||It was really hot, and a bit complicated too. The plot and story line is different. I really like how careful you are about the details of what's going on play-by-play. Please continue to write!
Video games with my brother
||Very hott. I love the way you wrote this one. I love the relationship and the reality you established between the two. It's very believable. I don't think you established an age- which is also good because it lets us just make one up! I'm about to read chapter 2- great work.
Video games with my brother - Ch 2
||I love these two characters- I love their personalities and their dialogues. Adding this one to my favorites. I can't wait to read more from you. Please let me know when there is more!