Comments from Cunnilique
|2012-12-07 19:06:45||Flashes of Brilliance||VERY solid story. Well executed and hot! Good build up.|
|2012-12-12 14:21:05||Twenty Odd Years 2 - The Cruise||Thanks folks! I really appreciate the comments.
I am wondering if there is an appetite for a third chapter. I have started outlining one. The problem is the third chapter is more emotional and, perhaps, less sexy - or full of sex. I wonder if it would be well received if it focused more on some of the difficulties an incest couple faces in society. Please tell me what you think.
|2012-12-12 16:27:26||Frustrated||nympholepsy was a typo which I was not able to have corrected once the story was posted. This site does not allow you to edit stories once they have gone 'live'. I do appreciate the feedback though.
For those wondering about the story. It's based on an article I once read about female sexual predators which was scary and fascinating. This ended up being my darkest story. It's all the more frightening to know there is at least a few women like this in the world.
Every once in a while, I have to try my hand at horror.
|2013-02-08 15:59:56||Lovers Without Realizing It||An excellent story. Such a wonderful mix of tension and mystery. Great dialog and pacing. Very sexy.|
|2013-02-10 16:19:20||Twenty Odd Years 2 - The Cruise||Twenty Odd Years 3 - Running Away; is now up. Please rate and leave constructive comments. Thank you for all your support.|