||Wife exposed and fucked in Denver dance club
||This story is still THE BEST EXHIBITIONIST STORY I have ever read!
||Boiling hot story! Thanks for posting it.
||The best grandma sex story I have read so far. Thank you, Storyteller16.
||Win a Date with Quinn
||This story transcends the norm, passes through very good, goes beyond excellence, and touches the sky of inspiration and vision. A complete delight and wonderful romance for the new age. Thank you, Scott.
||An excellent blackmail and incest tale. You are a talented writer, JoLyn. Thank you, and please, stay with us on XNXX.
||Coyote Chronicles: THE BREAST LOVER
||I love breasts and breast-sucking. This story was a dream come true. Thanks, Koyote.
||Cupids Curse part 1
||Intriguing mix of Greek mythology with modern day struggles of young adults and their sexual shenanigans. Good work.
||Master and Slave
||Nice! Very good story. Written well. Exciting and hot! Really really satisfying. Wow! The master here is truly a master and the slave is sooo slutty. The sex is so kinky and charged with ejaculation power! Superb work.
||This is a magnificent story, aptly titled. What a wonderful chain of events, a great plot, two different and very real characters thrown together by fate and sharing a magical moment alone. Loved the ending. I am in awe of this work!! Do you teach sex story writing classes? I'm signing up! Qlick, you are brilliant and undisputably one of the best writers on XNXX!! Thank you for another magical story. It deserves classic status as "Beach House".
||Marion, the cum slut.
||Rarely have I read a blowjob and resulting ejaculation described this good. Of course, continue, otherwise, I'll send the XNXX Police out to get you for gross negligence of your duty as an author on this site. You understand what I'm saying, right? This story rocks hard so far, we want more! Thank you, PO469.
||Fucked by a wolf
||Also, this is a good story. Keep it up.
||Fucked by a wolf
||Dark, scary, and erotic. Use more spacing between paragraphs next time. Thanks for the effort on this one.
||The Algebra Teacher
||Good. Hopefully the next one will be better. Looking forward to an increase in temperature and some sex action.
||Laura and her Youth Minister Chapter 6
||Awesome! Some sex in this entry. Thank you! Keep it up.
||Laura and her Youth Minister Chapter 5
||This is great. That pool fight and the telling of how Laura and Michael got into it was titillating with a touch of eroticism. Once again, you describe things so well and you also have much creativity inside of you (or is that what really happened with Laura?). Very good this time around.
||Laura and her Youth Minister Chapter 4
||You have great talent in describing people and things. The protagonist is truly fleshed out in here; I see her as a real person caught up in a religious life she doesn't quite understand the full meaning of. She is also a very sexual being!
||Laura and her Youth Minister Chapter 3
||Good descriptions, generally well-written, but the same: too short in words and content and still no sex. Once again, maybe you should post all of this on the Sex Stories section in the XNXX Adult Forum. They are more tolerant of non-sex stories there, rather than here.
||Laura and her Youth Minister Chapter 2
||Your entries are way too short. Make them at least 5,000 words each. And put some sex in them. If this is a real incident you're relating here to us, and it doesn't contain any sex, I'm afraid it might not be too popular here on Stories Side, but you might get a better reception on XNXX Adult Forum in Sex Stories section there.
||Laura and her Youth Minister Chapter 1
||Advice: Each individual entry you post on Stories Side has to have at least one or two "major" incidents of sex. You write good, but you have to give the reader more. You don't have to finish the story in one entry - that's the beauty of posting it in installments or parts as they say - but do include sex in each one. The amount can vary, but it has to be "satisfactory". Happy to have you here, Bullwinkle J. Moose.
||Me and Mr. Bill: Part 6 - Football or I should say "Fuckball!"
||Damn! Right from the start and on to the very end, the erotic action never lets up. And you still have time to tell a story in the midst of all this! Fuckball is a great game! Very creative of you to come up with this. I am astonished at your xxx writing; it is erotically deviant and mind blowing! Styxx wasn't exaggerating. Your name truly deserves to be on the Recommended Authors list, and you've already been recommended. Keep up the awesome work! It's so wonderful to have you here. Looking forward to Part 7.
||Digimon Rise and Fall Chapter 8: Bad Reunion
||I like the dialog in this story. The characters' emotions, thoughts, and interactions are also well done.
||Karens new purpose
||Wow! I love this story. Karen is a gorgeous big girl with splendid anatomical assets. Trevor makes good use of this and goes further to include his cycling friends in on the action. You did a really good job on this, Tbarn1966. Very hot and even uplifting on an emotional level. Your story is much appreciated!
||Somali Pirates and Their Prey
||Meticulous details on the individual characters; well-rendered descriptions. Women in the SAS is an original concept for a sex story. A truly brilliant turn there! The medical assistants checking out, probing, and feeling the women was quite titillating. The amount of detail you put into their training goes beyond what most authors on this site include in their texts. You have taken on a huge scope here and it is admirable how you handled it. A most capable writer you are, and that's why I consider you one of the best!
||Letting Her In.
||Very very good writing. Enjoyable story!
||Great incest story. Well-written and very readable. Keep it up
||Late Rent Payments
||Excellent writing. Titillatingly wonderful and sexy hot. Keep it up.
||Very very good. You're not just a sex story writer, you're a STORY WRITER too and it shows in your work. Another excellent incest tale, this time between grandfather and granddaughter. "Dad Wants My Pussy" sounds like a good book and the author Slut Princess must be a brilliant writer. "I needed Eddy fast, not Fast Eddy!" Great line. Thank you, KTM.
||This one was well-thought and -written. I'm sure the person who inspired you with their story would be thrilled to read this. Wonderful, intelligently plotted incest between a woman and her father-in-law. Great story!
||My Wife.. My Boss' Bitch in Heat
||This story rocks! I like how the declining economy played a part in this infidelity. The wife relating to her husband how his boss fucks her is insanely hot! Her monologue as she is just about to get screwed is raw wickedness! Creative work!
||Fabulous sex in the beginning. Good details and plot. I'm a big fan of MILF stories and this one is right on the dot. Cynthia's seduction of Jake and fucking is hot, hot, hot!! How rude of Matt to blackmail his mother. Not! This is a sex story written by an expert.
||My husband's whore
||Really hot arrangement between husband and wife. Great plot and exciting details. Kevin and Phillipa fucking was hot. Great double penetration by husband and associate on Phillipa. Excellent mixing of business, marriage, and promiscuous sex life. Top story!
||The Little Girl Next Door
||Good grammar, punctuation, and paragraph spacing. Easy to read. Great story.
||Very good writing. The family get-together was described perfectly and helped to create a setting for delicious "misbehavior". Great serial fucking. Healthy imagination at work here.
||My Sister In Law, The Unexpected Cum Slut
||Wonderful descriptions, brilliant sex, titillating dialogue. An awesome tale of cheating and reception of ejaculation. I wish a hot woman could ride me in my sleep. Jenny's obsession with cum is the center point of this text and it is intriguing and so very hot! Thanks a lot, pdosu. Loved this one!
||Well-written and sexy........ ....... .......
||A mother in law Dilemma Part One
||Entertaining and full of fire (I'm talking about the non-sex parts!). Great dialogue and storytelling. Excellent writing and sentence and paragraph construction. When it comes to the sex, I'm jizzing already and your writing explodes! Good work!
||Awesome cheating story! The lead-up to the sex was well done. The sex was super great!
||Wonderful lactation and cheating sex tale. Boob-sucking is sensational and you've written an excellent story with this theme. Bravo!
||How to gangbang a lady - Dining out on Monica
||Excellent sex storytelling. Packed with searing detail; incredible description of events. A+ story.
||The Dirtier, The Better
||Superhot exciting story! I liked how he found all those dirty movies on her computer. Great sex, great setup, great entire story!
||The Girl from the Diner
||Juicy story of an older male and younger female getting it on. Very well set-up and executed.
||Delicious male/teen females threesome! What a lovely night for a walk on the beach with two hot young ladies. You know how to write a sex story, that's for sure.
||A really good cheating story. Mandy is hot and Reid is a lucky guy for that moment. Great sex! In my honest opinion, I felt like the ending was incomplete. All it needed was a teeny weeny little bit more, like when she saw Reid sitting and watching her, you also could have included her smiling and he smiling back and she performs especially for him. Maybe even quickly getting past the strip dance and she taking him home or he taking her home to his place afterward. The ending you have is kind of abrupt to me. I'm just saying. Anyway, I still like this one.
||Coming home story well told with emotion and love.
||Me and Mr. Bill Part 5: The Poker (Poke Her) Game
|| WOW! Looking forward to reading Part 6! I don't take for granted the fact that you write very good, not just the sex, but in every aspect of communicating your story to the reader. This series is a great one because of its readability and how you can engage the reader's mind, keeping their attention without wasting words on unnecessary and uninteresting things. You have a wonderful talent and it is utterly fantastic to have you here on XNXX.
This part is longer and has a lot more sizzling-hot sex action in it. Nice incest going on within the larger story, handled with a deft hand. That "poke her" game was terrific! Descriptive writing at its best, particularly in their slut outfits and BDSM. Another thing I like about your writing is you give more than take. Addictive and rewarding storytelling. Thank you very much, RachJayne!
||Me and Mr. Bill! Part 4: The Old Strip Club
||Lots more erotic fun with more sluts thrown into the mix and more hardcore sex! Hot dancing in the club and hotter fucking in the VIP room. She is spoilt for cock, and those Texans got all the right tools and know-how. 10/10
|| Me and Mr. Bill! Part 1 & 2
||Excellently done. The words just flow along and I was swept away with the story. Highly erotic and charged with sex. Nice turn of events from sexual meeting into BDSM. I'm not a bondage fanatic, but you did it extremely well! Bill is a master dom and your protagonist is the perfect slut! 10/10
||Me and Mr. Bill: Part 3 The Truck (Fuck) Stop
||Those Texans sure know how to fuck. Loved the continued fucking of the protagonist by different men. This one elicits praise, awe, lust, and ropes of gleeful cum! 10/10
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 16: Finale
||The demon-cum-soaked breakfast was awesome. Intense monster/human sex in the shower - powerful! And Gruthsorik fucking her in human form was done really well. Final tentacle fuck blew me away! Super great finale to a fantastic, bold series. Bravo, Otaku!
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 15: Houseguest
||Great sex. Nice to see Claire and Gruthsorik reunited. A painful reunion, but sexy too. The emotional change coming over Gruthsorik at the end was brilliant. Guilt!
||Good build-up to the sex - very hot sex - and well-constructed and -spaced paragraphs that make this easy to read. Exceptional incest tale.
||This story is therapeutic for losers. I loved it. Vampire stories are especially entertaining for losers because they have this underlying "moral" that it doesn't matter if you suck at life, you can still be a vampire and suck blood, sleep all day, and fuck all night forever until something really bad happens to you. Well-written tale. It held my attention. Thank you.
||Truly scary, yet sexy . . . . .
||Lost & Found
||Good imagination in sensuality. I liked this tale of humanoid inter-species sex. Fantastic!
||Very good science fiction writing. Great sex descriptions.
||Excellent writing and spacing of paragraphs. Easy to read and enjoyable. Wonderful account of first sexual experiences.
||Delicious sex on a train. Wonderful writing. Super!
||A New Day, A New Us part 1
||I found it interesting how the protagonist reacted to the big guy being bullied by those jocks, particularly his concern over the notice on the school site. A lot of detail in this story. Good arguments between characters.
||Nice short story.......................
||Poolside With My Daughter's Friend Amy
||Christmas Goes Bad
||I understand what you're saying. I should have allowed her some more experiences first before she started throwing energy balls around like a pro. Thanks for the comment.
||Christmas Goes Bad
||Thank you for the comment, Anonymous Reader. I'll try to be more straight-to-the-point next time.
||The Martians love my mom part three “Hard work, little pay”
||Extremely hot alien/human sx story! This one is just as good as - or quite possibly even better than - its predecessors, which were also wonderful works of sci-fi sex fiction.
Lots of detail packed in here; more information on the Galaxy Guild and the Advancement Project gives added depth to the plot. That's why this series stands out and is definitely included in my top ten list on XNXX.
And WOW, I really enjoyed that double penetration scene with Klag, the mom, and unnamed lover.
Very well-done, Kevin! A fun treat. Highly entertaining, this third and final part of Act I. Thank you. Looking forward to Act II.
||Ethan's Revenge Part II
||Great continuation of your story. More fucking with fat men facilitated by mind control. This time it was captured on video. Hotter than the first story, which was very hot. Good work!
||Ethan's Revenge Part I
||Awesome mind control story. I liked the unique touch of having an obese mechanic screw a sexy co-ed from his college days. Very well done!
||Sex with a Red Witch
||Delicious feast of dark erotica; vampires and witches. You have a knack for this kind of thing. Impressive and sexy.
||The Vamporient Sexpress
||Rich vampire erotica. Great effort and more than worth the time reading it.
||Sex in the Graveyard
||Wow! Highly original work. Literate and very interesting. You were recommended by another member by the name of PrettyNun. That's how I came to read your story. I am not disappointed. Quite pleased actually. Thank you for writing this. I enjoyed it a lot.
||The fat man's revenge
||Brilliant! Plenty of sex action packed into this hot text. We need more stories like this.
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 14: Wolf
||Lots of science, lots of action, monster-on-monster sex - fun! Gruthsorik escapes. I wonder what the outside world has in store for him; better yet, who he's going to fuck next on the outside. All your chapters so far are excellent and flawless, but this one stands out. Superb!
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 13: Senator
||Love this line "I'm evil, not uncivilized." Classic! The science and intelligence put into this entry and this entire series is astounding, not to mention how you deliciously pump sex into the mix. Even new characters are given as much attention as the ones that have been there for a while. Gruthsorik fucking that mature senator was very hot! Good stuff. Keep it up!
||Katherine and Hilary - chapter 1
||Very good face-fucking. You know how to write sex. I'm sure you will reward the reader with more character information in the next chapter. Personally, I would advise you to post these brief chapters on the sex stories forum. Once the word count goes past 5,000, you can post it as a complete story, first part, or first volume on the Stories Side here. But that is just my personal opinion.
||A Date with Mom
||Super hot story! Very good mom-son fucking.
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 12: Cat
||Fun, sexy entry in this series.
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 11: Counselor
||This series is addictive at best, and at the very least, excellently written. Chapter 11 is different, just like the previous chapters. That's one of the things I love about this series: you don't repeat the same plot line twice. This time, the focus is more on the psychological aspects of rape and the lengths certain people go to satisfy their professional curiosities; in this case, a psychiatrist wanting to relate to victims of monster rape by actually getting raped by a monster herself! Astonishing and right on the dot. I don't know how you do it. Otaku, you rock hard!
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 9: Anticipation
||More added to the character of Gruthsorik. I'm impressed by the subtle change that has come over Claire. To me, she has gone from being a good person, to a not so good person, but I still empathize with her. Dynamic and still sexually and intelligently interesting.
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 8: Convict
||Clearly, you aim to make every chapter different and interesting. Yes, he still has tentacles, and yes, he still fucks pussy with those tentacles, but the when, why, and how makes it so exciting! Bravo.
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 7: Report
||Claire's report and the conference with the government VIPs was detailed and well-done. Mind-blowing opening sex! You definitely know how to write a story. And what a story!
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 6: Rumors
||Every chapter is entertaining and this one just rocks me out of my chair. I won't ruin it for readers who like to read the comments before reading the story, but - keeping things in general, no spoilers - those girls undergoing that change was a great touch to the story. Mysticism and science expertly combined. This series is alive!
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 5: Sorority
||Interesting how you told this chapter with a memory recollection, but from two different perspectives (Gruthsorik's and Julie's). Another brilliant entry in your wonderful monster series.
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 4: Sample
||You should be arrested for writing a monster sex story this good! The content here is molten hot - enough to make anyone erupt in ejaculation like a volcano (I did). Once again, you maintain intelligence in characterization and story depth. Admirable and very high quality. Gruthsorik and Claire make quite a pair. I just can't get enough of the science. This time, she finds out about what that tentacle slime does. And more mythos added to Gruthsorik concerning his geneology. Simply fantastic!
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 3: Surrender
||Blisteringly delicious monster sex! This is a series for people looking for more than just extreme sex. Interesting plot, great characters, intriguing mythos, hot far-out sex, intelligent readable writing - it's all here.
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 2: Feeding
||Excellent characterizations. This story really moves. Thrilling and sexed-up! Not forgetting how scientifically detailed it is and the tentacle monster mythos you have put into this story. Brilliant, Otaku!
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 1: Arrival
||Scary, sexy, deep, and well-written. This is a marvelous effort, Perv Otaku!
||Very good erotic incest tale. Uncle Billy has a visually pleasing room.
||Thursday Night Football
||Great how he fucked that big girl. Heather is hot and the guy who fucked her rocks.
||An open family-with few restrictions
||This had so much potential, but didn't really lift off. Maybe in the next one.
||Magical Hearts chapter 9
||Great magical epic you have going here. The lack of sex or even romance is startling. Maybe you have more sex/romance in the previous entries of this series. I'm curious how many people would come to a sex stories site to enjoy a story with very little, if no, sex. I can see by the rating and number of reads that you have a following. Good on you, but it just blows my mind how you can pull this off without sex. Again, great story.
||Asmodeus - Demon of Lust: Part 6
||Interview With The Tentacle Demon Chapter 10: Threesome
||This is great stuff. After reading this, I want to read chapters one to nine. Looking forward to chapter eleven.
||The milkshakes are good..............
||The Big Tits Theory is intriguing................
||A housewife or a whore
||Wow! A great epic of a sex story. Impressive effort; powerfully erotic.
||Mom becomes property
||I read this text and liked it in several ways. Still more of the same formula, but your fans and a whole bunch of other people love it so who am I to complain? Keep it up. Another wonderful addition to your stock of exciting Mom stories.
||Teaching High School Girls Part 4
||Katie, Hollie, Zoe - all the girls in this story are so sexy.
And Jeff's quite a stud father, isn't he?
||The Headmaster's Study
||This is a very good story. It was a pleasure reading it. Written in mature prose with hot descriptions of sex and a stunning revelation in the climax. Brilliant work.
||Allison's Story Part 1
||Very good, easy, fast-reading. A brilliantly unique, futuristic story too! Excellent work. Loved the sex.
||Seed of Horror pt. 1
||Hooked from the first paragraph. Very scary, classic-like horror story. Descriptions of surroundings and what goes on in the character's mind are superbly written. Great sex. Brilliantly haunting and erotic.
||A unique incest story. Great storytelling, Haddock.
||Nice setup to the three-way bang. Hot writing!
||My Niece Emma
||Another great story. Keep it up, Haddock. You are a man of many writing talents: interracial, impregnation, and now incest. Way to go.
||Indisputably one of the best impregnation stories on XNXX. Wonderful story, Haddock.
||The Martians love my mom part two “Just another day”
||Good description of time spent on the alien space ship. The Galaxy Guild is a nice creation of yours within this story. You don't leave new readers out of this; rather, you include them by explaining what they have missed out on so they can understand your story, despite not reading the first part. This is very gracious of you. The mother's cock-sucking is intensely pleasureful to read. Klag has a mean cock. The alien-human sex is mindblowing. Really great story, Kevin.
||The blackmail of my blonde teacher (revisit) part 1
||This one is a polished version of the original. Just as enjoyable, maybe more so.
||The blackmail of my blond teacher
||I liked how Mrs. C went from angry to actually enjoying being blackmailed into sex. Fun story with awesome sex in it.
||Times in my Life : Part One
||Nice story. I liked how you wrote the boob-handling. Very hot.
||Debt and its high price part 4
||Fast-paced story that doesn't ever get boring. My eyes were glued to this one. There's just something about your style of writing that really intrigues me. Great story.
||Debt and its high price part 5
||Wow! The description of deflowering and incest was sizzling hot! You've been included on my Awesome Writers List.
||Debt and its high price part 6: Kali's taste of Kalona
||I enjoyed this story very much. A wonderful series going here.
||Debt and its high price part 3 : A walk down memory lane
||I really admire your neat and well-structure paragraphs and the general tidiness of your text. Lots of wonderful detail. Dark and sinister. I like this series.
||Debt and its high price part 2
||Very neat story. It's building up and I'm getting tense here. Interested in where this is going. Good work so far.
||Debt and its high price
||Continue this story and bring us to the sex. It's going well so far.
||Blackmail Birthday Present (redone)
||Awesome story .............
||One of the best female/younger male stories I've ever read.
||Alien abductions are real.
||For you incest lovers.
||Wow. This story had both sexting and actual sex between a boy and his mom. Great combo. I get the feeling that if you keep practicing your writing skills, you'll eventually become one of the best authors on this site. My advice: Get a dictionary, thesaurus, grammar/writing handbook, read books for fun, read some high-rated stories on this site, write, write, write, and you'll be fantastic! And this story was super!
||My Mom Saw Me Naked!
||Beautiful incest story. This is a rare find. Such an honor and delight to read it. Thank you for putting this wonderful experience of yours into words. I'm a sexually immoral idiot, but I know mothers are special. May your mother's soul rest in peace.
||Catness at the Pool Party
||Nice pool party setting. Liked the licking and the fucking. Good stuff. Need to work on the grammar, but if you keep at it and really try to improve, you'll be awesome in no time.
||Taking Pictures with Another Couple
||Ooh, a really good story here written in second person perspective. This is a very naughty piece of fiction. I loved it! Forgive me if I steal your idea (couples taking pictures) and use it in a story. This was brilliant!
||Being Teased by Brooke
||Sizzling foreplay. Ms. Brooke is really sexy and she definitely knows her stuff. Hot story.
||My past cums willingly to the now.
||Fantastic incestuous blowjob. Great writing. Double male action on one female was exciting.
||Lust Letter to A:
||Johns Last Summer
||The song "Boys of Summer" by Don Henley kept popping up in my head for some reason as I read this exquisite story. Excellently written, RL. Why can't talent be easily copied and pasted like files on a computer? I would definitely join the line to copy some of your talent.
||I find it difficult to comment on this, but here's what I've got: this text flows like an ocean current, so calm and unnoticeable to the human eye, but very powerful in its effect. The sex itself was similar; calm and relaxed, yet powerful and vibrant.
||This story was very hot and I could relate to the two main characters.
||Blackmail Birthday Present (redone)
||Sexual explosion of a story!!
||White Slut Training Academy... Orientation part 3
||I read this and cheered for the new student enrolled in WSTA. One of the best institutions ever invented. The females are hot and the males very "masterful". Liked this a lot.
||White Slut Training Academy The Arrival
||I was never bored when reading this. Very interesting and stimulating. WSTA is my favorite creation of H&R's and one of my favorite series on this site.
||White Slut Training Academy .... The Baby Sitter
||Excellent, sexy first entry of this series. The Dodsons are a lovely black couple, seductive and charming, while the Julie is young and vibrant. She's a top candidate for inclusion in the WSTA. Fun for all!
||White Women Sold at Auction To Black Men
||The description of the auction was one of the best events I've ever read described in a sex story. The sudden rape in the hallway was exciting. Great story!
||Space Voyage: Alien Invaders
||This is a rip-roaring sci-fi/horror/monster/rape story. Good job.
||The Martians love my mom Part one “First contact”
||Dang, I forgot to log in, but that's my comment, right under this one.
Two thumbs up for this story.
||My mom is the town slut
||You might want to exercise more control of your sentences (eg: punctuation, capitalization). This story is far more involving and exciting than all my other stories combined, so no need to draw comparisons. I'm more critical of you because you're a competent writer and you want constructive feedback. Generally speaking, good story.
||Super hot story, perfectly paced.
||Fucking My Neighbor and His Sexy Friend
||This story was excellent/titillating/literate/truly erotic and I found the main character's personal qualities to be genuinely interesting, such as her love for comic books, style of casual dressing and crazy random thoughts - the kind of girl I would like to be with. Too bad she only exists in this story. Thanks for writing and posting this. I enjoyed it a lot.
||Wife takes first black cock
||A very, very hot story. You are most generous in taking the time and effort to write this and posting it for us to read. Highly readable, explosively descriptive and exciting. In short, a perfect story.
||Model to slut in one easy lesson
||Masterpiece cheating/interracial text.
||Model to slut - In the club
||One of the best and hottest cheating/exhibition/true stories I've ever read.
||An interracial classic of XNXX.COM
||Interesting, violent, full-on-sex dark fantasy. Should you write a sequel? Yes, definitely.
||Damn my Sons Dick is Huge!
||A really, sexy, hot story!! And you write very good!! The characters are interesting, complex, and realistic. The sex is top class in every aspect, not to mention the unbelievably exciting things that happen physically and psychologically before and during the actual sex. Absolutely loved Tera's monologue as Kyle ate her pussy and ass. That was brilliant. A true work of art by a master writer.
||Hot Wife 4
||Moms helping out.
||Awesome DP and GB. The moms are always hot.
||Moms up for this
||I love how the boys keep forgetting to bring condoms and they fuck the mom anyway. The double penetration was hot. Adding the pregnancy notice at the end was fantastic. This story is just what the doctor ordered.
||Moms a menber, loke it or not
||Another winning entry in this series.
||Moms Club the First Saturday
||Moms Club is one of the best series on this site.
||Very Hot Wife
||Hot wife, hot story!!
||A series of circumstances 3
||This is a hot series. The cocks, cum, cum drinking, sucking, fucking, pussies and asses are spectacular. I love the moms and the way they co-operate with their sons, strangers, and each other. Thanks for writing this.
||A series of circumstances 2
||A great continuation of the previous story. This one was just as good and even better with more hot sex action!
||A Series of Circumstances
||The two boys, Teddy and Brian, are so lucky. I enjoyed this story.
||Mom joined loke it or nto
||Your stories have served to inspire me to write in the interracial category from time to time. Thank you. This story is great.
||My School Project, Mom!
||Really hot story!! Mom stories are awesome and you've written some of the best ones on here. Keep it up!
||For The Love Of A Huge Cock
||This story is very well-written and so hot. One of the best interracial stories on this site.
||Jessinta Ch03A - The Bully's Moll
||Sex and violence. They go hand in hand. A knowing look into the life of a girl who has immersed herself into a dangerous subculture and abusive relationship.
||CAW13 - Pimp's Revenge
||Wow, I liked this story. This is the kind of thing I would like to both read and write. I'm into weirdness and fantastic stuff like creatures and extraordinary abilities. Mix all that with a woman scorned and I'm a happy camper. Good job here.
||Jessinta Ch02B - Tuesday
||School girl has sex with bikers. Hot!! Recommended bad girl story.
||Jessinta Ch02A - School - remastered work
||All the ingredients are here. A quintessential school sex story.
||Jessinta 01B - Biker Girl - Remastered
||It was like I was watching a short movie - a really dirty short movie. You write so well.
||JESSINTA 8 - Crossroads
||Finally moving out of VP's place? Adventurous!
||JESINTA 7B - School Holidays (Gym)
||Extra juicy thing about this series is its basis on fact. There truly is a substantial number of Sudanese and other black, immigrant ethnicity in Australia. Your realism adds more to the fun in reading your stories. Loved the way you inserted the memory sequence within the anal sex session with Jim.
||JESINTA 7A - School Holidays
||I can't count the number of times Jesinta has done it with VP, but this series is still able to get me off. And it's not just the sex, but also the complexity and moral dubiousness of the character.
||CAW#11 - Cold Winters Day
||Who else can entertain and scare us to death with well-written tales of deviance and sexual immorality other than the twisted mistress herself?
||JESINTA 6B ? 16 (Back at Mr. Anderson?s)
||Anybody want to learn how to write a sex story? Dial 555-001-JESINTA-IS-A-SEX-GODDESS-349 or dial 555-288-KIMMY-ROCKS-COCK-599. The secretary will put you in touch with Twistedsister.
||Free Spirited (10)...Job Training (New Years Day 1999)
||This series blazes an enjoyable trail through fields of stories written by fakers. Twistedsister is the real thing. Kimmy's first paid session as a brothel girl is something any sex story enthusiast wouldn't want to miss.
|| Free Spirited (09)...My first job (New Years Day 1999)
||An inside look into the life and early training of a brothel girl. Amazing sex as always!
||Free Spirited (08)...Decision Time (Xmas 1998)
||Special note has to be taken of the spacing in this text. I feel that the large spaces between paragraphs signify a dangerous separation from a normal state of mind, leading up to a mental breakdown. Kim is on the edge and very barely clinging to her sanity. Twistedsister pulls no punches here. This is dark, gloomy, and frighteningly real! Not to mention, sizzling HOT!!
||Free Spirited (07)...Rock Bottom ? Part 2 (1998)
||As the abuse on Kimmy continues, a maturity is dawning within her and it makes up for the formal education that she has missed out. She is handling sex on a different level, i.e. with someone she doesn't want to have sex with, unlike her earlier days when she was a willing participant with her friends. The world wants to fuck up Kimmy completely, but I suspect that its days are numbered as it looks disdainfully upon its favorite slut.
||Free Spirited (06)..Rock Bottom (1998) ? Part 1
||Twistedsister's stories are sharp. Watch out! You could cut yourself when reading them. This one cut me good. Tex's use and abuse of Kimmy made me question certain aspects of sexual immorality in myself. You know you've read a good story when it leaves you with insight you never had and makes you think hard, piercing thoughts. This is more than just a good story.
||Free Spirited (5)..Paying to Stay (1998)
||Gritty and realistic as always. Moral of this story: the world is an ugly place. It is impossible to read this and not feel shame and sympathy for Kimmy. But if you think about it, she is actually a representation of the entire human race and the filthy things we sometimes do to survive. There are many top writers on this site, but not that many serious writers. Twistedsister can be included in both categories.
||Free Spirited (4)..School (1998)
||This one's an emotionally-powered knockout! Years from now, when people discuss their favorite story characters in XNXX, they will mention Kimmy and Jessinta. If one word could describe your work on an xxx content site like this, it would be 'profound'.
||Free Spirited (03)..Fifteen (1997)
||It's amazing how you can pump a lot of sex into your stories and still maintain an interesting plot. I'm hooked to this series!
||Free Spirited (02)..My Birthday (1997)
||I truly don't know how you do it. I've tried unsuccessfully to imitate your writing style. It is your very own gift and can't be copied. The gangbang described here was marvelous! You give males as much star power as the females. Not one character in this text can be labeled as weak. A very strong story.
||Free Spirited..The Beginning (1997) - Moomba
||Thank you once again! You've given us some insight into what it's like to be of mixed parentage. Life can be confusing, but throughout the rough and tumble, you come out on top by being yourself.
I would encourage people afraid of or uncomfortable with their own skin color or ethnicity to read your stories. They will find a lot to lift their spirits up and be brave. In the end, it's all about happiness. Another great story! Thanks for sharing.
||Bosses New Toy - July 2010
||Still enjoying your stories. There is no falsity in what you write (as I've said before). You're real and your writing is real and anyone can connect to them, regardless of whether or not they have a promiscuous lifestyle. For all our sakes, keep writing.
||This is what I call an excellent story. You write very literate stories that are accessible to everyone whether they be simple or sophisticated. Please, keep on writing. Anything you write is delicious for sex lit-hungry readers.
||Just For Fun
||One of the best - if not the best - blowjob stories on this site. The idea of a British import sucking-off the President of the USA was inspired.
||Returning Chapter 01
||This is a great first chapter. Love the two animal companions and the human form of Likka is soooo hott!! I envy the fact that you thought of the power to heal rapidly via strong emotions. Wish I had thought of that and written a story about it first! Awesome!
||The audition and first feature were sizzling descriptions of sex. Do write more!
||I’m Just Saying:
||Great story. Well-written and spaced. One of the hottest descriptions of incest.
||Ms. Whitman is a very admirable character and her efforts to educate her country's youth are not in vain. Rating: 9.7/10
||Wife at a party
||This story got me hooked to the last sentence. Rating: 9.6/10
||Musical Laps is a wonderful invention and this story is soooo hottt!!
||Saving mommy's marriage
||One of the best mom gangbangs and girls-on-dad action sequences I've ever read!!
||Minding Others, part 8
||Completely loved the boob-sucking. Thanks again, DiscipleN.
||Where's the story? And how on Earth has this remained on the top rated list for so long?
||The Wilson Family Saga (Part 4 End)
||Very well-written series. Keep on writing.
||Lucy's Tale (Part 3)
||This is a great series. Keep it up.
||Batman: Life After the Joker
||Another thing for those uneducated in regards to comic books, one comic character can be featured in many different story arcs. If you don't know what a story arc is, then look it up on Google. You have the basic mythos of a character, and after that is all said and done, writers can make stories that branch off from there. It's sort of like alternate realities and even comics can get into conflicts between story arcs. Example: a superhero's family member dies when the superhero is ten years old, but another comic line can have a story where the family member remains alive until the superhero's late teens. The moral of all of this is that stories are written by human beings who don't always agree with each other or have different preferences or goals. People will allow a basic element of a character remain if they see how successful the character is due to its maintaining that element, but an adventurous writer might change something to make the character appealing in a different way.
||Batman: Life After the Joker
||Didn't you read the intro where I said "non-canonical"? That means that this isn't part of the Batman mythos or official storyline. It's my own imagination of what the Batman could be.
And in regards to the trilogy, Hollywood doesn't always abide by the material from which they base their films. They do their own thing too.
You really should read more books (comic books included). You need more creativity in your diet. You're seriously malnourished in my opinion.
Damn, I hate ranting like this, but you did a good job of luring me out. Hat off to you :)
||Busty Young Teacher Gives Private Lessons
||Super story!!! I truly enjoyed it because you wrote it so well (spacing of paragraphs, spelling, vocabulary, grammar) and the quality/sexiness of the content was "pure bliss". I have this text currently listed in my favorites, on my profile. Keep on writing!!
||Locusts of Hell
||Whoops! One major error I did was in Chapter Four. All the guys put on condoms, but when they fucked, it was as if they weren't wearing any. My bad. Apologies to the readers for that, and for any other errors you may have noticed.
||My Son's Cum Rag, part 7
||What would this site be like without Kinybelle's stories? Another awesome story from one of our top writers.
||Great story, ZondarTheBear. And to anyone making money off of Zondar's stories: Give the author his fair share, will ya? :)
||Very hot story and well-written. Move over to this site permanently. We need more writers like you.
||Batman: Life After the Joker
||This is my own version of what Batman becomes when he's older. He changes, so there's a dynamic aspect to his character. The Dark Knight becomes darker. That's the beauty of fiction, You can twist M.Os. Thanks for the comment. Appreciate it.
||Thanks for the comments and the advice. I did do some typos and logical errors there.
||Minding Others, part 3
||Really good series. Enjoyable third part.
||Minding Others, part 2
||This is a great second part.
||MInding Others, part 1
||Very good twist ending for this first part.
||Good Golly, Mrs. Mommy!
||Excellent story! Awesome new writer! This site just got a bit more interesting (not to say that it wasn't interesting before).
||A River in Egypt
||Great story. Quite a bit of effort and skill displayed here. I'll probably have to start downloading your stories and dissecting them to see how I can make mine as good.
||The Red Door
||Needs to be longer, but excellent so far. You could teach me at thing or to on how to keep readers interested in the story.
||Exploring My Bestfriend
||Your stories need more length and depth. (What I just said is probably bullshit because some of us break our own personal moral codes by posting all this filth online, yet we get touchy when others don't obey little rules such as required story length, but there it is: More length and depth needed. You have what it takes to increase the scope and effect of your stories.) Although I'm not currently into the lesbian theme, I realize this particular story is sizzling hot XXX literature, regardless of theme and present mood. Keep thinking, keep writing.
P.S. My stories don't have much length and depth either, but I do try to meet the minimum requirements and work out an acceptable standard for myself from there.
||Holly Jolly Christmas
||Well, you write differently (and better) compared to me. The action starts right away and doesn't stop until the last sentence, in your stories. I thought about your style. It's more like the top writers here, example: Ka Hmnd or Kinkybelle, when it comes to sex action, but if you wanted to be more like the top-rated (if you wanted, that is), then you would have to put more build-up, background, and whatever else it is they put into their stories that make them top rated. Comparisons aside, you have your own approach to XXX story-telling and you shouldn't discard it for anyone's opinion, even mine. Keep thinking, keep writing.
||Good story. Lots of spice in there. I'm not currently into the sister and brother theme, but I think your story would cause major erections and eruptions (of cum) for those who are. You definitely have the ability to make others want to keep their eyes glued to your text. Keep thinking, keep writing.
||The Job Interview
||Another awesome story from Rutger5. Terrific text.
||The Beach House
||Great story. Good writing. Thanks for posting.
||My Best Friend's Mother
||One of the best writers on this site. Thanks for the awesome story.
||Are you requesting a revised version of this story or a part two?
||Thanks for the comment.
||Thanks for the comment.
||My Son's Cum Rag, part 6
||Kinkybelle the Greatest! Awesome story!
||In the Valley of the Amazons-3:Hosi's Challenge
||Great accomplishment in writing this. The layout of the text is perfect.
||My Son's Cum Rag, part 6
||Excellent story. Kinkybelle's one of the best XXX story writers online.
||The Best Sex of My Life
||roy2129, you don't mess around, rather you get straight to the point and that's what I love about your story. It's very readable and the details you add in make the text even more juicy. Great story, bro! Looking forward to more from you. PM me when you submit the next one.