Comments from Panther68
|2013-06-04 23:40:21||Sis Comes Home For Memorial Day - Part II||Thanks very much for the fine and honest comments. After reading it a few times after I had posted it, I spotted some of the errors you probably saw. I think some were a result of rewriting a sentence or paragraph and not reading it completely again. A few I spotted I don't know how the heck they got in there. Bottom line though is I had proof read it better I would have caught many of them. I did proof read it before I posted it, I however I did immediately after I had the story completed the way I wished and then posted it. Lesson learned. Once I think the story is ready to post, I should probably walk away from it for bit and then proof read it. Rookie mistake I guess.|
|2013-06-05 08:05:15||Sharing a room with sister||Very nice story. I could imagine some of the same interaction between the brother and sister in my current story if they had given in to their desires when they were teens. When Jordan confessed her love for her brother it read almost the same as mine. I hope nobody thinks I took it from yours. I hope you continue posting.|
|2013-06-20 07:39:50||Sis Comes Home For Memorial Day - Part III||Just wanted to let those waiting for part IV, that I should have it done tonight or tomorrow night at the latest. I've had a few matters that delayed my working on it and then once I did start working, I found that some parts required wording to be very careful. Thanks for your patience.
|2013-06-25 07:05:44||Sis Comes Home For Memorial Day - Part III||Yes, I apologize for that. More stuff came up which ate up most of my weekend. Part IV has been posted|
|2013-06-26 08:16:17||Sis Comes Home for Memorial Day Part IV||Wow!!! I am absolutely amazed at the complements this story has received. Thank you very much.
Most of you seem very anxious for the sequels. I can understand that being a fan of a few mainstream authors who have series published. You finish a book and then have to wait a year or more for the next one. I think I know why now that I have written a short story myself. It is not an easy task to write one (at least for me).
I can assure you it won't take me a year to have one of the sequels ready. I have the overall theme of the stories in my mind but really still need to brainstorm how it all plays out.
I have noticed some of the series on here start out great, only to become a series of repeated scenes set in a different time and place sometimes with different characters. I don't want to make the same mistake.
Please be patient and hopefully the series will become even better.