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Story title |
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| 2012-12-17 22:20:02 |
That Fucking Show |
OMG!!! That was so scary, when I saw the title I was thinking that the story was about that 70's show [i luv that show] btw~great story |
| 2012-12-17 22:00:50 |
My First Time, With Jessica ~Part 1 |
Please feel free to express your criticism so my friend can become a better writer. THNX. I mean it's kinda getting stupid at some parts, am I right???
P.s.: the word 'soon' didn't come out right |
| 2012-12-17 21:57:18 |
My First Time, With Jessica ~Part 1 |
Srry ppl. There must have been some error because my tags are mysteriously gone. o.o |
| 2012-12-17 21:47:27 |
Awoken... Naked |
I'm a first time writer i didn't know about tags. So don't be so mean about it!!! ›:( |
| 2012-12-16 01:36:14 |
Awoken... Naked |
please comment/positive rating it would make me super happy :) |
| 2012-12-16 01:07:50 |
Awoken... Naked |
again srry 4 the extra comment :) |
| 2012-12-16 01:07:07 |
Awoken... Naked |
Srry ppl kinda messed up on the last chapter heres the rewrite:
Chapter 8
Derrick said he was going to the pharmacy. Derrick untied Eli and said to stay in the room or else he will spank her. Eli didn't listen she went into the bathroom after he left. Eli scrubbed hard in the shower but no matter how hard she tried she still felt dirty. Derrick came home early, as Eli tried to get out the bathroom, Derrick came up the steps. When Eli finally got out she slipped and twisted her ankle when Derrick got into the bathroom he pinched her nipples hard. He threw a pregnancy test on the floor. Eli crawled over and grabbed it when she was finished. She sat and waited for the results.
To Be Continued P.S: srry if it wasn't 2 good im a 1st time writer :) |
| 2012-12-16 01:05:57 |
Awoken... Naked |
Srry ppl kinda messed up on the last chapter heres the rewrite:
Chapter 8
Derrick said he was going to the pharmacy. Derrick untied Eli and said to stay in the room or else he will spank her. Eli didn't listen she went into the bathroom after he left. Eli scrubbed hard in the shower but no matter how hard she tried she still felt dirty. Derrick came home early, as Eli tried to get out the bathroom, Derrick came up the steps. When Eli finally got out she slipped and twisted her ankle when Derrick got into the bathroom he pinched her nipples hard. He threw a pregnancy test on the floor. Eli crawled over and grabbed it when she was finished. She sat and waited for the results.
To Be Continued P.S: srry if it wasn't 2 good im a 1st time writer :) |