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Chapter One

Sighing quietly, Tessa looked around as she shut her Psychology book and stretched. Looking around the library, she couldn't believe she had been in there for 6 hours studying nonstop from English to her Special Education class to History then Psychology. Tessa was a sophomore at the University of Wisconsin and she hoped to be a teacher when she graduated from college.

Standing up, she stretched again then slid everything into her backpack and shouldered it then walked out of the library and started walking to her apartment on campus.

Tessa was a 5'6" Japanese American 21 year old girl. She had long black hair going down to her waist, blue eyes that seemed to pierce through anything that made her curious and a slim size 12 figure. She was slightly muscular due to her training as a gymnast for the University gymnastics team but she mainly prided herself on her brains and intuition. She knew she wanted to be an Emotionally Handicapped Special Education teacher since she was in middle school when she started working with the kids. Some of them were considered to be like most of the other Special Education students....not really there and thinking like children even though they were adults but on the contrary, some of them were like regular teenagers...they just had problems learning some things and also with their anger.

Shaking her head, she smiled quietly remembering some things during her time helping to teach the kids.

Losing focus on where she was, she had her guard down as she turned the corner of the street where she lived on and was suddenly pulled back by two muscular arms.

One of the hands covered her mouth and she heard a voice saying into her ear "You say one word girl, and I'll slit your throat from ear to ear."

Nodding that she understood, the man chuckled then pulled a damp cloth out and covered her mouth and nose with it.

Being soaked with chloroform, it knocked Tessa out in a couple seconds and the man smirked and put her into the front seat of his jeep after cuffing her hands behind her and hiking up her skirt then pulling off her panties so he could get a clear view of her while he was driving but she would still be covered if they ran into some traffic.

After buckling her in, he smirked and kissed her on the cheek and said "Safety first..." then climbed into the driver's seat.


Two hours later, Tessa started to wake up then blinked finding herself laying in the middle of a gigantic bed with her feet tied together with a satin ribbon and her hand still cuffed behind her back. Blinking and looking around and trying to sit up, she furrowed her eyebrows but didn't say anything as she took in her surroundings not really comprehending where she was first.

Her captor walked in a few minutes after she woke up and smiled sinisterly to her and walked over to the bed and sat on the edge. Looking to her, he smirked again and said "Well...I already know who you are...Tessa...according to your student id and driver's license. Since you're going to be here for a while, you might as well know my name...It's Steve. I will be your 'host' for the next several days. You will assist to my needs, but I think it will be against your will until you are ready to submit to me...but that is all right...I like a challenge. Now...let's get you unwrapped."

Blinking and trying to shrink away from him, Tessa shook her head as she started to speak up "No...please...don't do this...I'm a virgin...please? I'll give you anything...money? Is that what you need? I can give it to you."

Smiling, Steve motioned around the room "Does it look like I need money? No...what I want is to enjoy myself...and don't worry...by the time all this is over, I'll make sure you enjoy it too....I have my ways. And as for virgins? MMM...been a while since I had one of those." Looking at her almost hungrily, he took out a knife and slit the sleeves of her shirt by the shoulders. Running his knife slowly down the front of her shirt, he pounced on the bed on top of her and cut from the collar downwards then flipped her over and cut the same length down her back dividing the shirt into two parts. Pushing the two halves of the shirt off of her, he threw them to the floor and looked down at her skirt. He had pulled her panties back up because he wanted to have his fun in slicing them off as well.

Remaining quiet during the ordeal of her shirt being cut off, Tessa felt him reach down under the waistband of her skirt and start tugging it down then started struggling shaking her head "No....please stop! Don't do this! Please?" Groaning in protest, she felt the skirt being tugged down off of her ankles leaving her in only her panties and bra.

Steve smiled quietly and leaned up kissing her quietly and stuffing his tongue in her mouth as he sliced off her bra and started playing with her size 36 D breasts then knelt back down and sliced off her panties. Smiling quietly to her, he stuck first one finger then another into her and started rubbing around till he found her clit. Finally finding it, he continued rubbing it, as he leaned back up wrapping his other arm underneath her and tugging her to him and leaned down sucking on one tit then the other sucking and licking at the nipples. Rolling them around on his tongue and lightly biting it, he smirked quietly as he felt her starting to get wet.

Shaking her head, Tessa started moaning in pleasure yet in protest as he continued his ministrations and tried pulling away but arched her back as he continued to rub at her clit. "No...please..." Whispering this quietly, she could feel herself start to give into him and pushed her head up into the pillow moaning again. "NOOO...." Panting slightly, she tried to fight him off but couldn't as he smiled to her kissing her again then moving down her stomach and putting his face close to her pussy.

Giving her one final smirk, Steve started lapping at her cunt, giving it a nice tongue bath as he plunged his tongue in and out of her. Blowing on her cunt, he felt her arch her back and cry out knowing she was nearing an orgasm.

Between wetting her cunt with his tongue then blowing it dry with his breath, she cried out again and shook as she orgasmed and dropped down to the bed quietly sobbing quietly.

Spreading her cunt lips, he started lapping up her juices from her orgasm then scooped some out with his own fingers and put it to her lips offering her to taste it. Seeing her turn her head, he forced his finger into her mouth and ordered her to lick it if she wanted his finger out of her mouth.

Sighing, she finally resigned to it and licked her juices off of his finger.

Smirking quietly, he nodded then climbed off the bed and uncuffed her but pulled her up by her hair and said "Down on the floor cunt...it's time for you to please me now."

Sobbing quietly, Tessa did as she was told as he stripped his jeans and shirt off then sat on the edge of the bed and slipped his cock into her mouth. Trying to struggle against it, Tessa found it useless as he held tight to her head and plunged himself into her thrusting back and forth. Running his fingers through her hair, he smiled fondly at her as he forced her to suck his cock deep throating it every now and then.

Moaning quietly, he closed his eyes and smiled "Shit....I knew you would be good the first time I saw you but I had no idea...bitch you are going to be a good little fuck toy for me." Finally coming to orgasm, he moaned out and thrusted one last time making the cum run down her throat and smiled a little "Like your new diet? That's what you're going to be eating if you don't behave from now on." Making her swallow it to the last drop, he watched it run over her chin and licked her chin then kissed her thrusting his tongue into her mouth and smirked finally pulling back and said "Got milk?"
Grabbing her by her hair again, he bent her over the bed and knelt behind her and ran his tongue along her ass crack. "MMM...just what the doctor ordered..." Plunging his tongue into her anus, he started pistoning it around as she shook her head and moaned then jumped as he slid into a finger. Reaching around with his other hand he stuck three fingers into her mouth and told her to lick them and get them nice and wet.

Sobbing uncontrollably, she did as she was told and he let her do that for the next couple of minutes as he went back to rimming her anus.








Finally pulling his fingers out of her mouth, he smirked and said "I'm going to rape you up the ass now...that's why I had you lube my fingers." Shoving his first finger into her ass, he dug it in up to his knuckle and started thrust it back and forth loosening up her anus walls then stuck in his second finger and did the same then the third. Finally satisfied, he smacked her ass gently then got up on his knees and rubbed his crotch over her ass and smiled maliciously as he reached under her and played with a tit "MMMM....perfect fit...." Positioning his cock, he shoved into her anus making her cry out in pain. Chuckling quietly, he nodded "Yeah it does hurt doesn't it? Don't worry you'll get used to it." Finally sinking himself into her, he stayed there and said "Now we'll stay this way for a minute and let you adjust." Reaching around her hips, he pulled her to him and slipped a finger into her cunt. Playing with her clit and her tit at the same time, he started thrusting in and out of her at the same time as he moved his fingers in and out of her. Being very careful with her, he stood up with her still impaled on his cock and lay on the bed with her back to him as he spooned her still fucking her in the ass and playing with her clit and tit.

Moaning quietly, she tossed her head up as his ministrations were starting to get to her and tried to clench her legs shut as she arched her back into his stomach then gasped out as she orgasmed onto his fingers.

Closing his eyes he came at the same time in her ass and reached up with the hand he was playing with her tit with and turned her head so he could kiss her. Trying to pull out of the kiss, he let her and smirked "Don't worry...you will learn to love me by the time we're through." Letting his dick soften inside her, he pulled out and watched as she curled up into a ball and sobbed quietly. Almost feeling pity for her, he shook his head remembering she was just a piece of meat for him to have pleasure with and knelt on the bed again and stretched her ar ms above h er head tying them to the bedposts. Running the rope through the mattress, he tied her ankles to the bottom bedposts making her spread out in a spread eagle. Kneeling between her legs, he ran his hand up and down her sides, then knelt down and licked at her cunt again. Starting to go up her body, he let himself lay on top of her then slipped his cock into her as she turned her head away finding it useless to fight.

When she felt him enter her, she sobbed again and started shaking her head "No...please don't....please...I'm a virgin. Don't take that....please...."

Smirking quietly, he continued to thrust into her reaching her hymen and said "Too late little girl..." then plunged right through breaking her hymen. Looking down, he watched as she bled and chuckled "Not a virgin anymore huh?" Continuing to thrust in and out of her, he moved his hips up and down then reached down with his knife and cut her ankles free. Looking into her eyes, he told her to wrap her ankles around him and sobbing, she did allowing him deeper access as he plunged his tongue into her mouth. Cutting her wrists free, he turned so they were lying on their sides, her with her legs wrapped around his hips and him pistoning in and out of her. Reaching down, he wrapped her arms around him as he lay like that for several minutes just letting his cock rest inside of her. Finally moving again, he felt himself grow hard again and sat up wanting to try something else. Still keeping his dick inside her, he had her sit on his lap with her ankles still wrapped around him and started moving her up and down on his cock as she sobbed just wanting this to be over. Smirking quietly, he knew what she wanted and said "Bitch....you're not going anywhere...it's the weekend and you're staying with me and we're going to have a ball." Putting his hands on her hips he moved her up and down on his cock as she cried then moaned pulling his body to his as he lay down again so they were both on their sides and came again inside of her. Deciding to call it a night, he let her turn on her other side as he pulled his soft dick out of her and held her to him as he pulled a blanket over them. Licking and sucking on her neck, he reached over and shut off the lamp. "Good night bitch...See you in the morning."

But during the night, she was raped again and again and hardly slept at all. She knew that it was going to be a long hard weekend and wondered when it would end.

Chapter Two

The next morning, Tessa was sitting on the bed as Steve fed her cooked bacon and just smiling at her. "I hope you slept well. I went through your purse again and found out where you worked and also called the college and told them that you had the measles and wouldn't be going in this week. So now we have an entire week here to ourselves. I don't have a job so I don't have to worry about any of that. And according to your planner, your parents are away on a cruise so there's nothing to worry about there either."

Tessa glared at him as she balled her bound hands into fists then narrowed her eyes as she was fed another piece of bacon then spit it out at his face "What do you want from me? You've had me in every possible way...why are you keeping me here?"

Slapping her in the face and knocking her sprawling sideways into the bed, Steve set the plate down on the night table and crawled on the bed beside her "You lousy bitch...I show you some hospitality by feeding you and you spit it out at my face. As for why I'm keeping you here, I used to run a house down in Panama filled with whores I found on the streets. It's time I opened one here too. You will be my first whore and I will probably add on two or three more but I want to break you first." Reaching over and pulling her to him, he wrapped his arms around her and reached down fingering her asshole while looking at her "Yes...you will be my prized possession. I never had a Japanese American before." Turning her over, he started fondling her breasts as he kissed and sucked on her neck then slipped his cock into her ass almost gently and kept her pressed to him letting his cock harden inside her, then began spooning her as he talked letting his other hand travel down and play with her clit "I called some friends today before I made some breakfast and they will be here around 4 PM to try you out. I told them you were some prime meat..." Smirking quietly, he listened to her gasp sharply at the pain in her ass but continued raping her ass.

Shaking her head quietly, Tessa looked at the wall as she concentrated on not letting herself become turned on by all this but she couldn't help it as she felt her body start to betray her. Several people coming at 4 PM. Looking at the bedside clock, she closed her eyes seeing it was 1 PM. Three more hours and she would be playing 'hostess' to a gang of men just like Steve.

Steve smirked again as he felt himself tightening up then sat up gingerly with Tessa still impaled on his cock and moved her up and down on his cock while fondling her breasts and played with her clit while sucking on her neck. "I also went out and got couple new outfits for you....and also some shaving lotion. This stuff is special though...once we shave you with it we won't ever have to shave you again...won't that be great? No more razorblades...no more cuts....no knocks....perfect skin....just like you." Finally stopping, he rested her on his cock as it remained buried deep in her ass then licked and sucked at her neck again as his cock suddenly exploded in her ass. As it softened, he turned her head tenderly and kissed her slipping his tongue into her mouth as she winced quietly at having to sit on him like she was. Pulling away, he picked her off of him then grabbed her arm and started pulling her around the room "Got a few new toys too....there's a swing right there...seats two so at times, you can be on top or I'll sit on you....It's comfortable though."

Pulling her over to a chest, he opened it and showed her the dildos inside. "There are no whips though...I don't want to damage my prized possession. This one's my favorite..." Pulling out a long double ended dildo, he said "You see the two heads? You slip one into yourself and fasten the belt around your waist to keep it inside then you slip the other into another female and fasten that belt too...then we simply sit back and watch you two moving. You may sit there as long as you like but sooner or later you will become uncomfortable and you have no choice but to move. The other nice thing about it is...." Turning it on, he ran it over her cheek, "It vibrates." Laughing quietly, he shook his head "God...I can't wait till my friends get here...they tell me they found another girl...we can try this out then."

Shoving another of the smaller dildos inside her, he turned it on and watched her face as it contorted when it began to vibrate inside Tessa then made sure it wouldn't slip out and continued walking with her slowly because she was wincing from the feeling she was getting and continued the tour showing her the little toys he had for her. Finally getting back to the bed, he picked her up and pulled the dildo out of her and placed her on his lap and ran the dildo over her lips then shoved into her mouth "Lick that clean...Taste your juices." Smiling and watching her do as he said, he spread her legs and wrapped them around his hips and slipped his cock into her then grabbed her hips and started moving her up and down on his cock again.

Hearing the door open, he looked at the clock then noticed it reading around 2:30 and knew that his friend, Frank had come early. Which meant he had the other girl with him. "Hey Frank...I'm in the bedroom...come on in....sort have my...hands full..." Snickering quietly, he kissed and licked Tessa's breasts as he pulled the dildo from her mouth and listened to her moan with hatred at him. He didn't care...to him, she was just another piece of meat.

Walking in and carrying another girl in his arms that appeared to be unconscious, a man about in his late twenties early thirties looked at Steve then chuckled seeing Tessa "So....I see you really did get your dream girl. So...how is she?" Sitting down on the bed next to Tessa and Steve, he set the other girl down who appeared to be of Indian descent. She had dark tanned skin, dark hair and high cheekbones. She was also trim and had some muscle.

Steve looked to Frank and nodded "Yeah, found her while she was going back to her dorm from the school. Isn't she gorgeous? Where'd you find yours?"

Frank looked at the Indian girl then smirked "Found her outside a bar...she works there. Found out her name's Laurie Whipstaff." Smirking a little and resting a hand on the unconscious girl's clothed breast, he looked to Tessa who glared at him then reached over and rested his big bear like hand on her shoulders and shoved her down on Steve's cock and held her there relishing in her moan of pain "Watch who you're glaring at girl...Never know who's the dangerous one in this room." Looking back to Laurie, he released his hold on Tessa then smirked quietly "Well, looks like Sleeping Beauty's about to wake up."

Keeping her hands behind her back, Frank rolled on top of Laurie deciding to wake her that way and said "Well, let's see if this Prince Charming can wake her with a kiss." Fondling her breasts again, he leaned down and kissed Laurie quietly then pulled back chuckling as Laurie opened her eyes revealing green eyes which stared up at him in shock.

Shaking her head, she tried to move but found her wrists bound behind her back then shook her head as he started to cut her clothes off.


Steve watched Frank and Laurie then looked to Tessa "I suppose it is time to get this party started...but first..." Pushing Tessa back down on his cock, he rolled over so she was lying on her back with him on top then looked to Frank "Hey Frank...do me a favor and lift up her legs around me....I want to get my seed inside her."

Smirking quietly, Frank nodded leaving a squirming Laurie on the bed with her shirt, skirt and bra off then reached over and grabbed Tessa's legs by the ankles and held them up above his friend's waist and said "Ok bud....go for it. She's all ready."

Smiling evilly down at Tessa, Steve leaned down keeping his cock inside her as he postponed in and out of her at a fast pace locking his mouth over hers then moaned as he slowly shot his load into her over and over. Pushing himself up, he dug deeper into her and relished in her yells as he shot his cum deeper and deeper into her. F inally sat isfied, he collapsed on top of her and looked to Frank "Just wrap her legs around my waist and leave them there...she's too weak to fight now."

Frank nodded and did as he was told then looked to Laurie and climbed back on top of her and ripped her panties off. Looking to her face, he kissed her then started kissing and sucking at her neck then looked into her eyes again "I know you're not a virgin. You dated one of my friends and he told me all about it. He also told me you screwed him over...well this is his revenge since he's overseas right now fighting for our country. When he gets back, this house will be open and he will be too glad to see you...probably glad enough to get what he really wants from you." Smirking quietly, he shoved his cock into her and started doing pushups lowering and raising himself in and out of her "By the time we're through, you're going to be pregnant and then we'll give the kid to Luke. He told me he wanted a son...well, he should get his wish as to how that's the only kids I made my ladies have over the years. I'm going to be training them to be just like me....eldest one is now 16 and he's learning to be just like his old man."

As Steve listened to Frank, he nodded knowing Luke's story...so this was the bitch who didn't want to marry him and have his children eh? Well...looked like she had no choice now. Smiling down to Tessa, he patted her belly and said "Congratulations Mommy...looks like you have no choice but to stay with me now." Reaching over, he grabbed the dildo he had in her before and shoved it deep inside her to block any cum from coming out "Now we don't want Daddy's seed slipping out just yet do we?" Smirking quietly, he sat up rolling off of her then sat her up and rested her on him as he leaned back on the bed's headboard listening to her sob as he watched Frank and Laurie. "Hey Frank...didn't you say that Laurie's bi?"

Frank looked up from his raping of Laurie then groaned as he came deep inside her ignoring her sobs then nodded "Yeah...why?" Smirking quietly, he let himself soften inside Laurie as he kissed her then looked back to Steve waiting for his answer.

Resting Tessa against the headboard, Steve stood and picked up the double ended dildo and showed it to Frank "You want to try this on them? I'm sure Tessa won't like it but I'm positive Laurie will." Smirking evilly, he walked back to the bed and sat with his back resting on the headboard and placed Tessa's head on his chest looking to Frank as he handed him the dildo.


Taking it from Steve, Frank smiled and nodded "Yeah...why not? And we can videotape it and send it to Luke. I already raped Laurie last night and sent that tape to Luke. This might be interesting for him too." Smirking quietly, he sat up and brought Laurie up to rest in his lap. I also got her drunk...but not the way you usually get drunk...Perhaps we can do that while the girls have the double dildo in their twats. Let's try it out."

Nodding, Steve took one of the heads and took the vibrating dildo out of Tessa then stuck the head of the double ended dildo into Tessa's cunt then looked at Frank as he did the same to Laurie as he fastened the belt to Tessa's waist and Frank fastened the other belt to Laurie's waist. "There we go....looks like a masterpiece."

Nodding, Frank helped Steve roll the girls on their sides, Laurie’s leg resting on Tessa’s hip and Tessa’s on Laurie’s hip with the dildo only showing 2 inches between them showing how truly deep it was shoved in both girls’ cunts and set up the camera then watched as Laurie started moving her hips up and down forcing the dildo into Tessa's cunt and trying to get Tessa to respond back "Natural born rapist that girl...ah well." Reaching into his bag, he smiled a little "I'll show you what I mean by getting her drunk. Help Laurie to stand and move Tessa so her back's still on the bed but with her legs hanging over the edge and keep Laurie bent over her. Might be more interesting that way…" Pulling out a couple beer bottles, he set one on the night table then watched as Steve did as he said and popped open the bottle.

Steve watched Frank uncertainly, then looked to the beer bottle "You sure you won't hurt her?"

Frank shook his head and said "Nah...this'll help her to relax." Saying that he spread Laurie's butt cheeks then smirked as she gasped "That's right luv...time to make you feel good just like last night." Smirking quietly, he put the mouth of the bottle to her butt cheeks then shoved gently and watched as the neck of the bottle disappeared into her ass. Shoving again, he tipped the bottle quietly and watched as the contents started pouring into her. Fucking her with the bottle, he bent down and nibbled on Laurie's neck as she continued to fuck Tessa with the double ended dildo and smiled watching as she started to chew on Tessa's nipples gingerly knowing Laurie was loving this.

Steve watched as the contents poured into Laurie's ass then watched as Laurie nibbled on Tessa's nipples but Tessa seemed to slowly become turned on but she continued to wince as she was fucked shaking her head and knew that she was going to be harder to break. A few minutes ago, he had to leave the room and learned that his other friends couldn't come that day because a situation had arose and knew it was just going to be him, Frank, Tessa and Laurie. Ah well...four was an ok number. Crawling onto the bed, he opened Tessa's mouth and slipped his cock into it then started to fuck her mouth as she moaned in protest. Closing his eyes, he rolled his head back letting himself enjoy it.


Frank watched Steve then smirked as the bottle finished emptying into Laurie's ass then continued fucking her with the bottle then grinned seeing as both girls came to orgasm and shook his head taking the bottle out of Laurie’s ass. Throwing it to the carpeted floor, he knelt behind Laurie's ass and put his lips to it and started to lap at it. Sticking his tongue in her ass, he grinned again hearing her moan then started sucking at the beer that was still in her ass. Sucking it into his mouth, he swallowed then smiled seeing as Laurie fell on top of Tessa causing the dildo to fully enter them both causing them to moan in pain and ecstasy and knew that the beer was starting to take hold and enter her blood stream. "That's my pet...just relax."

Cumming in Tessa's mouth, Steve pulled out then smiled kissing her lips and tasted his cum then pulled away and helped Frank release the two girls from the dildo. "I want to try that Frank. That looked like fun and Laurie looks so relaxed...maybe it'll help Tessa."

Nodding, Frank reached into the bag and pulled out another bottle and popped the cap then handed it to Steve "Knock yourself out." Bending Laurie over the bed again, he took another 'drink' from her ass then turned Laurie's head and spewed it into her mouth then quickly clamped his hand over it making her swallow before she could spit it out. "Damn...good ass whiskey I'm telling you." Unfastening the belt from both girls’ hips and crawling up onto the bed, he lay down and picked up Laurie and set her on his face so she was sitting on it and continued to rim her as he played with her clit looking up every so often to see Laurie roll her head around quietly enjoying it.

Nodding and bending Tessa over the bed, Steve knelt in between her ass cheeks and slipped the mouth of the bottle up between the cheeks then shoved watching it disappear into her. Continuing to shove, he reached the bottom of the neck listening to her start to protest and tipped the bottle so the liquid could rush into her. Fucking her with the bottle, he kissed her ass cheek and started to kiss and lick her back as he reached his other hand around and fondle her clit.

Lowering Laurie over his chest so her cunt was in his face and her mouth was down near his cock, he slipped his cock into her mouth and started pistoning up and forth as she sucked and licked at it as he sucked and licked at her clit. Knowing that he broke her, he hoped that she would help break Tessa knowing Tessa had a soul that wouldn't be broken easily. Looking to Steve, he watched as the bottle was removed from Tessa's ass and watched as Steve drank deeply from her ass then turned looking to Laurie as he came in her mouth and spoke up quietly telling her to move up next to him.

Whispering to her what he was thinking, she smirked and nodded then looked to Steve and whispered the plan in his ear.

Steve grinned evilly then nodded knowing that Laurie could be trusted and let her pull Tessa up by her arm seeing her drunk since the beer entered her blood stream and walked her to the swing and strapped her into it.

Tessa weakly shook her head but was too exhausted to protest as Laurie knelt down and brought the swing to her mouth and started lapping at Tessa's cunt almost gingerly.

Watching, Steve and Frank stood watching them then smirked to each other and nodded as they dressed and left the room to start dinner as the two girls 'got to know each other better'.
3 comments

anonymous readerReport

2012-11-12 17:28:21
Jesus... have you ever taken an English class?
While the storyline had promise, you destroyed its potential with your 4th grade (at best...) grasp of the language.

anonymous readerReport

2011-07-02 21:12:02
1st: You said she awoke to find that she was "still" handcuffed. She was only cuffed after she passed out so "she awoke to find herself handcuffed would have been better". 2nd: After taking her in the ass you said Steve tied her "spread eagle" on the bed but right after that when he starting fucking her he had her wrap her legs around his hips. How can you do this if she is tied "spread eagle"? At that point I stopped reading the story. Think continuity not cuntanuity.

anonymous readerReport

2011-07-02 21:10:10
1st: You said she awoke to find that she was "still" handcuffed. She was only cuffed after she passed out so "she awoke to find herself handcuffed would have been better". 2nd: After taking her in the ass you said Steve tied her "spread eagle" on the bed but right after that when he starting fucking her he had her wrap her legs around his hips. How can you do this if she is tied "spread eagle"? At that point I stopped reading the story. Think continuity not cuntanuity.

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