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Comments from tristanlc4ps2

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2013-03-10 23:20:22 Harry Potter Spoof That was when I very first started writing it. I will work on it if I write a second chapter. I wanted to develope how the spell hes about to use before i got to hermione. Mabey I'll do some malfoy hermione action? Thank you for your input
2013-03-10 23:20:58 Harry Potter Spoof That was when I very first started writing it. I will work on it if I write a second chapter. I wanted to develope how the spell hes about to use before i got to hermione. Mabey I'll do some malfoy hermione action? Thank you for your input
2013-03-10 23:22:15 Harry Potter Spoof Whoops I hit refresh on my browrser and it made my comment come up twice. Whoops!!
2013-03-11 01:00:03 Harry Potter Spoof I'm sorry you feel that way. If you think the little things like that are that important than please help me. Like I said I am looking for an editor. Mabey you would want to help?
2013-03-11 02:11:17 Harry Potter Spoof That's true. In my next story I will deffinetly do that. I had a buddy of mine read over it and that's what he advised I do too. Thank you for your input I will do it next time :)
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