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| 2013-05-02 09:28:43 |
Dependence (repost because of error) |
This was a good story.. I think your method of uploading it is making your story formatting look wrong, because the method you used is making your sentences look like you've written improperly formatted paragraphs or overly short paragraphs.. and it's making it look bad and read worse than it should.
Try saving your stories in TEXT (TXT) format on your computer and then upload the .TXT file of your story to this board when you're trying to post it.
I think you'd find even this story would get a rating in the high 90's (Excellent!). I read it ignoring all those paragraph breaks and I really liked it... but at that time I didn't realize why you had so many paragraphs in the first page. I only remembered later, when I went to re-read it a second time. |
| 2013-05-01 15:54:58 |
Dependance |
good story.. next one, Please! |
| 2013-04-29 12:35:27 |
My Mother's Hot Cunt |
sounds to me as though it would have been more plausable if he'd said "curly hairs on her thighs and the dampness of her pussy" - women who shave their pussies will miss the hairy growth along their thighs, close to their pussy. I Prefer both areas shaved... down both legs, down to their toes! |
| 2013-04-29 11:55:58 |
The first time My wife see me sucking cocks. |
Good story, but your lack of punctuation (quote marks, comma's, and at least a period or two were missing) made the story confusing, at certain times.
I liked your story. You know how to tell a story, but allow a grammar checker to help you out if you can't afford the time to get someone to proofread your stories before posting. |
| 2013-04-25 14:50:23 |
Brother and Sister Get Wasted |
This story started out well... but your ending was too rushed.
I recommend you rewrite it and erase this old version... I know your capable of better writing than this! |
| 2013-04-25 14:05:39 |
Uncle Dave |
As an avid reader, I can tell that authors sometimes change their names when they post stories when they change posting sites, and sometimes when the author gets older and more well known, or sometimes they change their name just because they didn't like their old names... and want a knew one! |
| 2013-04-23 23:56:07 |
Finding my way back home, Parts 5 and6 of 6 |
I wrote this before and I stand by this- You should bring these stories to a book publisher - you're an excellent writer. |
| 2013-04-23 00:06:06 |
Cruise Ship Regeneration Part 03 |
somethings not right! |
| 2013-04-20 02:00:52 |
Finding my way back home, Parts 1 and 2 of 6 |
This is an Excellent story, for a change. I read it and almost as soon as the third sentence I realized this wasn't your typical hormone-driven-sex-fantasy story as I usually find on this site.
This story is So well written, I imagined you were a professional writer, or a novelist writing under a nome-de-plume (a secret identity) for writers). I am So looking forward to future instalments of your story! |
| 2013-04-19 23:45:34 |
Camping with my Daughter |
good story but it could use another chapter :) |
| 2013-04-19 15:54:25 |
My week with Mandy by funguy |
wow...that was a long story... i made it barely to the halway point and didn't even get to the parts people are commenting on. That first half was pretty good... now i wonder if i'll bother to finish reasding it. you should break it up into smaller sections. And Please follow the sites labelling conventions so we can skip any sections we don't find apprpriate! |
| 2013-04-19 15:19:01 |
Sister and Me |
This story could be So much better if you fixed as few items.... take your time with jumping from one event to another... you write as if you're in a big hurry to get to the end.
Delete this version... it doesn't show your talent in a good way. Rewrite this story, and take into account what i and others have pointed out. When you repost, add "(Editted)" or "(Corrected)” to the end of the subject and titles of this new story. |
| 2013-04-18 23:46:22 |
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excellent story! can't wait to read part (chapter?) 2! |
| 2013-04-17 22:17:05 |
Babysitting my moms friend daughter |
Sorry to say this but it is true - I've read better spelled and grammatically correct stories from people who had English as their Second language. If your excuse is that you wrote this on a phone - Do ALL your future stories on a PC or Laptop, equipped with A wordprocessor like MS Word- but it must have a spell checker AND a grammar checker.
The least you can do is fix all your mistakes and re-write those bad sections and rePost it with the same title but put (Corrected) at the end of the new title...and then delete this version.
This version is an embarassment if you keep it around! |
| 2013-04-17 11:39:34 |
Naked daughter |
This was an Excellent and well written story.... and yet, it got me hot :) I hope to run into more of your stories! |
| 2013-04-15 12:47:12 |
Milk of Desire, Book II : Chapter 6 : Mom's home! |
Wow... excellent Series. I came across one then read another..before I knew it I'd read them all at one session! All your story "chapters" read SO smoothly, I didn't even notice any misspellings or grammar mistakes unlike other less polished writers on this site! Will there be more BOOKS and chapters? With your style of writing and imagination, I can't believe I'll tire of reading these stories any time soon - and THAT's a BIG compliment :)
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| 2013-04-14 22:56:37 |
Deep Sleeper Ch. 02 |
good story... would like to see her further her playtime explorations :) |
| 2013-04-13 17:24:13 |
Deep Sleeper Ch. 01 |
this was so good you had me enjoying it along with your character, Rachel. can't wait to read the rest of the series. |
| 2013-04-13 16:58:56 |
Little Sister |
really good story :)
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| 2013-04-11 13:19:02 |
Who Am I? part 1 |
really good story and so truly believable.... to those peole yelling spell checker- the mistakes in spellingvwhere as legitimate words replaces a wrongly sdpelled word is called as legal mispelling.
Sometimes the user chooses the wrong word when presented with options and other times it's the spell-checker software that chooses for you. Microsoft Word used to maske those legal mispelling mistakes all by itself.
Author- they're right in that you need to prtoofread your stories. |
| 2013-04-11 13:04:24 |
Who Am I? part 1 |
really good story and so truly believable.... to those peole yelling spell checker- the mistakes in spellingvwhere as legitimate words replaces a wrongly sdpelled word is called as legal mispelling.
Sometimes the user chooses the wrong word when presented with options and other times it's the spell-checker software that chooses for you. Microsoft Word used to maske those legal mispelling mistakes all by itself.
Author- they're right in that you need to prtoofread your stories. |
| 2013-04-11 12:38:26 |
My Adopted Daughter 4 |
excellent story... almost feels true-to-life. I agree with Merc098, for your next chapter he should give her as lecture..after he throws his friends out.
and to anonymous....the girl was not made into a whore.... she was called that by one of his friends.
Dad should straighten her out and warn her about her behavior.... that it could lead her to a bad life. |
| 2013-04-11 09:19:51 |
My Adopted Daughter |
really good story... a little short but if you're going to do a series I think it will be more satisfying to read all at once than to read only one short story. You may want to consider combining them into ONE story with multiple chapters. I'm looking forward to reading more...Shannon is an intriguing mix of submissive, well-built and youthful sex partner. |
| 2013-04-11 09:09:17 |
First Dick I Sucked |
And as if she didn't feel much with her mouth and tongue nor felt any excitement from giving her partners any pleasure... nor any personal sense of gratification. your character plays her role as if she was merely there to be used... and yet, she didn't see it that way. |
| 2013-04-11 09:06:13 |
First Dick I Sucked |
good story but the sex events were too short and over too quick... it would have been more entertaining if your character took longer in nnot only giving head but also described herself in the moment for longer than a couple of sentences. It's almost as if she took a long time to get these guys to come but it meant nothing to her. |
| 2013-04-11 08:46:17 |
For the Love of Big Cocks |
Wow... this was a Really good story. This is the second story of yours I've read. Please keep writing...you have a fan :) |
| 2013-04-11 08:10:57 |
Denver and Alex |
this was a really good story - it even had me turned on. But you should try to make your paragraphs a shorter, if only to make it easier to read. I'll happily read more of your stories. |
| 2013-04-10 10:17:26 |
Cozumel |
I really enjoyed this.. although I needed more... something - I don't know what. But I would really enjoy reading future chapters to this story. |
| 2013-04-10 10:13:15 |
Camping With Mom |
Hot story! Any plans for future chapters? :) |
| 2013-04-10 09:44:38 |
the zargons 2 |
Wow.. you REALLY need to get this proofread... and fix your punctuation and Grammar!
The story has some good parts but it doesn't read well because of those mistakes I pointed out. Please FIX! |
| 2013-04-10 09:42:38 |
the zargons |
you should delete this story since it is blank! |
| 2013-04-10 09:42:02 |
Dear uncle john |
good story but Needs proofreading - and you need to learn how to punctuate! Bad punctuation really makes reading your stories difficult! (I already mentioned this before but it's worth mentioning again!)
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| 2013-04-10 09:33:21 |
Kadeecame grows up |
I enjoyed your story but you really need to proof-read your stories so that they can be better appreciated by everyone who reads them. Your story was good but the grammar and missing punctuation really interrupted the flow of your stories... and sometimes made your thoughts rather confusing to follow.
I rate your story a "7" out of "10 but with a little fixing up, it could go as high as 8, 9 or even 10 - depending on how well you fix it up.
BTw.. I don't see how this relates to your other stories. I read :Kadee" (first time) and suddenly now she's having sex with family - where is the story between these two where she is introduced to incest?
Now that I think about it, all your KADEE stories should be numbered and checked for continuity.. it would be great to read a series of stories that related to one another. I know you can connect them with a little re-write, if you haven't thought of that already.
i'm looking forward to reading more of your (fixed up) stories. |
| 2013-04-10 09:12:05 |
Dependance |
WHERE is the story??? |
| 2013-04-10 09:08:55 |
A Daughter Takes Sides |
really good story... can't wait to read more of your stories! |
| 2013-04-05 22:13:24 |
D Returns III |
Who moderates this section? This is simply a story (and not a very good one) and it belongs in the story section...not jokes nor poems sections, either! |
| 2013-04-04 22:46:00 |
Seduction of Gabby |
I can't believe I enjoyed that! Thank God it's only a story... but it made me think of some women who were like Gabby...young, short and willing to please - Thanks Purvv! |
| 2013-04-04 01:01:15 |
Camping Trip |
really good story.too bad there is no further chapters in this story. |
| 2013-04-04 00:54:02 |
My drunken son |
really good... more, please :) |
| 2013-04-04 00:47:20 |
Mistaken when drunk |
really good series..i enjoyed this story. |
| 2013-04-04 00:40:11 |
What happens under the covers...Stays under the covers.. Part 2. |
great story... can't wait for more chapters to come |
| 2013-04-03 12:12:08 |
She stayed for the night |
good story.. sometimes too much detail.. but a good story |
| 2013-04-03 11:42:38 |
My Whole Family Needed Me |
good story.. next chapter! |
| 2013-04-03 11:37:38 |
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wheres chapter 2? really good story. |
| 2013-04-03 11:33:43 |
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great story.... too bad she doesn't get him again |
| 2013-04-03 11:27:36 |
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great story... 2nd chapter? |
| 2013-04-01 10:47:26 |
Secret lover |
Good story.. Any more stories in there waiting to come out? I can't wait to read more of your stories. |
| 2013-04-01 10:25:32 |
Alyssa Learns (: |
Good but too short. Your characters deserve a better, long-er story... let their feelings brew before being their actions to a boil (sex). |
| 2013-04-01 10:22:23 |
My sister Alicia |
For a short story, this was good... but I agree with your other reviews, it was TOO short... and you really need to learn to use Spell Check and a find a reliable Grammar checker if you don't have someone who can do it for you.
In it's core, you demonstrate a knowledge of how to tell a story but it's almost too rushed... like you were hurrying to get to the sex stuff. Great Sex is in the brain... As a reader, the story has to turn me on to sex long before the sex happens. As a writer, you can't hurry to get to the physical sex... get a fire going in your reader thru your characters' actions, thoughts and movements.... think of it as two people meeting for a dance... first they meet, size each other up, approach, start dancing slow then gradually speed up as the music overtakes them. Despite what people wrote, it isn't a BAD story.. i've read a lot worse on this site... but it isn't FAR from the bottom, simply because you rushed yourself. I say - revise your story. |
| 2013-03-30 00:48:23 |
Night Games |
great stoy.. too bad maria Moved away..she was .A great character, i was looking forward to reading more of her adventures! |
| 2013-03-28 23:54:33 |
Best Sister in the World!!! Part 2 |
if you still don't believe me about how big nipples can get - do a google search for "big nipples", "large nipples" or "long nipples". You'll be amazed at what sex ed books and classes DON'T tell you about. Yes, the averae nipple is about 3/8" but the key there is the use of the word AVERAGE.
The sex ed. classes teach us that the average penis is 6" long... but if you do a search, you'll find pictures of penises with lengths of 18"-24", and even one poor guy that has a 30" penis.
Just because your sex ed class says they are usually of a certain size and length doesn't mean you won't find BIGGER. |
| 2013-03-28 23:40:22 |
Best Sister in the World!!! Part 2 |
and to that person who says nipples can't be the size of thumbs - you obviously haven't seen enough real women, in an excited state. The first time I encountered a girl with large nipples, they weren't large until I'd benn licking and nibbing her tits for a while. When i went to give her a gentle suck i ended up biting her nipple because it had grown to such
large proportions in my mouth and i unfortunately had not realized until my teeth nipped her as i started suckling. Needless to say she was in quite a bit of pain. Most girls nipples ARE small and may get firm when excited but don't grow as large as a thumb... most get no thicker or larger than a pencil eraser. But there are an few who's nipples do grow to exaggerated proportions. Some womens' nipples never grow firm... it all depends on the woman, how sensitive her nipples are and how long she's been turned on. |
| 2013-03-28 23:31:26 |
Best Sister in the World!!! Part 2 |
beautiful story... i could easily believe it happened, that's how good it was :) |
| 2013-03-28 14:29:54 |
Momma's boy |
Good story..really hot.. :)
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| 2013-03-28 13:27:20 |
Family Knows Best Chapter 2 |
Good story... No bad spelling or grammar mistakes to get in the way of a good story.
This is a good second chapter to your other story. But you may want to indent the first word of each paragraph just to make reading it a bit easier on the eyes and the mind :) |
| 2013-03-28 13:23:03 |
DV8- The formula for sucksex |
good story... I look forward to reading more. |
| 2013-03-28 12:58:50 |
Uncle And Me |
My friend, your story idea is good but you are obviously a person who is not a native English speaker... or you chose to not proof read your story. There are many expressions you use that do not make sense in the English language but I'm sure make a lot of sense in your native language. Please have someone who is a native English speaker proofread your story - it could be a winner if you fixed those expressions/idioms and grammar mistakes. There are other errors that make it difficult to enjoy your story simply because they get in the way of good storytelling. Please don't give up on writing but please get some help along the way :) |
| 2013-03-27 23:00:16 |
Family Knows Best Chapter 2 Revised |
Excellent story :) I almost forgot it wasn't a professionally written story on some magazine... no mispellings nor any glaring grammar errors, whatever methods you used to write and proofread this story is how you should use for your future stories! |
| 2013-03-27 00:42:55 |
when I was 8 years old |
I read your story and even cried a little for that little girl who was going thru this. As far as stories go, it read more like a statement pieced together from the answers to questions from a Policeman... it was all a bit to mechanical and not fluid.
If you were to rewrite it, your story could easily compell your reader to experience emotions as they feel for the victim or to be extremely seductive(?) if written to fulfill a fantasy as the rapists... but it needs more "filler" either way- either with more thoughts the victim or in favor of the rapists. |
| 2013-03-27 00:22:23 |
my first oral sex |
i couldn't even read this story- it seriously needs reformating before i'd even attempt to read it. Please fix and repost (delete old version after reposting!) |
| 2013-03-27 00:17:32 |
Seducing my cousin Anthony |
that was unusually hot... good story, though :) |
| 2013-03-26 23:02:55 |
My cousin and me pt. 1 |
good story... nothing wrong with it except it was so good i want to read more-hehe! |
| 2013-03-26 22:53:07 |
Me and my daughter |
I enjoyed your story and I am not that easy to please... despite a "son"/adopted daughter named Megan. But I figured you missed when proofreading or that you weren't a native English speaker..so no biggie issue for me. (I've seen far worse mistakes made on other stories) |
| 2013-03-26 22:38:43 |
my daughter |
if they can't sign their name to a comment, then they're just bullying and not offering any real help.
I liked yyour story. It shows a plot and good story-telling skill. But I agree in that it seemed too short. Not to sound like some English teacher, but it needs some fleshing out. Mind you, most of your readers have some college education or at least a few years of being struck across their hands by an English & Grammer teacher- so they will be the first to point out your violating basic rules... if you only take the common elements of each person's criticism of your story, you will see what you need to "fix". Unfortunately, some people labelled your story negatively after seeing a few glaring violations and seem to ignore your skill as a storyteller.... So fix you mistakes by proofreeading your future stories but don't let anyone discourage you from writing more stories. |
| 2013-03-25 22:27:04 |
Tentacle Monster |
i think you rushed thru the story. Someone mentioned "building up" and they were right by my perspective. It's a promising 1st draft. |
| 2013-03-24 23:41:14 |
Family Knows Best |
Wow.. That was such a good story! I was So surprised cause i really did not expect it to be that good or well written :) Please- write more stories! I wish this site had a way of saving favorite writers to my profile so i could easily be notified of their newest or latest stories automatically because you would certainly be on that list. |
| 2013-03-24 02:14:44 |
Sister's drunken party |
fun story..i had fun imagining doing the same thing he did! |
| 2013-03-24 02:08:22 |
Married to my sister |
excellent story.. want more :) |
| 2013-03-24 00:27:02 |
Janice Goodall mind controlled part 1 |
was the other version of this same entitled story just a rough summary of this story? you should delete it! this was much better written! but it still needs work although it shows a good deal more talent than the other version. keep working on it. |
| 2013-03-24 00:22:54 |
Janice Goodall mind controlled day 1 |
i hate to say a story is bad... so let me say this on needs a lot of work! |
| 2013-03-24 00:18:13 |
Showering with younger sister |
good story, despite factual realities aside - i enjoyed it and thats what matters to me :) so keep writing more stories! |
| 2013-03-24 00:11:49 |
Daddys slut |
this was a really good role playing story. |
| 2013-03-23 23:45:44 |
My 14 yr old sis likes it rough :) |
there's a video of your sister? - Post it, Please! :) This was a good story... I'm going to have too look your profile up to find these other stories! I like sequels to good stories :) |
| 2013-03-23 23:36:40 |
The damp spot again |
good story... i would have liked a series of nights with her ghostly lover instead of one night, then its over! Actually, there is a woman in Texas who reported this situation happen to her. Perhaps you can google it and read her version... kind of spooky but if its real to her.. her story could be the basis of longer version of your story :) |
| 2013-03-23 00:45:09 |
MY CUM BUCKET JEANNE Pt.1 |
I liked your story because it's plot showed a lot of promise. But I didn't like your story because you rushed right into sex, and rushed thru it. Think about how you'd tell this story if you were in a room full of inquisitive and like minded people - you'd start slow, and build up to a conclusion by filling up your story with descriptions so your listeners would be able to imagine being you in this story. THAT is how you draw people into your story.. details are what make it a better story-at least, in my opinion. Keep writing, writing a great story comes from practicing your craft thru writing many stories. The technical stuff like grammar, punctuation and credible detail writing can be had by asking your english teachers for some help. |
| 2013-03-21 23:40:30 |
Afraid to sleep alone |
excellent story... i've read it before on other forums. would like to read new chapters..if you can write more. |
| 2013-03-21 23:16:59 |
Josh Gets Drunk and Rapes His Sister |
good story.. although epilogue ending seemed a bit rushed, almost as if it was an after thought. Such a good story deserved a better written ending... perhaps even stretched into a second chapter.... with more about her continued lessons from big brother? |
| 2013-03-20 23:51:38 |
As Told to the Purvv: Vicky |
good story..i would have enjoyed future chapters, it's too bad thre won't be any. |
| 2013-03-20 23:45:38 |
Wet Dreams |
Good story .. but for my tastes, i enjoyed reading the description of what the monster was doing and the characters' reaction more than i enjoyed reading about the monster "talking". I can't say why - at this late hour my mind is not thinking well enough to know why that is. |
| 2013-03-16 05:11:28 |
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good story but phone texting part throws the rhythm of the story, to me. Other than that.. its good - like your drunk daddy story. |
| 2013-03-11 16:18:28 |
Matt's Little Sister, and Friend |
Really good sequel to "Matt's little sister".... IS there a part 3? :)
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| 2013-03-11 16:12:38 |
Matt's Little Sister |
Excellent story... almost forgot she was 12 :) |
| 2013-03-11 11:21:13 |
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I found it unusually Hot. There were times I found it a bit slow, but I'm not sure I could tell you why that is. I would enjoy a sequel or chapters to this story. Bring it ON :)
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This isn't meant to be a duplication because I meant to post these comments under my own name but I didn't realize I hadn't signed in. |
| 2013-02-25 22:38:29 |
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not many writers on here go to much into details. many are sparse on details in order to get to the sex as fast as possible. looking. forward to more chapters or stories from you. |
| 2013-02-25 22:36:31 |
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Excellent story.. a little slow for me in the beginning but only because i wasn't used to so much details in the writing |
| 2013-02-21 03:00:12 |
It began with a hole |
good story.. needs a little work but it was not hard to read. only some grammar errors but nothing terribly bad. if anything, you would have caught these things yourself if you composed the story offline on a wordprocessor (ms word) and pasted the finished stories to the website. |
| 2013-02-21 02:32:25 |
Unexpected Benifits |
when copying from word.. save as dos text file then upload text file... that usually retains paragraph formatting... or copy and paste from text file to website. |
| 2013-02-21 02:29:45 |
Unexpected Benifits |
good story bordering on excellent. |
| 2013-02-21 02:21:49 |
The New Girl |
good story... I agree with another reader - you have the potential to be a great writer. Write more stories - i look forward to reading them. |
| 2013-02-21 02:16:51 |
Amanda's Dad at the Gloryhole |
Excellent story.. Please write more chapters or more stories - I'm looking forward to reading them.
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| 2013-02-21 02:08:31 |
The first incest experience with my mother - all 4 chapters compiled into 1 [as requested] |
Excellent story.. more chapters or new stories, please! :) |
| 2013-02-20 23:39:43 |
Gina and her horsies... |
For those who don't know - HHH SIZE breasts are British bra sizes and China (former british colony).
I enjoyed your story. I look forward to future ch adapters and stories from you.
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| 2013-02-20 23:12:58 |
Couple of Georgia Boys |
Your story was good, and that despite the fact I don't normally read stories on this subject.
I only had two issues: 1) - you wrote "to tell him tell the tale"... I believe you meant "To hear him tell the tale", and 2- you need to separate a few paragraphs that are too close together.... they look to be to close... makes it harder to read.
But make no mistake - It's a good, well written story and I liked the story! Maybe you can add later chapters that include meeting and learning from girls. |
| 2013-02-20 00:33:23 |
mom taking care of me |
I agree with another reviewer, you write well except you seem to rush thru sme parts. Take your time to fully develop intimate moments with added details and more "words" so we can feel as we're living the story...give us time to feel as thhe characters are feeling. you know... draw it out. |
| 2013-02-18 14:32:31 |
Changed Life |
After all, your later stories are REALLY good to read. |
| 2013-02-18 14:31:39 |
Changed Life |
You really should re-post this after you do some proof-reading and break up the story into paragraphs.
It reads as if you either don't known English (or Grammar) or that you were in too much of a hurry to post this. It COULD get higher reviews if you do as I suggest since you won't chase people away from reading poorly written story all due to format and not SO MUCH poor content. |
| 2013-02-18 11:26:42 |
I Lust My Sister Meridian |
Excellent story! I really enjoyed reading it. |
| 2013-02-18 11:22:10 |
DADDY'S LITTLE JEWEL -- Chapter I: Unexpected Luster |
I really enjoyed reading this story. I'm looking forward to reading the new chapters :) |
| 2013-02-18 11:01:17 |
Curious Cousin |
I enjoyed your story and I'm not afraid to post my name to these comments. I hope to read more of them! |
| 2013-02-18 10:43:35 |
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EXCELLENT Story! I was amazed how well written it was. I'd love to read a sequel, and I'm probably alone in this but I enjoyed reading how well daddy treated his daughter and took his time to teach her the joys of sex without rushing into the sex - Just like a loving Dad would in real life. Keep up the great writing! |
| 2012-12-11 13:29:37 |
Me and my brother |
I agree with your other readers - You havea very good story, even though It's not my subject of choice, but you do need to work on your grammar and use of punctuation. If you fixed those issues, it could prove to be a winner :) |
| 2012-10-24 15:53:49 |
Preteen years with brother 3 |
ashweta69 - What you need is an editor who speaks the English Language and can correct mistakes like your.
Those who are SO critical of his English must be experts so why don't you guys volunteer to fix his stories? |
| 2012-10-08 13:21:59 |
My Boyfriend's Cock |
Dayzluvher,
You shouldn't worry about judgemental comments... Look for compliments on what you did right and take negative comments seriously when it's accompanied by constructive criticisms - They at least give you a way to improve your writing.
Take my advice to heart, only petty people want to destroy you by their criticisms. Most of us enjoy reading stories and appreciate the effort it takes to write and develop a story. Welcome the criticisms, so that you may improve your writing and be happier with the outcome in your future projects. |