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2010-09-13 21:11:56 Sharing My Room With Sis 10: Abby's Fear I had to stop reading and collect myself. This is the first story on this site that has ever made me cry. I have read all of the other 9 stories you have posted before and I believe you are an very talented writer. All your stories have been tens but this story deserves a new category. The sensitivity and care you put into the pacing and characterizations has been perfect. It can be a tough job to walk that line between what's hot and what's sensitive. You have shown a mastery of this difficult balance. You have clearly elevated your game with this story. I say, get an editor and publish!
2010-09-13 21:28:12 Sharing My Room With Sis 10: Abby's Fear I want to mention also; you have gone exactly the right path with this series all the way. I think it is perfect. (well, a few spelling errors and dog breed changes) You were right not to lessen the love Abby and her brother feel for each other by including Izzy. The narrator doesn't care for Izzy the way he cares about Abby and it isn't in his character to do something that isn't the best thing for all of them. I think this is the perfect end to this story. There should be no further chapters. All the comments asking for inclusion of Izzy's father or the main character's mother or three-somes, are wrong. Trust your instincts. They are good. Let the story stand as it is. It is art.
2010-11-25 01:42:06 Good Vibrations A similar thing happened when I was that age. My parents were foolish enough to let us have mixed gender slumber parties all the way up until I was twelve. I lost my virginity when I was eleven. I have to say though, It wasn't the best thing. I didn't have sex again until I was seventeen and it was incredibly frustrating! I almost wish I had not lost my virginity so early.
2010-12-15 06:00:27 Well written, great details though the scenario strained my credulity to the breaking point. Though I enjoyed the story, I kept being pulled out of it by the thought, "That seems pretty fast/unlikely/over-the-top" I had to suspend too much disbelief for the story to be as good as it could have been. 6/10
2010-12-15 06:01:18 Well written, great details though the scenario strained my credulity to the breaking point. Though I enjoyed the story, I kept being pulled out of it by the thought, "That seems pretty fast/unlikely/over-the-top" I had to suspend too much disbelief for the story to be as good as it could have been. 6/10
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