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| 2013-04-16 02:45:40 |
The Janitor: Part 1 |
This is actually really good! |
| 2013-04-15 23:44:16 |
The Park in the Dark |
I got lost halfway through and I was gonna say the same thing too! Don't write while high, doesn't tend to work out Hahah |
| 2013-04-15 23:34:55 |
Tweaking With Sister |
Okay... Now I'm starting to understand |
| 2013-04-15 01:08:26 |
don't tell mom the baby sitter gives head (intro) |
Nice build up and especially story, I'll be reading more. Though...this ones climax was a little rushed. |
| 2013-03-26 00:42:07 |
Tales Of Sport And Hunting : Part Two |
The next one we have been building up to this whole time!! That was the whole reason behind this trilogy and the tragedy that was its second part... I'll be publishing it once it's ready and yes it involves Lanny. Though Norma IS in it, nothing happened with her that day as her and Scott we're still in the experimental stage at this time.
Also whether or not you can guess it for yourself, part one of this trio was a very true story! Alright that's all until Part 3... See ya |
| 2013-03-26 00:22:22 |
Tales Of Sport And Hunting : Part Two |
Making it a very easy...as well as arousing story to write. I'm hoping to keep the bar that high for the rest of them.
Which...having talked to said Crazies over my little hiatus -- pleased with Lanny's story -- they have allowed me to keep on and tell the rest of it. Though they deny any of what I write as truth, in fact blaming Scott fully for all of this... However, fortunately, he is fine with that. ;)
I've been converting the journal in the meantime and I'm pleased to say it's coming along sexily. I hope to keep my standards of writing as satisfactory as said story and hopefully never again as bad as this one... Thank you for reading as well as putting up with our -- stupid rants... (Wait, hope this isn't one of them...) Look for the next story, on it's way! |
| 2013-03-26 00:14:54 |
Tales Of Sport And Hunting : Part Two |
Scott overreacted. I agree, this story was very poorly written, requiring me to stop and reevaluate my style.
The reason he is so upset? All of these are taken from an actual journal of sorts that he himself has dubbed his very own "Chronicles".
How much of these accounts are true and how much is not? Truthfully some of these start out as fantasy while others are mostly true. So, I am taking the lot of them and 'attempting' to blend it into a single canvas. Which, after starting on this, I am at the very least certain that every single girl in these "Chronicles" is someone from his life, regardless of what actually happened. Bringing me to thank you for all of the positive reactions that there were for Affairs Of A Family In Sin. It meant a lot to me as someone just starting out, really I'm honored to get such a high rating on this site! As far as story went though, I really didn't have to come up with a single thing for myself... It was all already there! |
| 2013-02-16 00:26:08 |
Tales Of Sport And Hunting : Part Two |
Well, Part Three is something to look forward to!!! Hell Yeah! Somehow both Lanny and even Norma get pulled into the mix of an extremely hot anal session! !With a girl I manage to bring home with me no less!!! -- How I Scored With The Male Classes Wet Dream!
Sorry is I offended anyone. With the exclusion, of course, of the anonymous reader who wants to criticize with a pride that feeds an ego probably in need of constant attention; and surely not even an authour himself.
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| 2013-02-15 07:09:40 |
Tales Of Sport And Hunting : Part Two |
You don't have any, so voting mine negative relieves you of your jealousy... or whatever possible creepy thing you got going on in your life. SO all power to you, asshole! |
| 2013-02-15 07:01:53 |
Tales Of Sport And Hunting : Part Two |
You know just because you don't like the story OR me in particular doesn't mean you have to resort to the juvenile act of sabotaging my other stories.
Give me a reason why you didn't like that other one AND show me some stories of your own! |
| 2013-02-15 00:47:30 |
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Thanks for the reply admin!
The mess should be cleaned up soon.
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| 2013-02-15 00:42:10 |
Tales Of Sport And Hunting : Part Two |
Thanks for that
Maybe it'll help now that I'm not loaded on Absinthe, which was the inspiration for this story
Your dickhead cynicism is always welcome though, I believe in constructive-- yeah whatever
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| 2013-02-14 16:10:35 |
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I wish I could just delete this now. It seems, at least from my perspective, that the admins aren't doing such though... Any one?
Editing, I know for certain they won't because they have ignored me for over a month now... All over trying to edit some very minor grammatical errors in my last two stories.
They are the same story! So now, not to mention this third exact same title, that is only a blank page! It just looks messy now... Any admins? What happened here? Because I've tried and tried emails.
--SuperScott
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| 2013-02-14 01:53:04 |
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You will now find an identical story next to this one but with a cleaner title and intro. Thanks. |
| 2013-02-14 01:46:37 |
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Thanks! Took your advice.
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| 2013-02-14 00:09:20 |
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So I'm pretty sure that last link was broken...
Sorry the Introductions doubled and so is a little sloppy up there but I'm just glad that, now, when I click on the link, a STORY pops up! I'm not sure what that was all about...
And I forgot lyrics by --Tori Amos |
| 2013-02-13 13:59:55 |
How I Met Karen's Clit / Improvising In Band Class |
I see...thanks. Making that a new priority then. |
| 2013-02-13 01:45:25 |
How I Met Karen's Clit / Improvising In Band Class |
No matter! Whether it is accidentally beside instead of behind!! An improperly placed word or, (in Volume II) a stupid period instead of an em dash, along with a more properly placed period -- when Lanny was telling me how to make the straw...
There seems to always want to be an error! Fuck!
Patiently though, I'll get it. Thanks for reading! |
| 2013-02-13 01:22:02 |
How I Met Karen's Clit / Improvising In Band Class |
Forgot to quote, --Tori Amos
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| 2013-02-13 00:22:51 |
The Lady Who Picked Me Up |
This story bothers me because it was my first written attempt, I edited it and edited it but some stuff still slipped by. As well as having just tweaked on it a bit too much... I think it bothers me though, because this particular one is for the most part a true story.
Oh well. So...now check out Part II, just now released! Sorry it took awhile... Editing and many interruptions... Melissa & Her Big Brown Beaver and Oh What A Night, coming up next. Thanks for reading. |
| 2013-01-14 22:12:40 |
The Lady Who Picked Me Up |
I realize now that this series isn't a chronicle and will not be referring to it as such anymore...
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| 2012-12-20 03:24:38 |
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I've already requested that these previous drafts be deleted. Sorry about the mess |
| 2012-12-19 20:03:30 |
Harry Potter and the Dark Princess . |
Agreed. Just can be over passionate, toward things.... I apologize Damus.
I was pretty fucked up on Absinthe when I went off like that..Not that it justifies it or anything. But I am NOT one to go any further then a little constructive feedback, ever. I don't go around bashing stories. Like I said I'm a just a fan, I was drunk, and I was belligerent.
I really regret that people may now see me in a negative light, when wrongly conceived.. Too late. Anyway...
I'm very sorry to Chaos Elf, any readers, and again to Damus. Thanks for that Damus.
-Scott |
| 2012-12-19 19:40:11 |
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Please now read the much edited and reformatted version.. Sorry |
| 2012-12-19 19:38:58 |
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Please now, read the Edited and Reformatted version, Sorry.. |
| 2012-12-19 14:05:27 |
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I Published my first story, then perfected my memory of Melissa while not critiquing this one enough. I finished it, never improving or building on the story at all. Being as I'm not proud of this one, I'm just going to leave it be. So, at least read the edited version which is still much better then this crap. Thanks |
| 2012-12-19 09:54:01 |
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My first story, so.. sorry for how horribly it's written... |
| 2012-12-19 07:16:35 |
Diary of the 15yr-old school slut: 1 |
Badass story, Very Hot |
| 2012-12-19 06:35:56 |
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Sorry, I meant for the old version.. I'm still waiting for them to take that one off |
| 2012-12-19 06:33:58 |
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Please now read the reformatted version... Sorry |
| 2012-12-19 06:33:09 |
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Please now read the reformatted version.. Sorry |
| 2012-12-19 06:30:43 |
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At least it introduces my family which will be in stories to still come |
| 2012-12-16 22:13:58 |
Drunk On Sex |
Pretty good, kinda started to falter at the end though... And yeah! Hazy party sex memories, always good. |
| 2012-12-14 09:44:15 |
I Saw My Sister Stripping And It Turned Me On - Chapter 2 Of 10 |
I have an itch deep inside, that I think only that -- will scratch... ??? What the fuck? |
| 2012-12-14 02:02:53 |
Harry Potter and the Dark Princess . |
Thank you Chaos-Elf... See "Damus," even he says he will improve the grammar for the second one... Chaos-Elf I just want to say, I was only giving constructive criticism. AS a huge fan of the H.P. universe; SO far SO good! |
| 2012-12-14 01:39:55 |
Harry Potter and the Dark Princess . |
I've already said thank you for clearing things up! What else do you want from me "Damus"? I know it's FANfiction, and I am VERY familiar with the story. I am a fan. Dumbass... How else would I know all of that about the H.P. universe?
You sir, are obviously one of the ones who need to NOT have kids... |
| 2012-12-13 14:36:30 |
Harry Potter and the Dark Princess . |
Still... Maybe you wouldn't have had to explain that to me if this guy would take the time to punctuate properly. That way I might be able to actually read this thing and enjoy it... Anyway, thanks for clearing that up. |
| 2012-12-12 07:24:06 |
my brothers join in 2 |
Nice, that was a very good bi story. |
| 2012-12-11 20:55:21 |
Stepsister Seduction: Chapter 3: Seducing a new Victim |
Excellent writing sir |
| 2012-12-08 16:09:33 |
The Great Out doors Day 1 and Morning of 2 |
Exactly! What's with this crap. |
| 2012-12-08 14:36:37 |
My girl and I's Rollplay |
I going to have to agree with everyone, as well as add something myself -- WTF!? |
| 2012-12-08 03:27:32 |
Alissa and I Part two |
This is too hard too read. Write better next time. |
| 2012-12-08 03:19:20 |
The First Time |
You guys are all just being over judgemental. Yes your right it's not a poem but I still found myself getting caught up in it just the same. Good Job. |