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| 2013-04-12 14:48:00 |
Chace McCartson - Part V |
Hey,
Thx for the support and don't worry, I'll tag it when bestiality is shown in the story - but I hardly recommend that you read it, because it will be a good scene and nothing like the bestiality scenes around here.
Part VI is almost done.
Cheers,
A2O |
| 2013-04-09 20:29:19 |
Chace McCartson - Part V |
Hey,
I'm still writing part VI, but unfortunately I can't give you a date of release as it all depends on how much time I'll have. It can be tomorrow just like it can be next week. The only thing I can say is that I'm focused on the writing and this part will be almost completely filled with sex/torture scenes.
Cheers,
A2O |
| 2013-04-02 08:39:16 |
Chace McCartson - Part V |
Don't mention it, I love to talk to readers, I'm basically fueled by knowing that there are people waiting to read what I write, otherwise I don't find courage to skip studies, work and other stuff only to write when time is so short.
The problem answering to these questions here is that they are spoilers and I would appreciate if those things were said by message, so I can explain things in detail not worrying that someone can read it by misfortune. I hate spoilers and other people do to.
What you need to know about Candy is that she is a mean to an end. She will affect only two aspects of the story: It's aggressivity and ERIKA. Yes, Erika. I can't explain more about it without running into huge spoilers. About her permanence, her hole and other kidnaps, only through message.
What I want you to know is that, again, I don't do things just for doing and that you have to trust me. A normal and monochromatic relationship is not the way for this story to work.
Cheers,
A2O |
| 2013-04-01 11:51:12 |
Chace McCartson - Part V |
3- Lack of sex scenes, darkness and description: First of all, this chapter, as I already explained up there, is practically an intro to the next one, as they were meant to be one. I decided to separate them as it would take to long to finish and I was already late. It made me use only one "sex" scene and save three others to the next one. About dark things and violence, don't worry. Believe it or not, the story is in the beginning. I'd say at its 30% or less. You can wait the story to go darker and darker as it goes, trust me. About the descriptions, I'm gonna pay more attention into that, as I'm running against the clock to not let you waiting I'm killing some of the writing. Let's see if I can fix that.
4- I'm doing my best to post the next part around wednesday or thursday, but as always, I can't promise.
I wish I have reader's support until I finish the story (around chapter XV or so) then I'll know if I chose right to keep what I defined for this to be.
Cheers,
A2 |
| 2013-04-01 10:48:50 |
Chace McCartson - Part V |
Well, I'll answer all your questions in topics:
1- Candy: I know you think Candy is unnecessary, just as some of you thought that Gabrielle was, and now I'm noticing that she's having a very different level of acceptance now that I'm having the oportunity to show you what is her true hole in the story. Have in mind that a story is composed of both good and bad happenings. If I leave things untouched and running perfectly, the story loses impact. Let me show you why I brought Candy to life, how will it be her thing with Chace and how will Erika react to that. Then you tell me, ok?
2- Chapter in Erika's point of view: Yes, I could certainly do that. I just need the confirmation that readers want me to do that, and that's all. Maybe I'll experiment that in chapter VII, as I'll have a really good plot to explore with her then. |
| 2013-03-31 13:39:29 |
Chace McCartson - Part IV (Second publishing attempt) |
Part V is republished and now can be read.
Anonymous reader
2013-03-31 02:42:26
I know that you'd like the story better if it was only about them two, but there are some things that Chace wanna do (and me too) that he is not doing to Erika. I could explain better if we were talking through messages, because it would contain spoilers. As it is not happening, I'm sorry, but you just have to trust me.
Cheers,
A2O |
| 2013-03-30 09:23:43 |
Chace McCartson - Part IV (Second publishing attempt) |
Part V is already published, but the story didn't show yet. I'm waiting until tonight to see if it is stuck or if it is just a normal delay.
Cheers,
A2O |
| 2013-03-25 14:02:43 |
Chace McCartson - Part IV (Second publishing attempt) |
Thanks for the comments, you all. I'm having personal problems that are stopping me from writing these days. Nevertheless, story will be up before friday, you can count on it.
Another thing: I enjoy damn too much reading readers opinions and I'm pretty sure the way you think that the story should be good would be really good, but I have to have my personal fun too, right? This story, for more that Erika has a major play in it, is about Chace, so it will not be focused only on their relationship, no matter what. It would be like I was betraying myself if I get out of what I'd enjoy to see in my own story. Anyway, you'll have to trust me on this. If you liked it till now, I'll do anything in my capability to keep it that way.
Cheers,
A2O |
| 2013-03-11 13:45:24 |
Chace McCartson - Part IV (Second publishing attempt) |
Good to know that there are still people interested on this. I'll keep writing, but I'll follow my original plan for this story, which can be different of what you expect of this. But you'll have to trust me on this one. Next part will be online in the next days.
Cheers, A2O |
| 2013-02-27 17:14:50 |
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That was fucking great. The only thing that I missed was the girl's description, but yet, hell of a hot story. Thanks for posting this! |
| 2013-02-11 08:29:33 |
Chace McCartson - Part IV |
This have been happening to my stories for a while. I post it and it take days for the story to show up and people being able to vote. But this one is taking so long that I'm starting to think that it will not fix alone. Really weird. |
| 2013-01-15 06:05:18 |
Chace McCartson - Part III |
Hmm, so Gabrielle does have a fan... That changes things a little lol
Jokes apart, I'm sticking to my original plan for this story. Part IV is really late and it's getting as big as Part III, so, you can wait a little longer, but will have more content to write, ok?
Thx all for the support,
A2O |
| 2013-01-14 08:27:48 |
Chace McCartson - Part III |
I wasn't able to write these days, so it will take a little longer to post the fourth part. The only good thing about it was that I could think things through and I decided what to do:
SPOILER ALLERT! STOP READING IF YOU DON'T WANT TO KNOW THINGS IN ADVANCE!
- As Gabrielle isn't getting any fan, things will change for her in a way I would bet money that you'll like, as you don't like her and you want him more sadistic... Why not make it a combo, right?
- I'll stick to my original plan: Chace will get a lot of other slaves, three of them already planned and temporary, and one that will appear when his story with Erika is already well developed and that will add some spice to the story.
I think part IV will be online wednesday, or tomorrow with a lot of luck. Let's see how it goes.
Cheers,
A2O |
| 2013-01-10 06:32:50 |
Chace McCartson - Part III |
I'm glad you liked it. Don't worry about Gabrielle, I think you'll like what is going to happen. About Chace being soft... The next part will start really, really soft, but you'll be happy with the ending scene. I'd bet. I'm still deciding if he'll bring a second and temporary slave to the scene or if he will do all the atrocity with Erika.
Next chapter will be posted at weekend, or maybe monday, it'll all depend on how busy I'll be today and tomorrow.
A2O
P.S: By "wedge" you mean that padded little ramp used to let them spread and exposed? You just made me a great favor, cause I always wanted to know the name of this son of a bitch lol (I still think it would be great if you sent me a message. I think I could improve my arsenal a lot) |
| 2013-01-07 08:17:25 |
Chace McCartson - Part II |
I'm trying to focus a little more in detail. I haven't done it before because the story ends up being too long, and it takes longer to post. I use MS Word to check up my text but yet errors still occur. I check the story twice before posting but as I'm not translating, I'm actually writing it in English,which is not my native language, it is a really slow process. I could use someone proof-reading for me, but it would take even more time to post.
About toys and video, Chace has a chamber full of apparels and devices. Don't worry, there is a lot of stuff to come.
His relationship with Erica will be very different from that he thought it would be at the beginning and I'm anxious to see what you'll think about it. Starting already at part 3. But don't worry, nothing that can compromise or fun time imagining Chace rejoicing on her company.
If you want spoilers or ask anything about the story, add me as friend and send me a private message through the board.
Cheers,
A2O |
| 2013-01-06 20:37:24 |
Chace McCartson - Part II |
Don't worry, I'll post another part, I promise. It's late due to the holidays and a travel. I'll post it tomorrow and it will be validated by the site tuesday, I think.
And thx for the support!!!
A2O |
| 2013-01-05 08:17:04 |
Chace McCartson - Part II |
Thx for the comments!
A new part will be released in the next couple days. |
| 2012-12-20 09:08:47 |
Dominating and Owning a Punk Ep.2 Natalie Dominates Sam |
Dick penetrating a cervix and into a womb? 9" girth dildo? Bizarre, insanely impossible and screw it, I loved it anyway. lol |
| 2012-12-20 07:24:37 |
Dominating and Owning a Punk Ep.1 Breaking Samantha |
This is awesome man! I've been searching for something like this for a while now. I'm even writing a story like this, but my English is not this good. Read it if you feel doing it. I'll read the next chapters of this for sure.
A2O |
| 2012-12-17 21:15:49 |
When In Rome - 03 |
Another brilliant chapter. The moment Callie crawled back to him with the whip in her mouth... Fuck. That was awesome. |
| 2012-12-15 07:38:12 |
When In Rome |
This is absolutely awesome. I'll read all the following chapters as soon as I can. Loved Callia's description and the same as the last guy said, cruel but sexy, just the way I like it. As for the nazis, they're everywhere trying to correct everything so, just ignore them.
Congratulations and thanks for writing such a wonderful story. I'll vote up as soon as I can vote tomorrow, I promise. |
| 2012-11-23 08:43:36 |
Sweet Little Sister - Part 4 |
Mucker
2012-11-23 08:15:17
None taken, my friend. You see, those pics are just to help you figure out how they would look like, they're not exact. What matters most is the description I gave in the story as, indeed, they are younger there. The pics are just a small guide. Anyway, I'm glad you care enough to make this comparison.
Thanks,
A2O |
| 2012-11-22 18:34:55 |
Sweet Little Sister - Part 3 |
Part 4 is online! Click in my nick and go to my stories to find the link to it.
A2O |
| 2012-11-22 17:28:42 |
Sweet Little Sister - Part 4 |
For the ones of you that want to know how the characters look like in detail, just check the album "Character Models" on my profile on the Forum site. I posted pictures of the models I used to set their appearances. Check it if you want!
A2O. |
| 2012-11-20 18:46:39 |
Sweet Little Sister - Part 2 |
Hi, Part 3 is already online. Just click at my nickname and go to my profile to access my stories. It is on front page stories right now.
Part 4 will be online tomorrow or the day after.
Cheers,
A2O |
| 2012-11-19 13:04:10 |
Sweet Little Sister - Part 3 |
I'm glad you're liking it. I'm still having some problems formatting the text but, at least, now they're shown at the edit screen, so I can work on it. It'll delay the writing a little, but I'm doing it anyway. You can expect Part 4 to be online Wednesday or Thursday, maybe earlier if I'm lucky.
Cheers,
A2O |
| 2012-11-18 08:12:00 |
Sweet Little Sister - Part 3 |
Seems like they fixed it, or it was a momentary thing, I don't know, as I wasn't notified.
Thing is, I'm back at writing so you can expect part 4 to be uploaded to the site anytime soon, as soon as I finish writing it.
I'm glad you're enjoying it, thanks!
A2O |
| 2012-11-16 12:31:26 |
Sweet Little Sister - Part 3 |
I've sent a message to the administrators but I have no idea if they will write me back or fix this. It happened not only to this one, but with all my 3 stories posted and I don't know how to fix this.
Any of my readers can send me a message with your mail and I'll send you the .doc of the entire story so you can read this part too.
I'm really sorry about this, as I can't keep writing not knowing if they'll fix this up.
A2O |
| 2012-11-16 12:07:23 |
Sweet Little Sister - Part 3 |
I don't know what is happening. The story was fine until 3 hours ago, now I have weird marks all over it. This is really weird. I'll try to get help with the adms... This looks like someone hacked it. |
| 2012-11-13 06:38:24 |
Sweet Little Sister - Part 2 |
Thanks guys! Doing my best to post the third part today. I'll let you know.
Cheers, A2O. |
| 2012-11-13 06:34:48 |
Sweet Little Sister |
Anonymous reader
2012-11-12 16:49:48
Are you retarded or just want to piss me off? Things started at seventeen, she just had a crush on him. Read the fucking story before saying this kind of shit for Christ's sake...
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| 2012-11-10 12:08:25 |
Sweet Little Sister - Part 2 |
Third part is being written and will be up Monday or Tuesday. Thx for the support!!!
Cheers, A2O. |
| 2012-11-09 11:41:03 |
Sweet Little Sister |
Thank you very much, dreamer. I really appreciate the fact that you enjoyed it and, most of all, the hints about what went wrong. Part 2 is online and I'm working at part 3, hoping to commit fewer mistakes.
Thx again, A2O |
| 2012-11-08 06:59:23 |
Sweet Little Sister - Part 2 |
Hey guys, thx for the compliments! I really like the way this is progressing, as most of you got my idea: I'm not good enough writing in English to make someone read it just for my writing. I write for the story and, as long as I'm being supported, I'm not stopping. Part 3 will show you guys that there's a lot more to come. I'll approach every single sex topic I can remember into this very story as soon as I still have a good number of readers and votes, so, buckle up and enjoy!
Thx again, A2O. |
| 2012-11-06 14:26:24 |
Sweet Little Sister |
Finishing part 2 today, it must be online tonight or tomorrow morning. Thanks for the support guys. |
| 2012-11-04 06:42:59 |
Sweet Little Sister |
Hi, thx for commenting.
I'm using MS Word, but some error are still passing through. I'll try to get better for part 2, but without knowing exectly what went wrong it's kinda difficult. If any of you guys want to receive a copy of part 2 before I release it, just marking in red where the errors occur I'd be really glad, and I could let you join the creation of the stories or ask for something to happen on the scenes - since it matches the story - as a gesture of gratitude. Any interested please message me.
Thx again! A2O |
| 2012-11-03 21:48:12 |
Sweet Little Sister |
First of all, thanks for the comments, specially the constructive ones.
Second, as I've said to you guys, I knew I would make mistakes, but I'm really new on this site and I don't have someone to proof it for me. If anyone have interest in doing so, I'd be really grateful.
Third, I've never read something like this here. Tell me the title if you can and where I can read it cause the theme really interests me. Also, if I notice that the story is really alike I'll send a message to the author apologizing. Plagiarism sucks and I hate it.
Again, thx for commenting. Private messages are welcome too. See ya. |