Comments from JohnThomas63118
|2014-01-23 19:03:47||Submissive Grandma Moves In||Like your work, an easy read, good formatting. Like to see where you go with this. Looks like mom is going to get involved like too see her to teach Missy mom a lesson.|
|2014-01-29 17:03:32||Angie||I agree very good story with hope of more to come. Davids and Kays relationship is going good and the fact Kay say she gives her blessing does kind of removes the cheating out but cheating is more than just lying it also how one may feel. David may still feel like he cheating on Kay even with her blessing.
Oh what an imagination I have sorry reading the suntan lotion portion Angie completely topless with three men and four women in the room i was thinking a great way to lead up to a full blown orgy soon. LOL write how you like but hope you don't mind that my imagination goes places you have not plan for your story.
|2013-09-20 15:52:54||The mistaked friendship Part Two||I originally started here and up waking up with JT. But that ended the story with real sequels to follow this story line would allow that. I see a very low interest in it. please comment on the work one way or the other. The Story has more to go but only will continue if there is input. if you like or not tell what is good or bad about the story. This may not continue but I could have other writings that might more suitable for you.|
|2013-09-21 13:40:38||Damn My Sons Cock Is Huge; Part Three||love it keep it up, but but proofread your work. Lydia calls Rita "aunt Kim" then the next line call aunt Rita again. Have not read past this yet hope Tanya finds Lydia doing both Jeremy and Kyle, and have Tera walk up behind her and start eating her out. leading to all six of them having a full out orgy.|
|2013-09-24 10:59:26||An Ebony Wife's first step to sluthood part: 2||oh my, that was good. I want to let you know that I will be waiting for your next story.|