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| 2011-09-24 00:32:10 |
Vampire chronicles ch 5.5 |
dont know if u read the begining but her pack is dead therefore no need to worry bout incest with brother lol. And i know i need better detail in those areas im new at this im workin on it but then again this story at least originally was meant to be less about the sex and more about the story and the characters personalities and interactions and in that department i dont think there is as much of a lack of detail |
| 2011-08-17 11:54:40 |
Vampire Chronicles Pt. 4 |
Just letting everyone know i am continuing the story. I have begun to write chapter 5. However I have been busier than normal and i have been getting serious writer's block so it might be a little while before chapter 5 is out sorry |
| 2011-08-14 20:46:14 |
Vampire Chronicles Pt. 4 |
If I stole it then put a link to the original in your comment. I am so sick of your bullshit this is my story and I have not stolen it. Whats your problem man. |
| 2011-08-14 19:45:51 |
Vampire Chronicles Pt. 4 |
well the idea was he was just powerful enough to reflect it back i guess i kinda was lazy with that. I wanted to get back to lycinia. I will probebly revise the chapter at some point in the future actually i plan to revise the whole story when its finished |
| 2011-08-13 00:23:49 |
Vampire Chronicles Pt. 3 |
ok on the topic of length I am real sorry if y'all think these are too short Im sorry I am new to writing and i do better with these shorter chapters (whats more i dont think they are that short they are like 10 pages type twelve font double spaced on word which is longer than anything i have written before) none the less Ima try and make pt 4 longer. The guy that made the book comment, you are not the first to say that (i think your 3rd or 4th) and If I were to continue writing this to book length and revised it till it was book worthy why would i take out the sex it could be an erotic book. I certainly hope that that is not true about you mrkool that would be low. |
| 2011-08-12 20:00:26 |
Vampire Chronicles Pt. 3 |
Thank you very much. The idea is that vampires are awesome. Stay tuned wont be long before the next chapter comes out. |
| 2011-08-11 17:59:07 |
Vampire Chronicles Pt. 2 |
no worries lots more to come. already good ways into chapter 3, and do not worry Irina is going to continue to be... hmm whats a good way of putting it, the "alpha female" in the relationship. Not sure if that's the best way to put but basically she might get a bit more dominating but definitely not less. Also I would like to point out Mike isn't suppose to be a pushover or anything he is just suppose to be into it, I think that is clear. Glad you enjoyed it |
| 2011-08-11 14:45:35 |
Vampire Chronicles Pt. 2 |
also i have 3 spots open for people who want to get to read and review my story before I post it to give me feedback if you want to be on that list e-mail me: mikeb1002@gmail.com |
| 2011-08-11 14:44:29 |
Vampire Chronicles Pt. 2 |
Thanks I am glad you enjoyed it. I plan to add more characters. |