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| 2013-05-18 17:55:07 |
Fucking My Neighbor and His Sexy Friend |
I don't think I"ll make more because between all my stories on all my accounts this is the only one rated so lowly and the only difference is this character is a black girl. Which is unfair. So I don't want to write another one just to have stupid racists rate it down. |
| 2012-12-05 00:25:52 |
Fucking My Neighbor and His Sexy Friend |
Oh sorry, I just make stuff up, I don't really play Skyrim myself. I just saw it and it looked cool. None of this comes from experience. None of my characters are me.
I try to fact check things, well....major things. I'm not really sure the controller thing makes any real impact on the story. Substitute any game you want that you think would logistically work.
I'd probably fact check more seriously if this was something I was getting paid for, or if I expected to get much more from sharing it other than ire, complaints, "criticism" from people who can't write and aren't important, plus the random and ever so meaningful "loved it!" but since I don't, I just write these stories for fun. I'm okay with a few errors. |
| 2012-11-28 07:31:44 |
The night I fucked a 12 year old black boy |
Another piece of crap. Just stop. No one shares your fantasy bro. |
| 2012-11-28 07:29:03 |
Black 10 year old boy lured into van |
Agreed with this comment "Next story should be how his older brothers found out and made you their BITCH!!! "
and about how I found you and used my strap-on to fuck you in the ass. |
| 2012-11-28 07:27:21 |
fucking a 8 year old black girl |
What is this piece of shit. As a black girl who is actually named Tracy if I could find you I would kick your ass. Then I'd get my dildo and fuck you in the ass. Until you cried. Then I'd wait until you had kids, wait until they were 8 years old, and then fuck THEM in the ass. |
| 2012-11-26 22:55:09 |
Fucking My Neighbor and His Sexy Friend |
Well if you guys don't mind, I don't mind either! Cause I would still be adding tons of S-E-X! LOL |
| 2012-11-26 21:11:04 |
My Therapist pt 1 |
There is not character maximum. There's a minimum, not a maximum |
| 2012-11-26 05:56:46 |
Fucking My Neighbor and His Sexy Friend |
Sorry if this comment is a repeat out but it didnt seem to post last time, I just wanted to mention I never said I'd do a sequel or promised that. I said I'd definitely consider it. I did, and I can't think of anything else I'd want to do that would make a good sex story. I do have some ideas I want to explore taking these characters farther in a more character-driven not sex-driven story, so that might be something I'd pursue just for myself or on another site. But it would be romantic cheesy type stuff that you've already warned me again. So this is it for this site. Sorry, but I did write it as a standalone to begin with. I'm just glad for anyone who has enjoyed it. |
| 2012-11-26 05:53:42 |
Becoming The Favorite II (Formatting Fixed) |
Disgusting? It's just playful. And her giving him anal sex would not be a treat just for him. Obviously you've never had anal. Are you another teenager? *sigh*
As for the person who says bring in Emma...no. Every story has a guy getting two girls. I don't write that. I am a girl and I want to read about a guy with eyes for only one girl. I know that doesn't exist, but let me have my fantasy. There are enough stories about horny boys who fuck every vagina in their family. It's unromantic. They don't love any of those chicks - well not beyond a family love - they just want to get laid. Henry is staying with Lizzy because she is the one that loves him most.
If there is a sequel it will be lots of dirty anal fun because that's what I like. And they've already done anything else. There will be no girl-on-girl in any of my stories ever. I'm not even mildly interesting in anything that doesn't have a penis. Sorry! |
| 2012-11-24 23:15:59 |
Becoming The Favorite II (Formatting Fixed) |
Oh thank you, I noticed that and changed it before I put it on another site. You can fix errors here though. It's kinda a bummer. :/ |
| 2012-11-24 21:19:46 |
Fucking My Neighbor and His Sexy Friend |
Thank you so much! You obviously get exactly why I wrote this. I read a LOT of sex stories and they are all about basically the same girl. It gets monotonous for me. Other girls need love too! Glad you enjoyed, and I will definitely consider a sequel. =) |
| 2012-11-21 00:44:01 |
Becoming The Favorite II - Henry is Horny |
Aw thanks! People have....interesting reasons for rating things down on this site. The score seems to be improving though since people who do like it are voting. I also posted a fixed version that's easy to read. The ending is also a little different in that one, it had to be changed to meet another site's guidelines. |
| 2012-11-20 23:09:42 |
Becoming The Favorite II - Henry is Horny |
Hey guys I see I'm getting slammed with a lot of negative votes, so if you like this be sure rate positive. If you don't like it, be sure to tell me what's wrong with it. I am posting this another site and I'd like to know what's bad before I go embarrass myself elsewhere. Thanks! |
| 2012-11-20 20:56:57 |
Becoming The Favorite II - Henry is Horny |
Oh man, the formatting is bunk again! If you can't read it guys let me know and I'll post a fixed version. |
| 2012-11-20 20:43:45 |
Becoming The Favorite (Formatting Fixed) |
Hey Arthur! I wrote you back. Hope it helps! |
| 2012-11-18 11:32:04 |
Becoming The Favorite (Formatting Fixed) |
Um I dont need to google a hymen, I had one and I lost it, and I know what it felt like to me so that is what I wrote. It wasn't right at the entrance and I don't give a damn if Google says it is or it should be. Google is not the authority on anything.
Maybe mine was one inch inside me instead of two. Maybe it was two. We'll never really know will we? My gyno says I have a really deep pussy, and she said it as she was looking for my cervix and had to lunge to find that fucker. So I'm inclined to believe her. After all, I'm 5'10 and wear a size 11 shoe. The character in this story is also super tall.
But either way...who cares? This is fiction. Must we nitpick everything to death? |
| 2012-11-18 01:07:02 |
Becoming The Favorite (Formatting Fixed) |
Hey, I could work on a part 2. Maybe one told from Henry's POV, since I'd wanted to tell more about what the was thinking and feeling during all this and afterward. I'll give it a shot! |
| 2012-11-17 17:08:32 |
Becoming The Favorite |
But you know what, I'll make it up to you. I will try to write a story with just guys. Will you forgive me then? Cause If not, I'm doing all that work. LOL |
| 2012-11-17 17:06:53 |
Becoming The Favorite |
Like I said. Minor mistake. Srsly, it's not like I came to your house and sat on your dog or something. lol |
| 2012-11-17 17:06:11 |
Becoming The Favorite (Formatting Fixed) |
Oops commented on the wrong story, sorry! |
| 2012-11-17 17:05:47 |
Becoming The Favorite (Formatting Fixed) |
Like I said. Minor mistake. It's not like I came to your house and sat on your dog. Take a chill pill. |
| 2012-11-17 12:41:41 |
Becoming The Favorite |
Oh, I see it now. Sorry, there's no way I can change the tag. Also it's impossible for me to delete the story as well. We'll all have to live with my minor mistake. |
| 2012-11-17 02:01:46 |
Becoming The Favorite |
Aw thanks, I'm glad! |