||The Ticket VI
||I must disagree with you the ritual is important if for no other reason it designates they are a member of a clan that puts their respect for the Family, Sect or clan above other things. Because they are part owners of this Ranch and other businesses They do it because they want too. Not because they have too. As I have said before I write what the story tells me to write. That is why there may be some sex, a lot of sex or no sex. I write for me not for anyone else. At times there are good ideas in the comments and other times I get people who think they should be writing my story. To all I welcome your comments although I may not act on them.
||My Sexy sister-The early years Pt2
||Just one question did you ever get back with Veronica?
||The Ticket V
||To all who read this Chapter vi will be delayed I hit something wrong and the whole story disappeared. I will have to rewrite the whole I hope my mind is up to the challenge.
||Can We Survive I
||To Edi tor thanks for the comment. Think about the state of out country and the things this president is doing. It makes the scheme of this story not that far fetched. I thought about Nato and disregarded it for the same reasons that are stated. 1st was the declaration of Martial law then the use of UN Troops. Just think the president is trying to pass gun laws through the UN and is Forcing our top military officers out . What else could you expect. I do try to inject realism as much as possible...But what the heck it is still just a story.
||Who Me ... a Wizard V111
||I realize thiwas not as detailed as usual... It was hurried ... It will be awhile before my next comes out...
I had eye surgery and it makes it hurt if I spend to much time on my stories.
||The Ticket II
||I have expressed my self by saying this is long.... I will also try to satisfy the impatient readers .... Trying to please everybody causes problems because I find it necessary to hurry certain things which make some people feel that the story is jumbled. For that I apologize, With out revealing my age lets just say I would like to live to see the completion of my stories. Thus I shortcut as we all do at times. And for the reader who has a problem of breaking off for supper. The reason for coming back to the small house was because they had just hauled a body thru the back woods and it is suspected the Big house is under observation which will soon be made clear. As to supper with a ritual like that what sane man wouldn't drop everything to go play with 21 pussy's. And Dino I am working on the Wizard story now. Thanks to my readers both pro and con.
||The Ticket II
||To the reader I am not against someone who gives criticism that helps at time. But I am against someone who slanders me and calls me names and has nothing but mud slinging hate and doesn't have the balls to sign in. I understand why you are anonymous. You don't like my story then I suggest you shut the fuck up and don't read them. In the words of another writer... It wasn't written for you, I wrote it for my self. You don't have to read it. Oh and one Question if you didn't like it why did you read it all the way through? It doesn't take me over two paragraphs to lnow I don't like something then I x out of it.
||To the reader who is worried about the lottery ticket...It was in New Mexico. Presently the story is in Texas. It Has already been mentioned more than once that a trip to California was to take place soon. And think the car is a rental, which must be cleaned out before returning. In other words be patient. Lots of ground to cover as yet. Don't Question my plot until the story is complete this is just the first chapter.
Now to the English Major which I am not, I try to correct before printing I miss a few mistakes, so what ... if they matter that much to you ... read a dictionary.
||Who Me ... A Wizard VI
||To the reader that questioned me about my characters.... The Green is the main antagonist He has not come face to face with my hero as yet. You need to go back and read part V. It was a Drow Mage who was shot in the fore head. A Drow Mage is a Dark Elf magic user. But I appreciate your feed back even if it was wrong.
||Red Hawk the Spear Maker(Part 5 The Conclusion)
||I totally enjoyed this series. It was only after reading this that I became brave enough to actually post a story. Also your series gave me the Idea for Mondo's Clan. I would really like to read more stories of prehistory. I am captivated by cave man stories or post apocalypse that puts us back in that state of development. I have a couple of them rattling around in my brain but not sure I have the ability to carry them through.
||The Way of the War
||Anonymous reader 2013 22 21 :45 55 You are worst than an idiot. Condemning a story because of a natural occurrence that happens all the tome just because you are to immature to understand the workings of the human body. I raised a lot of kids and saw younger than 7 get a hard on and they understood the event no more than the 7 year old in the story. I feel sorry for stupid like you.
||Alien Son Ch. 1
||This has been posted before.
||The Way of the War... After the War
||Before you judge me read the continuation it explains everything
||The Way of the War... After the War
||I apologies to the ones who were upset with the ending. I thought long and hard about the ending and changed it more than once in my mind. Then when I was typing ... I realized that in order to continue the story ... She would have to die. I also realized for the story to end the same was true. I wrote my self into a box and that was the only way out. And to the critic who corrected my English... Damn you tell me to correct mine and you can't type one line without a dozen mistakes. I will take my advice elsewhere.
||Kitsune chpt 1 -2
||Use paragraphs it is hard to read when it is all jammed together
||Who Me a Wizard
||First off I resent the remark about being high when I wrote this. Are you to stupid that you did not read the simple introduction, "Confusion Reigns" He is out of his comfort zone trying to understand what is going on. It was written how I wanted and the story will continue that way. If you don't like it ... Don't read it.
||A Sister's Discovery
||I really tried to read this ... but all jammed together it was hopeless... Just a big glob of useless letters.
||Don't feel bad about the criticism or your spelling. I have not read a story on this site worth its mettle that didn't have a few errors. Although the errors do distract from the story I enjoyed the concept.
||I would like to reply to the comment about the size of Rafe's Cock. I agree that over 6 is exceptional but the situation directed the use of larger. If that small situation puts than I suggest you don't read stories on this site.
||I enjoyed this story very much, I can understand how you do not wish to be rushed. I feel the same way but human nature is always in a hurry. I will just say I look forward to the next part.