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The next morning I woke up to find izzy still sleeping on my chest. I eased her off and carefully placed her on the pillow trying not to wake up. I then pulled off the covers trying to find my boxers on the floor.
“hey dan” I heard izzy whisper sleepily. I looked her and she smiled at me. “that as something last night.”
“yeah it was” I agreed. I put on my boxers and leaned in to kiss her. We made out for awhile. “hey I have to make breakfast.”
“its still so early. I bet you could go for another round.” She said cheekily. “I know I can.” With that she tugged my boxers down and stroked my semi erect dick. “your so thick. I cant believe that was in me last night. Make me cum again.” She then licked the head then engulfed it with her wet mouth. I let out a soft moan.
“bet you like that.” I then pulled of her covers and eased my hand down to her tits. I fondled them and squeezed the nipples. She responded by moaning on my cock. I then eased my hand further south down to her cunt, where I felt her bush graze my palm. I let in a finger and started to finger her. By then I was fully hard. I pulled her up to a sitting position and then leaned in to eat her pussy. She leaned back and with one hand on my head, she used her other hand to stroke me. I found her clit buried in her pubes and started to lightly bit it with my lips. She gripped my hair harder. Then I started licking her fast.
“don’t stop. Mmmmm….fuck your really good at this…” she stroked me faster. I felt the urge to cum, but stopped her. I wanted to save it for her pussy. After a few more minutes, she orgasmed, her pussy tightening on my tongue, juices flowing down my chin. She moaned loueder, her body quacking. “ffuucckkk” she cried. When her orgasm subsided she fell back on the bed, I leaned in and kissed her. She then proceeded to clean my face of her juices.
“I taste good don’t i?” she said.
“yeah you do.” I then positioned myself in between her legs. Her knees were bent and her legs were over my shoulders. My cock head was at her entrance of her wet love tunnel. I used the juices to mix it with my precum for lube and I stroked the lips with it. Then I leaned into her and entered her. My arms were on the either side of her supporting my weight. I thrusted forward and pounded her deep. Every thrust was accompanied by her moan. I thrusted faster and as my orgasm approached, I slowed down and stopped. During the pauses I rubbed her clit. I wanted to build up my orgasm and reserve of semen so as to fill her up. During the several pauses, I managed to give her two more orgasms. Then when my arms grew tired of supporting her, I began thrusting fast. My balls were making a slapping sound against her smooth ass every thrust I made. She thrust upwards matching the rhythm. Then I felt the need to release. I closed my eyes and my mouth was agape. Izzy noticed that I was close.
“cum in me big boy. I want your jizz to fill me up. I want to feel your hot big load in me. Just do it” she said seductively. Then my arms gave way and I collapsed on her, her breasts squashed against my chest. her hard nipples rubbed against mine. I was kissing her now, my tongue in her mouth. I grabbed her left tit and squeezed. The softness of her tit sent me overboard and I ejaculated.
“mmm….yeeeaaaaaaaahhhhh….uuuuuhhhhhh…uhhh…fuck yeah…” I moaned into her mouth.
“yeah…just let it out…oooohhh I can feel ur cum inside me…wow you have a lot of cum…yeah its so warm..” she moaned back into me.
As I came I continued pounding her, faster even. After the orgasmed subsided, I continued to pound her until my dick shrank in her and popped out. Cum oozed out of her vagina and down her ass crack.
“I love you” I panted. I then kissed her. She kissed me back but didn’t say anything. She just stroked my hair. I then rolled off her and kissed her again. “listen im going to take a shower then im going to make breakfast. How does bacon and eggs sound?”
“sounds great?” she said weakly.
“honey whats wrong?” I asked.
“nothing… its just…” she paused for awhile. “listen we have to talk. How about after breakfast?”
“cool” I said. I then popped into the shower and dried off. Then I went to the kitchen and made breakfast as izzy took a shower. When I finished making breakfast, she came out wearing short shorts and my blink 182 t-shirt. It was kind of tight on her. I loved the shirt. It was given to me for my birthday by her and she constantly wore it after her break up. She said that it made her feel good and warm. I felt that it made her look great cause it hugged her curves and showed of her petite frame.
“breakfast is served” I said playfully. She took a plate and ate quietly. The silence was weird and ominous. After we both ate breakfast I washed our plates and sat down at the table. she held my hands.
“let me start to say that I cant believe that last night happened. It was awesome and I am so in love with you and…” I began.
“stop. Stop right there” she interrupted looking down at the table. she removed her hand from mine. “please don’t say that you love me.”
“but I do. I have always loved you. Your beautiful and…”
“no. stop. I cant do this.”
“what are you talking about?”
“dan, im not in love with you”
“but you told me last night”
“last night, I was upset. I just wanted sex. I wanted someone to hold me not for you to fall for me. The truth is im not in love with you and I cannot do this. I just cant.” She began to cry. I however was shocked. How could this have happened. I thought that she felt the same as me, about us. It suddenly became very warm in the room and I had a lump that I couldn’t swallow in my throat.
“izzy..i…” I croaked. I was fighting back tears.
“Look dan, you’re my best friend, I really love you. Im not however in love with you. What I said last night was not me. I was lonely and sad. Please forgive me. I don’t want you to hate me. Don’t be angry please.” I didn’t say anything. I wanted to throw up. My heart felt like it was ripped out and crushed. I didn’t speak or reply her. I just simply got up.
“wait don’t go.. I don’t want to lose you..” she cried harder. I didn’t reply. I just turned around and walked out the door. I took my car keys and left. I drove my camaro out of town. I cruised into the country side and pumped up the volume. Not in love with me. I felt like an idiot. How could I be so stupid as to think that she would love me. I wanted to hate her but couldn’t. after all it was izzy. I then went back home. I parked the car and went upstairs to find her asleep on the couch with a blanket. There was a pile of used tissues on the floor. I went to the counter and took my wallet. I then left quickly making sure she didn’t wake up. I went down to the nearest bar and ordered a bottle of Bacardi and got wasted there and fortuitously made it home at 6am the next day where I passed out on my bed. When I woke up 4 hours later, I took a shower. Izzy was in the living room watching tv. She saw me and got up from the couch.
“Dan I was waiting for you last night. I tried to call but you never picked up.” I didn’t answer. I got my keys and my guitar.
“dan please say something.” I didn’t reply. I left for band practice leaving her sobbing.
Over the next few days the same thing happened. She would be left waiting for me late into the night where I would get drunk and return home. The next day I would rush off somewhere not talking to her. She would end up crying. I just couldn’t deal with her.
On the fifth day as I packed my guitar and headed for the door, she surprised me by blocking it.
“dan please I want to talk.”
“theres nothing to talk about” I said. It was the first time I said anything to her in this week.
“please dan. You’re my best friend. I don’t want to lose you. I lost my boyfriend and my other friends. They were not happy that I dumped brad. please I cant live with the fact that my best friend hates me.” I stopped and put down my guitar. I went over to the couch and sat down. She followed and sat down next to me.
“please say something.”
“what about the fact that it feels that my heart has been ripped out and I feel so stupid for actually admitting my love for you.” I started.
“again im sorry. Please I know you do. But I just don’t feel that way.” I stayed still and quiet.
“dan say something.” Again I kept quiet. She started crying. I felt really bad. “please, don’t leave me. I cant bear to lose you. You are the only one he treats me like I matter. You’re not like the other people in school who were lying about being my friends. You’re not a jerk like brad. please I cant lose you.” I then hugged her and she cried into my shoulder. I kissed the top of her head.
“Izzy, don’t you dare say that I will leave you. I love you and although you don’t feel the same, I will never hate you. I will still be here.” Then I sighed. She looked up at me, her eyes swollen from crying. Her eyeliner was smudged from the tears. I grabbed a tissue and wiped her face. I then kissed her cheek and hugged you. “it may take awhile and its going to be hard, but you have my word, I wont leave you.” She smiled weakly and hugged me. She finally fell asleep and I carried her to her bed. Damn this was going to be hard but I don’t want to lose her, even if her not loving me kills me inside.
I took about 3 months before I could finally go back to hanging out with her like how we used to before she was with brad. the thoughts of her and me together, slowly did off and eventually I managed to block it out of my head. We never spoke about it. By then we had started going to college. Isabel was still shaken by the fiasco but never showed it. Furthermore, she still felt occasionally sad about her break up. I talked with her everyday trying to convince her that she was too special and good for him and that she would find someone that would treat her well. Eventually, the periods of sadness became infrequent. I was doing ok. It was back to square one with me. I was still single and alone. My band and I did well though. We played in several bars and clubs and even a couple of college parties. We became popular amongst the college crowd. I took izzy with me everytime trying to help her forget brad and cheer her up.
After one gig at a club, I was saying good bye to the guys at the back with izzy. When the guys left, izzy and I went to the parking lot, I placed my guitar in the back seat of my car. There were a bunch of girls who came out and once they spotted me. They rushed up to me screaming wildly. They were giggling and whispering about how cute I looked on stage with my guitar. I had to agree. I grew my hair longer so that they covered my eyes and I managed to give it a wild and messy look but at the same time, neat. The girls were pretty drunk and loud. She was blond and consistenly kept looking at me smiling. She was familiar. It was chloe.
“hi” she said shyly
“Hi” I replied shyly. I caught izzy’s eyes roll.
“you were great up there.” She said to me shyly.
“oh that, its nothing really” I said smoothly.
“no really that was good. I didn’t know you were so good with the guitar.”
I blushed. “well thank you.”
“so those songs…who wrote them?”
“oh, most of them were written by me” I said
“really? They were awesome. They were pretty deep. I mean serious, it was like they were speaking to me”
“well thank you very much. Its rarely I get such compliments. I guess you’re the first one who actually understand.”
“yeah.” there was an akward silence by then the other girls had left. Izzy was waiting next to me. She then coughed.
“Oh. Im really sorry for not calling you… I was kind of having a personal crisis and was kind of busy. I mean I wanted to call and stuff but yea…but when I finaly got the time, I kind of lost your number” I said nervously. I was shifting my weight on between both legs. Chloe just laughed. Then she leaned forward and kissed me on the lips. When she pulled away, I felt her reach for my hand and felt a piece of paper in it.
“its ok. I understand. Here’s another one. Just call me..” and with that she walked off.
“cool” I said surprised and slightly light headed. I looked at izzy, and she seemed irritated. I chose to ignore it and we returned home.
The next day I called her and asked her if she would want to join me and izzy to go to a gig. I told that I would be playing and that it would be really cool for her to join us backstage. She instantly agreed. And so it began. I dated her for a week and then she slept with me. We did it at her house. That night I didn’t return home so izzy stayed at home alone. Chloe brought me back to her place. Once inside the house, she grabbed me and kissed me. She then stuck her tongue inside my mouth and I returned the favor.
“ive been wanting to do that since I saw you the other day.” She said after she pulled away. We continued to make out. She took my hand then placed it on her breast. I kissed her neck and she moaned. Then she grabbed my hand and led me to her bedroom. She sat on the edge of the bed and I stood infront of her. She took of her top. Her breasts were squeezed into a red lacey bra. They wanted to pop out. She then unhooked it and her tits fell out and jiggled.
“whoo…feels good releasing them” she then pulled down my pants and rubbed my dick through my boxers. I grew hard and then yanked my underwear to my ankles. My dick sprung out. While looking at me, she pulled back my foreskin and took the head into her mouth. I gasped. She then smiled as I looked down at her while she sucked me off for a good 5 mins. Her jeans were still on. I pulled out and told her to lie back on the bed. She did and I pulled of her tight jeans. She was wearing a matching thong. There was a wet spot where her pussy was. I pulled down her thong to reveal a cleanly shaved cunt. The lips were wet and her clit was revealed. I took of my shirt and then proceeded to lick her cunt. It tasted sweet just like izzy’s. I stuck a finger in and proceeded to fuck her with it. She moaned. I licked her clit and occasionally used my other hand to pinch it. Chloe was lying back and rubbing her tits. My dick was oozing precum. Then chloe came. She didn’t explode. Her ejaculate just oozed out as her body shuddered from the intensity. Her eyes were closed and she breathed in deeply. Then she smiled and opened her eyes.
“dan I want you in me now” she ordered. She then spread her legs and I got in between them. I rubbed my dick and put my hand on my mouth to put saliva on it, and I tasted my salty precum. I lubed up my dick with saliva and pussy juice. Then I positioned my member at her entrance and I entered her slowly.
“fuck dan, im not a virgin. Just go.” With that she grabbed my ass and pulled me in quickly thus allowing my cock to enter her fully. She was tight but not as tight as izzy but I wasn’t complaining. I then went in deep. She groaned with sheer pleasure. I started slow but then within seconds I pounded her fast.
“that’s what im talking about. Fuck me. Fuck me faster.” She cried. She grabbed my ass as I pounded her. I felt the urge to cum afte 7-8 minutes so I slowed down and pulled out. I then grunted “change positons”
“good, cause I want to be ontop” she said. I lay on my back and she sat on my cock facing me. Then she started to bounce on my dong. Her tits were jiggling everytime she bounced. They were gorgeous. One hand was rubbing her clit while the other was behind her head pulling her hair. I reached up and squeezed both of her tits.
“wow, your tits are great” I complimented.
“thanks, their a natural 38C” she said happily. I then put my arms around her back and pulled her in. I then started to kiss her and she moaned into my mouth as she orgasmed again. She slowed down as she did this. Her cunt was contracting on my dick.
“uh chloe…” I began.
“do it in me. Don’t worry im on the pill” she said her eyes closed. That was the signal. I then grabbed her as and stopped her from bouncing. I then started thrusting upwards violently, my balls slapping against her ass. Then my dick throbbed and my balls contracted and the first few ropes of jizz filled her. I continued fucking her, faster now. The jizz was too much and it started to drip out her pussy onto my shaft and balls. I was screaming her name as I came. Finally it stopped. I stopped thrusting and she lay ontop of me as we made out. My dick lost its hardness. Feeling this, chloe rolled of between my legs and took my semi erect dick and began to lick it clean. She sucked on my balls, taking each nut in her mouth. She stroked me as she did this and I was hard again. She started sucking me of this time. I looked down to see her head bobbing up and down on my dick. Fuck this girl is experienced. She flicked her tongue on my head, especially on the piss slit and under the head where the foreskin was attached.
“Fuck my mouth. I want you to load my mouth” she ordered. I grabbed her head and thrusted upwards and within minutes I came again. She sucked and swallowed every rope of sperm that my member shot out.
“mmmm you taste good” she told me. “better than the other guys I was with”
“uh. Chloe, I got a confession. This is actually my third time I have had sex and I was kind of nervous.” I replied
“really? Well I didn’t know. I thought you were like some expert, what the way you made me cum when you ate me out.” I smiled at that comment.
Chloe and I began to see each other for the next few months. We slept with each other frequently. I always did it at her house, as her parents were always overseas, there was privacy. I didn’t want to bang chloe while izzy was in the next room especially as chloe is really vocal. Besides, the two of them didn’t really like each other. Izzy acted irritated around her. Everytime I talked to chloe on the phone, she would either turn up the tv or leave the room.
Izzy began to see a few guys too. They usually were one time dates. None ended with sex. She told me that she couldn’t see herself with them on future dates. I didn’t know the guys but I supported her anyway. Then one night this guy josh came over. They hit it off pretty well and he managed to go all the way with her. The next morning he told her that he would call her. It was a lie. He never did and she waited for two weeks. She was depressed again. i became super friend again and comforted her (without sex) resulting with me canceling many plans with chloe. One night I stayed home and watched tv with her. I was cuddling her as she lay on my chest watching tv. I then received a call from chloe.
“hey I thought we were supposed to meet up tonight” she said sounding angry. “you stood me up, I waited for you at the theater like an idiot.
“oh shit, I forgot. I was here with izzy trying to cheer her up and I kind of forgot. Seriously I forgot and I feel kind of ass for not calling you really. Im soo sorry. I’ll promise to make it up to you.”
“ok. I forgive you, you’re a good friend so I’ll let this go. Just call me next time.”
“thank you and I promise I’ll make it up to you”
“what about tomorrow night?”
“oh shit I cant. I promised izzy that I would be here.”
“oh okay… when are you free?”
“what about Friday. I’ll make you dinner at my place for a magical evening”
“does it involve a lot of sex?” she asked innocently
“I believe so”
“deal. See you Friday.” I hung up and continued watching tv realizing that izzy had left the room. What the hell was with her?
When Friday came, I made dinner for chloe while izzy was in her room depressed as usual. I opened a bottle of wine with choe and the two of drank. The night ended with hot sex and I managed to get her off 5 times. I got of thrice. There were times where I had to stop and tell her to keep quiet or else my roommate would hear her. The next morning I made breakfast. Izzy was at the table with a cup of coffee. I was in my boxers. Chloe then came out of my bedroom. She was wearing pink panties and my blink 182 tee, the one izzy gave me.
“morning babe” I said to her. She greeted me back and we kissed. The sight was too much for izzy. she slammed her empty cup on the table andrushed back into her room where she locked the door.
“izzy, whats the matter?’ I chased after her to the door.
“go away.” She shouted back.
“no, I wont until you come out and tell me what the hell is going on.” I waited at her door slamming it and trying to get her out. Chloe was waiting at the table and she seemed really pissed.
“what the hell is her problem” she finally said,
“what do you mean?” I asked.
“I mean why the hell is she like that?”
“she’s been through a lot ok, just back up”
“I don’t think it helps for her to be a bitch.”
“I said back up ok” raising my voice.
“why the hell are u shouting at me for.”
“im not shouting. Listen I think you should go. I need to help her.”
“so you’re choosing her over me. Is that it?”
“what! Don’t be ridiculous”
“no. you are.”
“no I am not”
“yes you are. Fine. Then make your decision. Her or me. If you choose to help her, then I want you and me to end. Im sick of you always ditching me for her.”
“so now you’re giving me a choice between you and my best friend?”
“yeah I am, make your damn decision”
“its her. She’s my best friend and I staying. If you got a problem, then I guess we’re over.” With that she stormed into my room. She took off my blink 182 shirt and threw it out onto the hall. She got dressed and left.
Fuck. This couldn’t get any worse, I was sitting outside Isabel’s room. Izzy’s pissed and me and I just lost a girlfriend. Izzy then came out of the room. She was clearly crying.
“izzy what the hell was that about. Look I know that you have had bad relationships and stuff but please you’ve got to get on with your life. Look im your best friend. Tell me what’s wrong and im happy to help. Look I know you hate chloe but you have got to stop doing this. Im tired of this. I just lost a person who actually cared enough about me to date me. Izzy say something.”
“do you love her?” she asked suddenly.
“what!? I don’t know… I really liked her but I don’t think I was there yet. Why’s that important now.”
“Well, over the past few months, Ive realized how much of a friend you have been with me. You sacrifice so much even if it costs you happiness. I really appreciate that. You see I was jealous of you and chloe. Partly because I was lonely and saw the relation you guys had. The bigger part was because she was with you. All that kindness and love was given to her and I missed you so much. I hated her for taking you away from me and I just lost it just now seeing her in that shirt I got you. That shirt means a lot to me. To us.”
“what are you talking about. I told you already, Im your friend and im not going anywhere.”
“I know. As a friend you’ve been here, but I wanted to you to be here as more than a friend.” The next part was a complete surprise to me as she leaned in and kissed me. She wrapped her arms around my neck and kissed me. I was shocked and pulled back.
“Iz, what the fucks going on?”
“Dan. I’m in love with you.” I was again shocked. It felt like a boulder had been dropped on me. The months of suppressing my love for her just burst out.
“Iz, please. Don’t do this. I don’t want to go through that. Think about what you have said.”
“I have. Over 4 months and I am sure about it.”
“I don’t want to be hurt again and I don’t think I can do it again. getting over you as the hardest part of my life and it took a lot out of me.”
“don’t speak. Just feel” she then kissed me hard. “ I love you and I want you . no one else. I know you love me too. Just tell me please.” She continued kissing me and strangely I kissed back. I kissed her hard. We made out for 10 minutes. Then I pulled away.
“are you sure. I don’t want to go down that road again. im willing to try only if this is going to work”
“it will” and with that she kissed me again this time pushing me against the wall hard. I was stroking her back and then pulled her shirt up and above her head. She was wearing a black bra. I unhooked it and let her tits fall out. I took the bra and managed to glance at it. I was right about the size. She then slipped out of her shorts to reveal that she was wearing pink lacey panties. She then slipped her hand down my boxers and grabbed my member by the shaft and stroked it. I put my hand into her panties and felt her bush graze my palm. Her cunt was wet. We made out while she stroked me and I rubbed her. I then kissed her neck and went down to her tits, sucking on them and nibbling on her hard nipples. I finger fucked her and used my thumb to rub her clit. She came on my and wet her pants. She was screaming with pleasure into my shoulder. I pulled my hand out and tasted her.
“do I taste good?” she asked.
“always” I replied. I then picked her up and went to the living room where I gently placed her on the couch. She lay on her back and I pulled of her panties to reveal her cunt, the bush soaked with her cum. I then hovered over her, sitting lightly on her tits. She grabbed my member and pulled the forskin then licked the precum from my piss slit. Then she took the whole cock in. my balls were hanging above her face where she massaged them with one hand and tugged and sucked my dick with her other hand. I was close. I then asked if I could try something. I took my dick and placed it between her tits. I then squeezed her breasts together thus wrapping around my dick. Fuck the were soft and smooth. Then I started thrusting forward, the sensitve cock head rubbing against her nipples.
“open your mouth” I said and she complied. I fucked her tits faster and I then erupted.
“ooohhhhhhhhhh fuck….” I shouted. The first rope of jizz shot out of my cock. It went far. It reached her forehead and hair. The rope covered her nose an lips. The subsequent 7 shots landed on her tits, neck, chin and mouth. My orgasm subsided.
“I want you inside of me” she said. I didn’t hesitate. My dick was still hard. I told her that I wanted to do her doggy style. While she position herself, I stroked my dick to maintain the hardness. I then grabbed the cum from her face and lubed my dong. Then I entered her from behind sliding my shaft in slowly.
“fuck I forgot how tight u were. I miss ur pussy.” I cried.
As I pierced her cunt, she moaned an fell forward. I grabbed her hips and started pounding her hard. I pulled her hips towards my pelvis everytime I penetrated her, thus matching the rhythm. I slowed down and then she started to rotate her body. My dick then popped out and izzy giggled. I put it back in her and the her body up so her back was against my chest. I grabbed her right tit and used my fingers to rub the cum on her nipples. I then pinched her nipples causing her to moan. I kissed the back of her neck. My other hand went down and rubbed her clit through her bush. I felt her breath faster and I could feel her heart beat fasten against my chest. she was going to orgasm. I pounded faster and rubbed her clit faster, pinching it even. Then she came. He cunt was contracting again and I felt hot juices flowing down my cock and not my balls. her body quivered as she came.
After her orgasm, i flipped her over on her back my dick still in her. I wanted to pound her missionary style. I wanted to look into her beautiful eyes as I came into her.
“dan, just go fast and hard. Cum as fast as possible.” She whispered to me.
“but I want to pleasure you as much as possible before I nut” I replied.
“its ok dan. With all this, Im pretty much satisfied. I want you to be happy too. Just do it in me. Enjoys yourself.” She smiled as she said this. I gave her a couple more minutes of fucking then I went faster. My pelvis was banging hers and my balls slapped against her ass I thought I might hurt myself. I was close. A couple more thrusts and
“ahhhh…your so tight Isabel, fuck I cant hold it….ssssssshhhhhhhhiiiiitttttttt” and I came. My dick shot continuously as if it were a rifle on auto mode. As I came I opened my eyes and looked at her. She was beautiful. She smiled and I ejaculated, she hugged me tighter, her legs wrapped around me. I then finished cumming. It was the best orgasm ever which lasted me 20 seconds, and 9 ropes of jizz. I collapsed on her, my face buried in her shoulder. When I had the strength I shifted my head and faced each other. Her bangs covered her eyes, and in the dim light of the living room I saw her eyes sparkle. She was beautiful.
“you’re gorgeous” I said softly. I moved the hair from her eyes. “don’t hide your face from the world because I want them to see how gorgeous you are.”
“dan.” She said, tears welling up in her eyes. “I love you.”
I wiped her tears and kissed her on the forehead. We were both sweaty and sticky. “I love you too.” We both fell asleep, me ontop of her on the couch naked, with my dick inside her and he bush coated and dried with my cum. Finally I got her.
11 comments

Anonymous readerReport

2009-03-10 16:16:44
grammar!!!!!!!!!
but good. How could he come that much?
i couldn't it if i tried

Anonymous readerReport

2009-03-09 20:36:32
sequel?

Anonymous readerReport

2009-03-09 10:44:18
grammar friend...

Anonymous readerReport

2009-03-09 07:11:51
i got a bit depressed actually for a part in there. It hit way too close to home when the next morning/afternoon she wanted to "talk." I think we have all been there but not so many of us get so happy an ending. (Mine ended with her going back to the douche she had been with before me and me wanting to kill myself, but that's just my sad story.) Wonderful story and I look forward to reading more.

Anonymous readerReport

2009-03-01 18:36:33
I mean English isn't everything in a story but work a little bit on it. Also make part 3, and 10 out of 10.

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