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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-04-25 18:26:01 |
Batman: Life After the Joker |
Another thing for those uneducated in regards to comic books, one comic character can be featured in many different story arcs. If you don't know what a story arc is, then look it up on Google. You have the basic mythos of a character, and after that is all said and done, writers can make stories that branch off from there. It's sort of like alternate realities and even comics can get into conflicts between story arcs. Example: a superhero's family member dies when the superhero is ten years old, but another comic line can have a story where the family member remains alive until the superhero's late teens. The moral of all of this is that stories are written by human beings who don't always agree with each other or have different preferences or goals. People will allow a basic element of a character remain if they see how successful the character is due to its maintaining that element, but an adventurous writer might change something to make the character appealing in a different way. |
| 2013-04-25 01:21:08 |
Batman: Life After the Joker |
Didn't you read the intro where I said "non-canonical"? That means that this isn't part of the Batman mythos or official storyline. It's my own imagination of what the Batman could be.
And in regards to the trilogy, Hollywood doesn't always abide by the material from which they base their films. They do their own thing too.
You really should read more books (comic books included). You need more creativity in your diet. You're seriously malnourished in my opinion.
Damn, I hate ranting like this, but you did a good job of luring me out. Hat off to you :) |
| 2013-04-17 20:08:06 |
Busty Young Teacher Gives Private Lessons |
Super story!!! I truly enjoyed it because you wrote it so well (spacing of paragraphs, spelling, vocabulary, grammar) and the quality/sexiness of the content was "pure bliss". I have this text currently listed in my favorites, on my profile. Keep on writing!! |
| 2013-04-08 23:15:39 |
Locusts of Hell |
Whoops! One major error I did was in Chapter Four. All the guys put on condoms, but when they fucked, it was as if they weren't wearing any. My bad. Apologies to the readers for that, and for any other errors you may have noticed. |
| 2013-04-07 20:44:59 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 7 |
What would this site be like without Kinybelle's stories? Another awesome story from one of our top writers. |
| 2013-04-07 18:11:33 |
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Great story, ZondarTheBear. And to anyone making money off of Zondar's stories: Give the author his fair share, will ya? :) |
| 2013-04-07 18:09:04 |
Easter Bunnies |
Very hot story and well-written. Move over to this site permanently. We need more writers like you. |
| 2013-04-02 18:01:55 |
Batman: Life After the Joker |
This is my own version of what Batman becomes when he's older. He changes, so there's a dynamic aspect to his character. The Dark Knight becomes darker. That's the beauty of fiction, You can twist M.Os. Thanks for the comment. Appreciate it. |
| 2013-03-18 18:09:35 |
Easter Eggs |
Thanks for the comments and the advice. I did do some typos and logical errors there. |
| 2013-03-08 00:33:04 |
Minding Others, part 3 |
Really good series. Enjoyable third part. |
| 2013-03-08 00:29:18 |
Minding Others, part 2 |
This is a great second part. |
| 2013-03-08 00:26:46 |
MInding Others, part 1 |
Very good twist ending for this first part. |
| 2013-03-01 21:27:51 |
Good Golly, Mrs. Mommy! |
Excellent story! Awesome new writer! This site just got a bit more interesting (not to say that it wasn't interesting before). |
| 2013-03-01 21:19:35 |
A River in Egypt |
Great story. Quite a bit of effort and skill displayed here. I'll probably have to start downloading your stories and dissecting them to see how I can make mine as good. |
| 2013-02-28 00:36:48 |
The Red Door |
Needs to be longer, but excellent so far. You could teach me at thing or to on how to keep readers interested in the story. |
| 2013-02-11 16:49:22 |
Exploring My Bestfriend |
Your stories need more length and depth. (What I just said is probably bullshit because some of us break our own personal moral codes by posting all this filth online, yet we get touchy when others don't obey little rules such as required story length, but there it is: More length and depth needed. You have what it takes to increase the scope and effect of your stories.) Although I'm not currently into the lesbian theme, I realize this particular story is sizzling hot XXX literature, regardless of theme and present mood. Keep thinking, keep writing.
P.S. My stories don't have much length and depth either, but I do try to meet the minimum requirements and work out an acceptable standard for myself from there. |
| 2013-02-11 01:04:10 |
Holly Jolly Christmas |
Well, you write differently (and better) compared to me. The action starts right away and doesn't stop until the last sentence, in your stories. I thought about your style. It's more like the top writers here, example: Ka Hmnd or Kinkybelle, when it comes to sex action, but if you wanted to be more like the top-rated (if you wanted, that is), then you would have to put more build-up, background, and whatever else it is they put into their stories that make them top rated. Comparisons aside, you have your own approach to XXX story-telling and you shouldn't discard it for anyone's opinion, even mine. Keep thinking, keep writing. |
| 2013-02-11 00:51:41 |
Alarming Sibling |
Good story. Lots of spice in there. I'm not currently into the sister and brother theme, but I think your story would cause major erections and eruptions (of cum) for those who are. You definitely have the ability to make others want to keep their eyes glued to your text. Keep thinking, keep writing. |
| 2013-02-07 19:26:08 |
The Job Interview |
Another awesome story from Rutger5. Terrific text. |
| 2013-02-07 19:24:41 |
The Beach House |
Great story. Good writing. Thanks for posting. |
| 2013-02-07 19:19:07 |
My Best Friend's Mother |
One of the best writers on this site. Thanks for the awesome story. |
| 2013-02-01 00:09:24 |
Indigenous |
Are you requesting a revised version of this story or a part two? |
| 2013-01-31 21:41:03 |
Nordic Fire |
Thanks for the comment. |
| 2013-01-31 21:39:40 |
Indigenous |
Thanks for the comment. |
| 2013-01-30 16:51:34 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 6 |
Kinkybelle the Greatest! Awesome story! |
| 2013-01-27 18:02:24 |
In the Valley of the Amazons-3:Hosi's Challenge |
Great accomplishment in writing this. The layout of the text is perfect. |
| 2013-01-27 17:58:13 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 6 |
Excellent story. Kinkybelle's one of the best XXX story writers online. |
| 2013-01-24 23:04:08 |
The Best Sex of My Life |
roy2129, you don't mess around, rather you get straight to the point and that's what I love about your story. It's very readable and the details you add in make the text even more juicy. Great story, bro! Looking forward to more from you. PM me when you submit the next one. |