Comments from beyondthepale
|2013-09-08 12:00:54||Sierra's Awakening Part 2||Really enjoyable. The first installment felt too short, but this one had more detail and was quite fun to read.
While the one poster was horribly rude about it, you really should use tags to describe what the story is about. I actually skip a lot of stories if they're not tagged. And the proper tags on this series would have drawn me to it more quickly.
|2013-11-13 18:13:05||The Little Girl Next Door||Nice little story with a lot of potential for more. There's some chance here for the two of them to deepen the emotional bond, too, if you want to go that way.
I used all my upvotes on older stories for today, but I'll catch this one tomorrow and give it a well-deserved one.