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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-11-27 19:48:47 |
Jason's Growing Family Chapter 1 |
Strange scenario. I like the subject matter, but it's not really erotic just yet, if you know what I mean. Maybe it'll get sexier. |
| 2012-11-26 22:19:14 |
Jessinta 01A - The Beginning (reworked) |
Yes, long, but I like it so far. |
| 2012-11-26 15:36:52 |
Horney Single Mom Fucks Her Hot Babysitter |
Very very sexy story, thanks. I'd love to read more with involvement of the young ones. |
| 2012-11-26 15:18:43 |
"The Man of the House" Part 1 |
Very long and slow. Each episode, even near the start, could have had a sexual scene, but opportunities were wasted all along the way. Also, huge jumps of a few years each, just when things looked promising. |
| 2012-11-14 03:42:34 |
Emma and the Kidnapper |
Interesting, but not erotic, as it is written in a factual-retelling kind of way, like a TV documentary. I did like it, though, especially the way Emma and Marisol were treated in a kind, loving way. |
| 2012-11-14 02:47:51 |
Double Dose of Bad Seed 6.4: The CD's |
Good and bad: I loved little Lily licking her mother's cunt, but hated the snuff! Who can show me stories like this but all kind and loving? |
| 2012-11-14 02:32:38 |
Jason's Little Family (rewrite) Chapter 2 |
Very nice, though I'd prefer the girl younger. |
| 2012-11-14 02:28:29 |
Taste my Milk Part 2 |
I'd love it if Sean drank from one while little Lisa drank from the other. Some oral and fingering thrown in, and it would be incredibly hot! |
| 2012-11-14 02:23:08 |
Daddy Takes Care of Her Little Problem (7) |
Very cute, and very sexy! |
| 2012-11-14 02:09:39 |
My Daughter's Slumber Party |
I'd prefer one with younger girls, and more "being nice" to them. |
| 2012-11-14 01:39:10 |
My Daughter's Slumber Party |
I'd prefer one with younger girls, and more "being nice" to them. |
| 2012-11-12 17:55:05 |
GOOD MORNING, MARILYN |
Very sexy story. It didn't end being about Marilyn, though. I love the involvement with the little sister! Silly boy for not getting into that a few years earlier :) |