Comments from ll Metallica ll

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2012-10-16 10:30:47 3 evil sisters Part 9 Sorry to any that didn't like it, I wrote this in a hour or so at 4am
2012-10-16 14:12:54 3 evil sisters Part 9 This was only a tester to see comments this is not the final copy I will post the final in a few weeks I just need to study for some tests at the moment and run through this with my English teacher who loves this sort of stuff but the final copy will come out within the next week thanks for your comments anything else you want added message me at Note this gene relation ship might not be in the final copy :) message for your feedback
2012-10-17 00:27:52 3 evil sisters Part 9 Final copy I didn't want to do that but It was Gene i was trying to blame more than Riley