Comments from Brootforce
|2013-01-26 16:35:43||Returning Chapter 01||Thanx for the Input. I am glad it is being well received.
I will try and get the second chapter out later tonight I am doing final edits now.
The third chapter is written and I need to do final edits and have someone proofread it before I publish it.
|2013-01-26 21:24:59||Returning Chapter 01||The softcore words have more to do with the mindset than the explicit nature of the sex. In the time frame of swords and sorcery, words like Cunt, Cock, fuck and such were not commonly known or used. I feel that those words would destroy the mood of the story. If I am wrong time will tell and I will change the style a little. I am fully versed in hardcore language and stories of a more time will have it well used. Admitedly Rhys would think in those terms in the beginning but I felt it would confuse the story too much to switch down later. Also Rhys is a bit of a romantic at heart.
As for Likka, alas she is Rhys' oldest companion and has loved him since childhood. More on that later. Their relationship started as one of comfort as she is the last of her breed and he was the only Warmage. Morgana did not come along until he was a full adult and already at war with the Mage Kings and by then they had taken to hiding what she is. Now I am giving to much of the story away I think.
|2013-01-27 00:14:50||Returning Chapter 01||Please do not use my comments section to proposition underage girls. If you want to do that please go proposition the ones at your local police station.|
|2013-01-27 16:38:15||Returning Chapter 01||Please do not use my comments section to proposition underage girls. If you want to do that please go proposition the ones at your local police station.|
|2013-01-30 19:47:33||Returning Chapter 01||Don't you just love trolls? To the Anonymous reader who posted on 2013-01-30 12:28:18. If you are not going to give examples of your complaints you are not helpful.
To those who have given examples Thank you, this is how people learn.
For all posting that they like the stories these are the people I am trying to write for and thank you for reading them, I am glad I have entertained and I consider it an honor that you have given me your thanks.
This story is far from over and I intend to follow it through to the end.