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Date Story title Comment
2013-03-06 10:45:05 The Story Of Us: Part 1 Alright I already re-wrote it so its longer check that out. Ok will do thank you for your feedback.
2013-03-07 01:26:57 The Story Of Us: Part 1 (Re-edit) No no its perfectly fine get technical and oh alright well tell me what size should the main characters penis should be
Thank you for your feedback anonymous reader i greatly appreciate it
2013-03-07 01:34:03 The Story Of Us: Part 1 (Re-edit) And also yeah i tried not to be like other writers and exagerate the characters im glad you caught that
2013-03-07 01:34:45 The Story Of Us: Part 1 (Re-edit) Glad you think its good and Yeah i know i kinda saw that after i posted it sorry about that ill try to fix my grammar and spelling as best as i can its my first time publishing my writing and ill proof read it like 5 times thanks for the tip and yeah ill try for more detail as well and thanks I tried as best as i could
2013-03-06 21:24:05 3 Evil Sister-Part 7 Great continuation keep it up :D
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