Comments from TheBigLove126
|2012-11-27 19:42:44||Aunt Alison: Part 1||Note from author:
Part 2 is coming, I cant give a timetable when though. About the repetitiveness, I've had comments on other stories (not on this site) that said I wasn't "detailed" enough and needed to "extend the scenes" so you get what you get. About the comment saying that it was turn-off that I killed off grandpa..."The only
medicine she thought would help would be a visit to the family she had missed so dearly" was the line right after it, explaining why that element was necessary...and really, if killing off a character that minor prevents you from reading, I don;t want you reading anyway. I've written ALOT nastier stories that would offend the majority of you (again, not on this site. I'm sure they would not be allowed anyway [search my name on asstr dot org to see what i mean]).
|2012-12-01 17:39:34||A Gift for Her Father||Notes from the author:
First off I apologize for the format, it was fine when I copied it and it will not let me edit it so there is nothing I can do about it. Sorry.
Abouth the father changing his stance so quickly, I dont write consensual stories that often (unless the involve celebrities, which is the bulk of the story plots and even then I do celeb rape stories more often) so I am still learning on how to properly pull off reluctance. Same deal with the person who said "make it longer, have her feel the sensations", I will improve in future stories.
This story was not like others I've done where I plan out and take my time. I literally wrote, edited and posted this story in under 3 hours. I don't usually do that, but I wanted to get it done when it was fresh in my head.
To the person complaining of incest...die in a ditch
|2013-08-01 02:53:26||Aunt Alison: Part 1||Part 2 has been started but I am currently stuck on where to take it next and I have about 110-15 celebrity stories in my queue so I cant give a timetable as to when it will be posted but I will try my best to get it done|
|2013-08-04 07:41:32||Mountain Misery||"sick retard" is not the worst thing I've ever been called so if that was meant as an insult, then you fail. Also, you were the one who clicked on a story with 'snuff', 'rape' and 'violence' very visible before entering the page with the story on it. What did you expect? Kittens and puppies frolicking through a field of sunflowers...that sounds enchanting and all but not for a porn site.|