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| 2013-05-03 19:13:00 |
Fire Class - Chapter 1 |
yay this is good, if this come on in book and/or movie format i'm going to buy/watch this, keep up the good work. and what the same thing as the proof reading. |
| 2013-03-08 18:47:25 |
The Greatwar 3033 Chapter 1 Part 7 Jack have a new friend |
ya sorry about that I've got great ideas, and can put them down on paper, it just trying to get the idea across that i have trouble with. if you really what bad have a look at my first post them come back and read this one again and tell me the differents. (as i know my first one was just down right fucked bat shit), any way im getting better |
| 2013-02-21 11:11:41 |
Eternal Darkness: Chapter Seven |
they are not going to give you infomation as they cannot see what you've posted, so all of you that are asking are not going to get an up date until they decide to go back on line |
| 2013-02-20 15:39:34 |
Eternal Darkness: Chapter Seven |
ok to the guy that told me to go back and have a look at mishs' post yes i know that she broke caps' pc but im say if you have a look at their profile you well see why they have not posted anything as they have not been on to post updates or the next part |
| 2013-02-17 10:30:11 |
Mages practies |
sorry what do you mean by ryan.bc |
| 2013-02-17 05:36:47 |
Mages practies |
Anonymous reader
2013-02-16 22:51:18 English is my native language, but i was typing this on my phone so some of the words and punctuation would be wrong, and wolf_knight (great stories loved the modern mage series, it the one that got me hooked on writing) thanks i well try and ask first, and not do the post first ask questions later type deal |
| 2013-02-16 15:56:33 |
Eternal Darkness: Chapter Seven |
well if you have a look at his/her profile (as mish is also using it) you well get you answer as to why there have been no updates |
| 2013-02-15 16:19:29 |
Eternal Darkness: Chapter Seven |
ive just looked cap fourm profile and it say that they have not been on from the 11th and im starting wonder whats happening. |
| 2013-01-18 17:24:46 |
Biology 101. |
ya you can just put down shadow |
| 2013-01-18 16:58:16 |
Biology 101. |
ya you can just put down shadow |
| 2012-12-09 16:26:09 |
The Greatwar 3033 Part 5: Jack find something out |
the next part will be up soon problem in the next week or so, this one is going to be longer and prob better then the other 5
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| 2012-12-04 14:28:07 |
Fire Class Part Two |
pretty good but you did mess up on one of the lines where you call prince a her but its still pretty good |
| 2012-11-25 11:27:32 |
The great wat 3033 part 4 |
ya sorry about that i cannot do anything about that until i get word as i'm using Google drive text doc and its a bitch to use but it get's the job done.
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| 2012-11-14 04:04:25 |
the great war 3033 part 3 |
thanks dino i did have problems with that the last one threw and though i will try to keep that in mind
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| 2012-11-12 13:48:26 |
the great war 3033 part 2 |
ok will if your still with me then i would like to say that the next one will be up very soon im half way through writing it and just add extra detail |
| 2012-11-09 06:00:55 |
the great war 3033 part 2 |
sorry there has not been a new great war life's been getting in the way and i'm finding it hard to link it back to the this story from were i left it, but a new one will be up but i don't now when |
| 2012-11-05 09:27:17 |
Fire Class |
this is pretty good keep it up |
| 2012-11-02 10:37:50 |
the great war 3033 part 2 |
anonymous 2012-11-02 10:18:59 thanks i do read kahmd and fbailey but kahmd dose not have any new storys to read so i cant realy reread his story but i will try the other 2 |
| 2012-11-02 09:51:24 |
the great war 3033 part 2 |
ya dino i had problems with this one because of where i left it off on the last one so i had to try and make it fit in and still tell the story i wanted but i will try and find someone |
| 2012-11-01 18:37:53 |
the great war 3033 part 2 |
sorry this toke time to come on i had problem with my side and was finding it hard to write the story from were i left it off and sorry its short to i thought i would leave it on a cliff hanger |
| 2012-10-29 11:24:59 |
Captain Jones |
that pretty good this can go far |
| 2012-10-27 07:49:05 |
The great war 3033 |
thanks for the kind word dino im wirting the next one now im just taking a break to think up new things and i will keep things posted on how its going |
| 2012-10-26 14:08:51 |
The great war 3033 |
this is the same as the first one just forgot to put revised im starting the second one now i will probably be up tomorrow or in 3 days time as im having problem with the word and how to word it |
| 2012-10-26 08:41:05 |
the great war 3033 part one |
but thanks for the kind world i will be reposting this one to fix all that |
| 2012-10-26 08:40:44 |
the great war 3033 part one |
thanks the only reason my my grammar spelling and punctuation are shit is because I've got dyslexia |
| 2012-10-26 02:48:19 |
the great war 3033 part one |
thanks for the advice i will try to change that on the next one |
| 2012-10-24 08:07:15 |
The Inventor - Part 2 - Chapter 10 |
wow so that why you make long storys but hey no complant the only one is the grammar and the text being bunched up but hey other than that their all good
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