||Harry Potter and the Spellbook of Desires.
||Ok thanks guys for giving me his name. I couldn't find the story on this site so now that I know he is here I can discontinue the story :)
||My Son's Cum Rag, part 1
||Oh shit that makes me want to have a mom like that.
||Having Sex with Lots of People (parts 1-5)
||"Some random dude whose name is Josh"
This is funny man. Do you know what's even funnier???
||OH the cruel and utter suspense!!!
I'm glad I never found this until you finished writing the series.
||Poor Jenny and Joey.
Interesting turn of events, though it didn't take me nearly so long to guess who was the father of Joey.
||Can't wait to read more!!
||Aunty and I
||I forgot to say that the sex was fake although my aunt had been in the kitchen when I had the blankets back and my dick hanging, so she might actually have seen it. I jerked off with her right there in the kitchen. They actually did have a kid. So its just the sex between us thats a fantasy.
||Being a dude I can totally see how you forgot about sis. Seriously though woman say all these things mean something completely different and then get mad when are monkey brains dont get it.
||Dude that sucks. Fuck you fate!! Enjoy it as it comes man. Was there protection back in those times?
||Lucky bastard getting to bj before finding out its his sis. I have constant fantasies about my sis but would never do anything.
||the day i found my son fucking me
||Whoa lucky kid.
I think detail would have led to better comments from the anonymous readers.
||High School Hell part 2
||I do apologize. I forgot to say CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. When you only say "It sucks" that doesn't help me to improve the story.
The two comments about it being too short were helpful. I had not realized the story was so short.
I will be writing another story, a different one, and I ill try to make it better.
One of the reasons my stories may lack large amounts of description is because I haven't had any real sexual experience.
So, again, I apologize.
Seriously though, constructive criticism.
||testing bros dont rate.
||Haha okay not really sure what you were testing
||Hunger games with a little extra;)
||Write a part two. And all these whiners if they dont like dont have to read it. Although to be fair you really should work on the writing skills.
||XNXX HUNGER GAMES REDO
||It's a fantasy, is my guess. Go ahead and keep writing. But when you post you can disable comments and votes.
The actor they got for Katniss was hot and ive had a couple fantasies.
||Black mailing my manager
||Sounds like good sex to me. Give her a really hard spanking for me will you:)
||The Babysitter Diary
||Very well done. Is this a true story?
||Progenitor 1: The Beginning
||Very well done and explained. Keep writing!!!