Comments from jdm320

Date Story title Comment
2013-10-14 15:29:41 Breeding Mrs. Gray pt 2 Ever heard of paragraphs and grammer? How old are you? 11
2013-10-15 08:38:02 Life of a horny kid Chapt -1 You say you are a fan of the site, surely you have read stories so put your thoughts in a story format. You have good ideas, but the format you choose is not a good one. I would be glad to help you if you would like.
2013-10-17 08:19:43 Interstate Innocense pt1 oh the lose of innocence. I loved the fact the participants are the same age. Much needed change from the older/younger genre of the site. I am anxious to read part 2.
2013-10-17 08:34:52 Interstate Innocense II another very well written addition to your series. It cant end here. Please continue.
2013-10-21 13:32:50 The Story of Ann Chapter 1: The Beginning I really enjoyed your story.