Comments from ZondarTheBear
|2013-08-26 22:45:54||Times in my Life: Part Three||I really like reading this story. You still have a bit of a way to go on the technical side of your writing, but the story itself is spot on in a way that makes me want to read every chapter that you post. I'm glad that the poor boy FINALLY got to blow his load. Fucker should have been spanking his monkey like it robbed a bank after all that the girls had done to him in the earlier chapters, but at least now he got some fun for himself.|
|2013-08-27 17:55:58||Nurse Nice/Nurse Nasty||Yep, if you're not expecting it, or you're not into it, pee drinking can be a shocker all right. I won't even argue with the 'disgusting' description. I did use the 'watersports' tag though, so, I'm not really sure where things went wrong for you.|
|2013-09-02 22:23:49||Nurse Nice/Nurse Nasty||I'm actually working on turning this into a novella that runs parallel to my novella "The Nerd With the Footlong Dong". I should have it up on Amazon in the next few weeks, along with the rest of "The Reluctant Kidnapper, and an expanded version of "Oops, I fucked my cousin."|
|2014-02-26 03:44:52||The Reluctant Kidnapper||I'm actually in the process of turning this story into a full length novel. It should be up on amason and smashwords dot com soon.|
|2014-01-01 03:32:44||Oops, I Fucked My Cousin.||Dear anonymous reader 02:17:23,
Thank you for taking the time to write your little tirade about my little story. As you probably know, the human condition is defined by the finite number of minutes that we are given here on planet Earth, and you chose to use up several hours of those minutes in posting your little comment, as well as the several weeks that it obviously took for you to read the story itself. That means a lot to me, that you would give me so much of your life's precious moments. I wish you well in what is left of your life.