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| 2013-04-22 11:26:12 |
Sadie 06 – Marty, Beth and the Aussies |
Answers to a few questions:
We never saw the Aussies again after that summer although Susan and maybe Jen wrote them for awhile. (All paper mail with a stamp in those days so interests waned.)
We've been extremely busy with some important legal cases, so you will have to excuse our small sabbatical from writing. Chapter seven is in the works. We hope to have it ready soon.
Yes, even we get confused by the large number of characters and by the great span of time between reality and recollection 40+ years later. Perhaps a recap might be in order in a future chapter.
Thanks for all of your support and interest in our stories.
"David & Sadie" (Sofman) |
| 2013-04-16 15:15:49 |
Sadie 02 – The Summer of My 17th Birthday |
Yes, Jess was extremely hot... so were both her sisters! |
| 2013-04-16 15:13:55 |
Sadie 06 – Marty, Beth and the Aussies |
It is true, Beth, Jules and Kat were not on birth control and we were crazy, brainless teenagers who didn't pay attention to the big heads, but came out very lucky. In hind-sight, we probably should have addressed that n the story as it was a fact of the situation. They don;t let you edit here.
Jess finally brought us to our senses and we took care of it later. |
| 2013-04-12 11:40:04 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 7 |
Comment 4 of 4
What can possibly be wrong with that? Did the author take a long time between chapters? Certainly, I found myself checking her posts almost daily for the next chapter. When it wasn’t there, I moved on to something else and when it finally appeared, Sadie and I read it together voraciously. For me, the delay was filled with anticipation and the chapter, pointing to the new adventures of this liberated family, only added to my anticipation of what is to come.
I trust you have not been too disappointed in the separation of time between these comments.
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| 2013-04-12 11:38:41 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 7 |
Comment 3 of 4
In the big picture, this chapter is a connecting chapter between one set of circumstances and another. This chapter is the transition point between mom sneaking about, keeping all of her dalliances separate and secret, to her liberation and openness with the rest of the family and adventures to come. Characterizing it as a failed chapter is unfair and frankly, quite immature. Some of the images here are abhorrent to me. In all my years I have never had sex with another man. The brothers giving themselves oral satisfaction is not my cup of tea, however I quite enjoyed the idea that mom was erotically fantasizing about her boys and completely understand and appreciated the fact that we are in for some new experiences in future chapters in a way that will liberate the entire family.
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| 2013-04-12 11:38:18 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 7 |
Comment 2 of 4
I believe some people simply don’t understand the broad picture. Yes, if this chapter is taken out of context, and read all by its self, without regards to the complete story, and taken only for its value as masturbation material, it may not be perceived as good as the previous chapters. However, if all of these chapters were to be bound into a book, and read consecutively, without a time span between them and in the context of a complete story, I doubt anyone would even take the time to comment on the chapter as a separate entity.
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| 2013-04-12 11:37:46 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 7 |
Due to character count limitations, I will respond to these posts in four installments. This will be 1 of 4
When Stephan King first introduces his book, “The Green Mile”, it was released in several small books separated in time by a good month or more. I read them one at a time, and waited, excitedly anticipating the next installment. (I’m a guy who can read a whole paperback on a flight to L.A. or sometimes several books in a week at home.) Yet it never occurred to me to contact Mr. King or his publisher and berate them for the long wait between installments.
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| 2013-04-08 11:23:08 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 7 |
Don't be discouraged by negative ratings and hater's posts... 68 comments in less than a week? You've done something right. My very first story with over 100,000 reads has 10 less than that!
You are one of the few authors here who remembers her grammar and composition classes. Your writing is excellent, your subject is well thought out and masterfully told and although I was getting impatient for the next installment, it was well worth the wait, and I'll gladly wait another few months for chapter 8.
Keep it up! |
| 2013-04-07 14:14:24 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 7 |
Don't be discouraged by low scores and low readership. There is a low life out there attacking stories with negative comments. I've experienced it as well as the purve. Don't know how many others but it seems to focus on normally successful and well written authors. Every chapter cant be a masterpiece, some need to set the stage for the next chapter. This one did that superbly. Keep it up. |
| 2013-03-28 07:31:41 |
Sadie 01 – Prolog & Awakenings |
Thank you for your kind words. Although it was 40+ years ago, I do remember my English Composition classes... |
| 2013-03-25 17:02:59 |
Sadie 06 – Marty, Beth and the Aussies |
I know, we were confused just trying to keep them straight in our own minds. It's not as confusing when you are a participant because you are just concerned with your immediate partner or partners. Everything else is a visual whose details don;t really matter.
You'll enjoy the next few chapters then because having gone back to our assigned aunts and uncles, there was less of a crowd around each of us.
Keep reading! there is more to come! |
| 2013-03-22 00:51:19 |
Maritime Law |
Krystal is mentioned in passing in the Sadie series as a past girlfriend lost because I cheated on her. But not by name. In life, when Krystal found out I cheated on her with Sammy, she dumped me hard and then her family moved to the east coast. Never saw or herd from her again. The ML series chapters 3&4 were pure fiction based on requests fro readers. All of the Sadie stories are true to the best of our recollection. |
| 2013-03-22 00:40:33 |
Sadie 05 – Little Jake and the Young’uns |
As I said, some are still with us, some have passed. No we're not writing these in their memory. We're writing this to share our memories of our sex life. While sex was a big pert of our lives, it did not dominate our lives. All of us had schooling, careers, families and other activities that consumed much more of our time than time in bed. I followed in my fathers footsteps in law as did Marty. Jen married a prominent physicist, Jules is a successful family councilor. A story in honor of those who passed would be in honor of their life achievements, not their prowess in bed. That would be a story for a different venue. |
| 2013-03-22 00:27:02 |
Sadie 06 – Marty, Beth and the Aussies |
I'm sorry. Bathing suits were swimmers. Don't know how my iPhone turned that into trainers. |
| 2013-03-22 00:24:14 |
Sadie 06 – Marty, Beth and the Aussies |
Our apologies. The twins were from Brisbane, thy had thick Australian accents ( to our ears), they called us mate and their bathing suits they called trainers. Otherwise, it was 46 years ago and we were teenagers then. It's how we remember it. Besides, I thought from my history lessons that the major population of Australia was based on the Pommies. But those history classes were more than 46 years ago. |
| 2013-03-21 00:13:26 |
A Teenage Crush |
Nice story by the way. |
| 2013-03-21 00:12:28 |
A Teenage Crush |
Don't get too caught up in high ratings. There is somebody or maybe a few who are sabotaging ratings. It's happened to my latest chapter of Sadie. Within minutes of publication it had 5 negatives to 10 positives but its steadily climbing now.
There are people wit no scruples out there and we just have to live with that. |
| 2013-03-20 01:40:10 |
Sadie 05 – Little Jake and the Young’uns |
Well, I guess you'll have to just keep reading the stories to find out. Yep we're all up there in the Sr. citizen range. Some of them have passed away. Some of them drafted away from the lifestyle and a few continue, some wit me and Sadie, some with others. The ones who keep in touch know about these stories and a few have begun to comment and contribute memories. It's been a great journey! |
| 2013-03-18 08:47:42 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 6 |
I am looking forward to part 7 |
| 2013-03-12 12:22:08 |
Sadie 01 – Prolog & Awakenings |
@LuckyThirteen... thanks for the comments. This is indeed a work of recollections and fond memories. There are four more chapters published and number six is nearing completion. There is much more to come. |
| 2013-03-01 16:26:50 |
Sadie 05 – Little Jake and the Young’uns |
Thanks.. Theses stories are about real people and real situations. Sex organs are average normal sized and nobody is trying to fool you into thinking we are mega porn stars or massage our egos with exaggeration. We're just regular people who love sex with multiple partners because that's how we discovered sex in or formative years.
Stick with us, there's lots more to come. |
| 2013-03-01 15:39:49 |
Andromeda1 |
Hey, your ratings are tanked. I don;t know why, your writing is excellent and descriptive. Don't get discouraged by the negative comments. There are simply people lurking here with less then productive lives. That said, if you would put an extra return after each chapter it would help the readability immensely. Keep up the good work! |
| 2013-02-28 07:20:42 |
Sadie 03 – Little Sister |
Thanks, we decided that we would like to try writing in a less crass manner and see if we could invoke the same erotic response from our readers. We think there may be some value in letting the readers mind make all the connections rather then putting it all right out there.
I guess it seems to be working. Thanks for the response. |
| 2013-02-21 10:25:38 |
Sadie 03 – Little Sister |
Life has been that way since the beginning of man. But not for everybody. In the 60's we were pretty Puritan outwardly. Lenny Bruce was thrown in jail for using four letter words in his act. People in general didn't act this way, but JFK was taking the virginity of White House Interns and the hippie movement was bringing sex out into the open.
It goes on today. Teens are creating dance rings at the prom to shield the couple "doing it" in the center. It's nearly a required ritual to lose your virginity at or after the prom and part of he expense of the night is for the hotel room afterwards.
Group sex has been going on since the biblical kings and Chinese emperors had hundreds of concubines. You wish you were a teen then? It's much wilder today! All you have to do is meet the right people and look for the right circumstance. |
| 2013-02-20 15:20:50 |
Sadie 03 – Little Sister |
<Should have included the gf. At least a scene where Susan or Jen test the waters and she says she'd consider it, but then backs out>
Maybe, but that's not what happened and we're trying to stick as close to the truth in these stories as we can remember from 40+ years ago! |
| 2013-02-20 07:46:26 |
Sadie 04 – Island Reunion |
[i] ...I can't help but be cynical about the truth factors for this story. Reason being that many people invent fiction stories while labeling them "true story"[/i]
I agree. We are, after all in a forum of fantasy and untruths, right down to our identities. However, let me assure you that although the descriptions and dialog are necessarily colored by time, the gist of these stories did happen roughly as described. While we have changed everyone’s names, including our own, if any of them read this they would recognize themselves immediately. We shared these with my sister and she loves it. Also, places and times are completely accurate and can be verified with a little research.
We are now in our 60’s, not rich but comfortably retired and we have decided to chronicle our sex lives for our own gratification. It’s not important if you believe in the truth, only that you enjoy.
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| 2013-02-19 09:07:40 |
Sadie 03 – Little Sister |
You'll need to keep reading as we continue our stories to find out. But I will say, when my sister visits, she doesn't use the guest room. ;-)
Thanks for your kind words. We're enjoying this new journey into the past! |
| 2013-02-15 12:14:34 |
Sadie 03 – Little Sister |
If you liked this story, wait until they get to Alabama!
Part 4 is in the works now! |
| 2013-02-15 12:13:00 |
Sadie 03 – Little Sister |
Yes this is part 3 of a true story that took place between 1965 and present day. Please go back and read Sadie 01- Prolog & Awakenings and Sadie 02 - The Summer of My 17th Birthday. Especially the prolog to understand the time line and motivations of our story. The dialog is mostly true, even the stupid things we said or did, so I apologize if it doesn't sound perfect, none of us are outside the movies. I hope you enjoy! |
| 2013-02-15 10:34:07 |
Sadie 03 – Little Sister |
"We are NOT doing anything together. But you need to get naked.
ugh"
I know, but it's what I said. I was 17 young and dumb. I just felt like if she was going to watch me naked, she had to join in. Yep, stupid. |
| 2013-02-08 20:21:41 |
Sadie 01 – Prolog & Awakenings |
Oops. Sorry about the double post. iPhones are touchy things! |
| 2013-02-08 20:20:34 |
Sadie 01 – Prolog & Awakenings |
Keep checking back. Chapter 2 is almost ready. Thanks for the pos feedback! |
| 2013-02-08 20:20:11 |
Sadie 01 – Prolog & Awakenings |
Keep checking back. Chapter 2 is almost ready. Thanks for the pos feedback! |
| 2013-02-08 14:02:03 |
Sadie 01 – Prolog & Awakenings |
Thanks for your input. We're glad you enjoyed it. Please realize these are true stories. We have added nothing but some of the dialog but the events are true. As for going from experimentation to naughty, realize this chapter took place over nearly two years. Perhaps we didn't make that clear enough. We'll try and improve on future chapters. As for the virgin boy part? It was written as it happened. Fast.
Part 2 is in the works and will be coming soon. Hope you like it as well.
Thanks, David and Sadie! |
| 2013-01-30 21:13:36 |
Maritime Law-the Last Cruise |
THIS PART RUINED THE WHOLE STORY, SO PLEASE, NEXT TIME, DON'T ADD A "BAD " THING AT THE VERY END!!
OTHERWISE IT WAS A GREAT STORY!!
Sorry it disappointed you. Originally I ended the story after two chapters but so many readers begged for more I relented. Others asked for the truth so I simply explained my motivations and which parts were try and which parts are fiction an why.
The coming stories of Sadie are all true, there are no bad parts so check back in a week or two for the first chapters. Hope you enjoy. |
| 2013-01-30 11:19:40 |
Maritime Law-the Last Cruise |
In retrospect, I could have included the breakup and ugliness at the end of chapter two and closed the series there. It was indeed very emotional and Krystal ans Samantha were never friends again. Bill moped about losing Krystal for several months but eventually started dating another girl, from another school, outside the ring of friends at his school. Had I done that however, I wouldn't have had the opportunity to delve into the world of pure fiction.
Just check back in a few weeks for the first chapter of "Sadie." I hope you enjoy it! |
| 2013-01-29 23:21:55 |
Maritime Law-the Last Cruise |
Yeah, I apologize for that. In my hurry to get the story out after all your kind comments I failed to proof it well enough. Thanks for reading and I'll make a more concerted effort to do better in the Sadie series. Besides, "Sadie" will be helping me to proof her story. ;-) |
| 2013-01-28 09:49:29 |
Maritime Law |
Check out parts 2 (retreat) and 3 (Reconciliation), and watch for the conclusion, part 4 (Final Cruise) coming soon. |
| 2013-01-26 20:15:51 |
Maritime Law, Retreat |
Reality was ugly. A girlfriend lost and a long friendship destroyed. So go read "Maritime Law - Reconciliation" for the fantasy next story and look for "Maritime Law - The Final Cruise" next week before the next series begins. |
| 2013-01-25 07:57:35 |
Maritime Law-04 Reconciliation |
Parts 1 & 2 were based on fact. The real story after the cheating was ugly for everyone and did not end happily. However so many people asked for more I took a chance on fictional sequels. Obviously, according to the ratings, I'm not as good at fiction. After one final chapter of this story, I will begin the true story of my life. Perhaps it will be better. |
| 2013-01-15 17:28:47 |
Maritime Law, Retreat |
Here's the thing, This story was based on true events. I'm comfortable writing about what I know. It is real which I think may have led lead to the unexpected high ratings of both of these chapters. What happened after this in real life does not make a good story for this venue. Real emotions took over, real drama ensued.
I have a new, much longer series of true stories that I think will blow these two out of the water. Can you wait for them, or do I try my hand at pure fiction now? Would it be as good to fulfill a fantasy or can we leave it real? I admit that I like sexual fantasy as much as anyone, but knowing the truth is sometimes far more erotic, like Samantha watching someone you know on the entertainment center instead of strangers on x-tube.
Just my thoughts... |
| 2013-01-14 19:22:50 |
Maritime Law |
Ok I have relented. Please look for "Maritime Law, Retreat".
For some odd reason it does not appear on my story list. |
| 2013-01-14 19:13:06 |
Maritime Law, Retreat |
Part one is Maritime Law.
Part two is Maritime Law, Retreat
I don't know why they don't both appear in my story list. |
| 2013-01-11 07:58:26 |
Maritime Law |
Well, even though my word count was below the minimum, my reply somehow got cut off before I was finished… so here is the rest:
(I’m bill, that’s how I lost my virginity and Krystal was my first real girlfriend) but having ventured into the realm of actually posting here for the first time, I accidentally hit the save button before I was fully aware of the selections I had made. I’ll be more careful next time.
A sequel? We’ll see. Nothing that followed this story in real life was as erotic as the first time and that has all been done before.
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| 2013-01-11 07:55:34 |
Maritime Law |
A couple of notes:
After lurking in the XNXX Story pages for quite some time, I decided to see if I could write a story that was erotic, but at the same time devoid of four letter words and crass references to body parts. That is not a condemnation of other’s writing styles, I actually quite enjoy many of those stories and, just as in real sex, sometimes you like it soft and mellow, and sometimes you want it hard and fierce.
From your reaction and the surprisingly high rating my story received, it appears I was somewhat successful. I appreciate all the kind words.
A note to the person who quoted the Bare Naked Ladies, I agree. But two points about that; first, humans have been having sex since Adam and Eve, and fathers have been over protective of their daughters ever since, so there is pretty much nothing that can be written about that hasn’t happened before. Second, although the story is listed as fiction, it was based on a true story; (I’m bill, that’s how I |