Comments from gymgirl
|2012-12-09 18:22:52||Girls In Trouble, Part 5||Oh this is Part 6 not 5
I so wish we could edit lol
|2012-12-09 18:30:30||Girls In Trouble, Part 1||There are a lot of exclamation marks, but the girls are constantly being amazed!! It's a style thing :). The girls are young, inexperieneced, that's why. It reflects the intensity of their experiences.
Well...perhaps I overdid it, perhaps not. More comments please - like or not?
|2012-12-15 15:56:16||Marie's Christmas||Haha wonderful. I love the realism with the dodgy self-esteem blending into the action-packed fairy story, and the way the magic has limits and a rationale. Totally great.|
|2013-01-03 12:20:02||Girls In Trouble, Part 5||Thanks whoever gave it a few positives. TBH it's no surprise Eric had friends who behave like the one below you, sneaking in a vindictive personal attack, anonymously, instead of debating the issue openly and honestly. Perhaps I should've made a sock lol. Anyway fewer readers will find the story now, so they're paying sadly. Not that it was exactly a blockbuster anyway!!|
|2013-01-03 16:13:19||Chantelle||I must apologise for having set this one to members-only voting; unfortunately someone who disagrees with an argument I've been having has been voting down my stories to get back at me anonymously.
Comments are open however, so please have your say...