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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-02-12 02:05:01 |
In Riley's Arms: Part 1 |
Ah i see,my bad i had to read it again to catch it |
| 2013-02-07 11:13:33 |
The Boy Who Lived Down The Street |
As a FIRST. It shows you have alot of potential. Nobody writes a perfect first story and as for grammer and shit like that people just like to fucking complain. |
| 2013-02-07 11:07:43 |
Falling In Love With Kyle-Chapter 3 |
Guys chilll, let her work at her own pace |
| 2013-01-25 15:00:00 |
In Riley's Arms: Part 1 |
The story is good but the time line is jacked, how did holly go from 9 years old at the sart of the story to 15 with only a 2 and a half year time jump? |
| 2013-01-19 02:58:22 |
Only A Gothic Sisters Love Part 1 The Beginning |
Fuck it. Im less than 30 seconds in to reading and i give this story an a+ already for the breakfest club reference |
| 2013-01-19 02:51:41 |
The Overlooked Girl |
Girth of 4.5 inches... What are you rocking a fucking cola can, i call bullshit. |
| 2013-01-17 01:01:37 |
Tonight |
Really. Fucking keyboard warriors bitching about a fucking skank story that was well done. |
| 2013-01-05 20:37:57 |
Powers Out II |
I loved every bit of it! You must keep this series going hun. The only advice i have is reread it and extra time there are 2 or 3 spots that a confussing to read but other then that perfect |
| 2013-01-04 23:10:43 |
My mother, my lover (p.2) |
This was really good the only problem Had was in pt 1 you reffered to your self as gaby and is this you called youself kim |