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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-04-05 13:28:52 |
Family Affairs (Teri & Emily) |
Thank you Marine, for both your brilliant and insightful comments(at least from my perspective), and your service to this country. I am working on the next chapter, and it should be up no later than this time next week. Thanks to everyone for their patience and their encouragement to keep writing.
Peace
Vyper269 |
| 2013-01-29 13:15:38 |
Alivia |
Excellent work! Your first effort and you blasted it. Great start with an intriguing story arc. I'm looking forward to hearing more about Alivia's submissive nature. Nice story, well done. |
| 2013-01-28 10:46:10 |
Family Affairs (Aunt Sarah) |
Well, thank you. You and your pussy are most welcome! ;) |
| 2013-01-27 00:29:33 |
Family Affairs (Rachel) rev.1 |
Brave words from someone too cowardly to post under his own name! |
| 2013-01-24 22:13:40 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 6 |
Brilliant KB, just brilliant!! The texture and the imagery are awe inspiring to us all!! Thank you for sharing your beautiful, sexy, slutty imagination with us! Keep it up! |
| 2013-01-18 10:40:26 |
Family Affairs (Aunt Christina Pt. II) |
Anon: Thanks for the great feedback! I'm glad that I was able to surprise you. I write for myself for the most part, but I post to get feedback to get better at the craft. Thanks for following the story, looking forward to more great feedback like this to continually improve my own efforts.
Peace! |
| 2013-01-17 07:46:58 |
Family Affairs (Aunt Christina Pt. II) |
I'm really glad you're all enjoying the story. I am working on the next chapter for this arc, but as you all know life will insist on getting in the way of the stuff we really want to be doing. It shouldn't be too long. Thanks again for reading. |
| 2013-01-07 08:45:27 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 5 |
This is a great series! I love mom's conflicting emotions and the ultimate surrender to her baser desires. Well done! Can't wait for more! |
| 2013-01-07 08:40:36 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 5 |
This is a great series! I love mom's conflicting emotions and the ultimate surrender to her baser desires. Well done! Can't wait for more! |
| 2013-01-02 06:14:30 |
Family Affairs (Rachel) |
I re-edited this and re-posted it as Family Affairs (Rachel) rev1. I just included all of the breaks that the editing software omitted so it should be easier to read.
Thanks to all for the great feedback and comments. There are more chapters coming, but they need a little polishing first.
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