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| 2013-04-19 15:30:16 |
Shipwrecked |
I have a problem with this there is no introduction is to how they became shipwreck (no storm ) (no reef to hit) nothing there just there out in the big blue ocean. There on an island with animals to hunt. To me that is way to easy no details ... |
| 2013-04-19 15:20:21 |
Big John's Confession – XIII (Final) |
This was an amazing story love all the detail in which it was done, an how it left you wanting more or not letting you stop cause you want to know what happens next ... great job |
| 2013-04-19 15:17:11 |
Three J's and an S Go Skiing - Final Day |
This was a great story , i read it in a day or two nice job ! |
| 2013-04-19 15:15:17 |
SaM's Place - Chapter 02 of 15 Inside the Club |
Interesting to say the least, having read your other stories this should be
good ... I'm a real person that is not afraid to comment. like all the ones that put crap in the comments ... |
| 2013-03-19 22:54:09 |
Big John’s Confession – VI |
You have a good thing going here. Keep up the great story line .. |
| 2012-10-03 13:35:56 |
My Virgin Babysitter |
ok story it was kinda far fetched ... not enough detail .. an Susan was to quick to say yes to everything |
| 2011-08-31 13:56:14 |
Other Men's Wives - His Sluts Chapter 12 |
Harry,
I don't care about the spelling or any of the other mistakes, every one screws up once in a while. For you your stories are awesome, no other way to put it. I was hoping to see more of your stories. Is there more to CUM if so PLEASE LET ME KNOW I DON'T WANT TO MISS IT.Bigdave 45 |