time spraying her love juices all over Chelsea. When this happened, Chelsea was quite unaware of what was going on and was caught with her mouth wide open.

After Cassandra finished and got her pussy juice all over Chelsea’s face, she blacked out. She fell off the bed and left me and Chelsea all alone. “It seems as though that you have yet to come,” I said to Chelsea.
She said, I have been saving myself until we were alone. I knew Cassandra would only last so long, she hadn’t been fucked like that for months.” I said, know that we are alone, what did you have in mind?” She said, well the only way I’ve only been able to come is when I have someone fucking my asshole.” At this statement, my head started spinning. I didn’t say a word and Chelsea took this as a yes to her inferred proposal. She again got on all fours on the bed, propped her head on the pillows, and spread her ass checks apart. She expected me to stick my cock right in her tight second hole but I had no intention of rushing this along.

I only stuck my thumb into what I discovered was an incredibly tight hole. As I did this, Chelsea moaned and said “please stick you hard cock in me.” She was practically pleading me to shove my dick in her but I just continued shoving my fingers in her asshole. Finally after a couple minutes of this, I gave into her demands and slowly worked my cock into her tight hole thrust by thrust. As I did this Chelsea was not making a word, she had her eyes closed and was biting her lip so hard I thought she was going to swallow it. She was shoving her fingers in and out of her pussy and after 15 minutes of this anal abuse, she screamed out in ecstasy. For almost an entire minute she screamed in orgasm and when she finished, she collapsed.

Still awake, I said to her, “you and Cassandra might be finished but I still need a little extra to top me off.” She gave me a devilish smile and climbed off the bed and got on her knees. I stood in front of her and she licked and sucked my cock until I came all over her face and hair. Afterwards, I fell onto the bed and passed out into a deep sex coma.

anonymous readerReport

2011-04-01 23:42:39
I agree with Frank, good job, it was a rather good story and with some more experience, you could become an excellent writer.

Anonymous readerReport

2010-04-20 19:42:04
Chelsea said “we were just about to walk a movie.” Walk a movie????
Spellchecking works fine but doesn't catch when the wrong words are use, needs proofreading for that.


2010-04-20 13:04:28
thanks frank, I dont know how I missed that clarissa-cassandra thing those were the two names I was considering for that character and I guess I didnt make up my mind lol

Anonymous readerReport

2010-04-20 08:24:23
It's a good first effort.
Watch your proof reading. Clarissa became Cassandra, there was an off rather than of, and one other.
Keep writing. You have a good flow and a possible storyline.

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