Comments from Clayton Long
|2009-04-28 08:26:44||Wedding Orgy||A pretty hot story but I think it could have been improved by giving more of a sense of what you were feeling at the time. Still, it did make me hard and that's always good.|
|2009-04-28 09:16:58||A cruise to remember||Totally hot story, loved every moist, cum-soaked inch of it.|
|2009-05-09 13:48:03||WIFE CAUGHT AND PAYS||Not worthy of a comment - not even this one.|
|2012-06-04 22:29:33||My Fathers Boss||Quite well written, hopefully will develop well with different combinations in further chapters. But why so many categories? Latex fetish, masturbation, exhibitionism, cuckold?? Less is sometimes more.|
|2012-11-17 01:19:09||Coquette and her cuckold (Part 4)||Although I posted this under 'True Stories' it is, I must admit, not entirely true. Certainly part 4 is entirely fictionalised and the story should not be taken as condoning murder in any circumstance.
As Hollywood often describes it's movies, it is "based on actual events" but as I continued writing, I took the liberty of embellishing some parts to improve the narrative (hopefully).
I added the murder in order to round out the story and supply a hopefully surprise ending.
Although I use the first person, my writing should be seen as no more supporting lethal retribution than, say, an Agatha Christie novel.