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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-05-17 14:06:41 |
Fire Class - Chapter 1 |
Thank you for your support when I finish my next novel I will give you a shout, though it will take a few months to write and with the planning I am putting into it, it will be big.
1/4 of my room is already covered in A4 sheets, each sheet a different character and back story..
Hoping to create a novel that I can split of into where ever I want, like a writing version of Skyrim (The game)... one main story but shit loads of side stories to give a bit of depth and plenty of chances for me to work on my descriptions
Fire Class was only 250k words, and I'm aiming for a million words on this one. :) ...JWDD |
| 2013-04-26 17:37:57 |
Fire Class Part Three |
Fire Class is now complete and will be posted within the week (Before 33rd April) once I have proof read it and made it as best I can make it I will post it. |
| 2013-04-10 21:14:00 |
Fire Class Going To School |
Oh my god, are you magical, this new post has soo many similarities to me story even the parts I haven't posted yet. Well not the fire masters stuff but weapons and practice arena's. Also your writing is rather brief, try to put some more information into your lessons as (The teacher show up.... I was well versed by the end) style isn't that exciting. I mean I'm probably not the best role model but when I write about a lesson I fill it out, or skip the time period of that lesson entirely..,,,JWDD |
| 2013-03-31 20:22:18 |
Fire Class Part Three |
writing in posts takes time, I prefer to write in huge chunks, I have always been a pleasure, changing my way to suit others so by no longer posting in parts I can write my story in peace and when i post it you just have to swallow your opinion.... I do care about my readers and I like to hear your opinions but I want to be a great writer and I can't become that if i'm constantly changing my story to suit your desires...JWDD |
| 2013-03-30 21:15:01 |
FIre Class: Falling in Love |
I look forward to reading the rest of your story... JWDD + ....JWDD (for my post below, I forgot to add my signature at the end, how unprofessional of me. tut tut) |
| 2013-03-30 21:13:55 |
FIre Class: Falling in Love |
I wish more people would try and have a go at my stories. in a weird way I kind of like being quoted, makes me feel like a bit of a celeb. anyway currently writing the ending to fire class, and I freaking love it. over 200k words from start to where i am now, and the stuff posted is about 50k words so theirs ALOT of new stuff. also been working on some new stories about cyborgs and I have been continuing on with my MORFS story in my spare times when I need a break from magic and sci-fi |
| 2013-03-30 08:52:57 |
FIre Class: Falling in Love |
Also to all those commentors giving you new ideas, where were these awesome ideas on my original post lol..... JWDD |
| 2013-03-30 08:49:15 |
FIre Class: Falling in Love |
Not bad, In my opinion the love was a bit hasty and the information talent is a bit too strong (access to all knowledge, only a thought away) but its not my story,
Other than that I liked it, I agree with the others about spelling and grammer but you should read some of my first stories, their terrible. Anyway, good luck with the story I am curious to see if you add in the other characters I created and how you make Jamie deal with them.....JWDD |
| 2013-01-21 05:41:13 |
Fire Class Part Three |
Sorry about where I left it, on a small scale it seemed a good place to stop but on a larger scale it doesn't work as well.
It wasn't about trying to kill himself, it was about being the show off that he is and trying to do something impossible (Subconscious fire control).
I am sorry I left it like it is, causing it to look like a lack of plot but I have the comeback of other characters, the plot is there if just not highly obvious, there is still the investigator/Summer's mother and a few more which will be added in the next part. |
| 2013-01-19 14:48:02 |
Biology 101. |
I haven't stopped with the Fire Class just trying to decide where to take it. plus with the request to make it more dramatic I have been deleting paragraphs at a time because I wasn't happy with it.... I will be posting more when I get around to it so don't give up on me..... JWDD |
| 2013-01-07 18:27:28 |
Fire Class Part Two |
Sorry for the delay in post, but I'm afraid you will have to wait a bit longer... I have been moving house over the new year and in my home I have no internet till the 24th (Currently round a friends). but this lack of internet means no xbox, no youtube browsing and plenty of time for me to write...
I have been focusing hard on my Fire Class story with a renewed passion, I hope that it's something you didn't expect but are none the less thrilled by, as per your request I am trying to make it as dramatic as possible and the ending I have lined up (In my opinion) is my best yet..... Hope you had a fantastic christmas and new year, JWDD |
| 2012-12-10 16:16:45 |
Fire Class Part Two |
Still writing this story and thank you for your kind words, however I am starting to get bored of this story and although I will finish this story I would like to hear your ideas on a new story line. I would like to stick to the topic of supernatural but if your ideas sound good I may be considered to write off topic.
So please PM with your ideas, all are welcome and I will start to build a story plot whilst I write my other stories.
JWDD |
| 2012-11-30 11:17:49 |
Onyx |
Resolution with Drov is in the sequel... Have been working on The Hawk and Fire Class recently, although swamped a bit starting a new job so that's why posting has been slow. Will post when I have written a bit more on each story as currently they are a lot shorter than the first parts |
| 2012-11-13 16:59:57 |
Teasers |
Hopefully soon, as I said working on the Onyx story > Fire Class > The Hawk... JWDD |
| 2012-11-10 07:19:22 |
Fire Class |
Very proud of my new Fire Class story, although I have been writing a brand new story which I hope will be even better, I have mixed up my writing style, whilst trying to create a deeper plot. Contains, my whole plot idea has a few twists in it to keep you interested. I will post the first half when I reach it.... JWDD |
| 2012-11-08 18:45:27 |
The Inventor and his girls... part 1 |
If you really dislike my stories, I'm not forcing you to read them, YOU opened it up, I do not claim to be the best writer there is, I only do it for a bit of fun.
So next time when you find a problem with my stories which makes you not want to carry on, I beg, you just exit out my story and continue on with your life. |
| 2012-11-08 18:42:29 |
The Inventor and his girls... part 1 |
"your education is no better than third or fourth grade level. Worst of all, you show no interest in improving yourself.... like we're obligated to put up with the ignorant shit that you think passes for legible writing. Do us a favor... don't write."
That's not criticism, that just hurtful. I listen to what people say in the earlier comments, there is no reason to just repeat their suggestions in a rude and frankly cruel manner. |
| 2012-11-08 11:14:13 |
The Inventor and his girls... part 1 |
ouch... granted it's not my best piece it was one of my first, but I'd like to think I'm getting better. so in the words of thumper "If you have nothing nice to say.... SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!" |
| 2012-11-08 11:13:52 |
The Inventor and his girls... part 1 |
ouch... granted it's not my best piece it was one of my first, but I'd like to think I'm getting better. so in the words of thumper "If you have nothing nice to say.... SHUT THE FUCK UP!!!" |
| 2012-11-06 11:29:42 |
Damn My Sons Cock Is Huge; Part Four |
people like sex stories as their is more emotion, more story and basically just more... your writing about pure none restricted sex, and if I wanted that, i would go watch porn... Granted your writing ability is good, your have (if possibly) too much sex and not enough story, there has to be a reason to sex not because your horny and he there |
| 2012-11-04 07:18:42 |
Captain Jones |
my bad on the Brig mix up... Pirate life isn't exactly my forte, I will take you up on the idea of adding themes...
I am currently writing a new version of Fire Class, with more action and a better story line... I have also done a bit of work on the sequel to The Gift. plus I have been writing a new story that consists of Princess's, Criminals and Dragons... Hopefully it will be an entertaining read that you will enjoy.
I have taken more care into my work before posting it as I have had a few mistake pop up that I have missed. so it will be longer between posts.
Happy reading.... JWDD |
| 2012-10-25 20:18:29 |
the great war 3033 part one |
It's not bad, the base line story has promise, I like it. |
| 2012-10-24 06:57:34 |
The Inventor - Part 2 - Chapter 10 |
Thanks, when writing i do it from memory, so I write in huge chunks becuase if I take a break I forget what has happened. I find chapters difficult as it's alot of stopping and starting. but im working at it. |
| 2012-10-24 04:39:19 |
The Inventor - Part 2 - Chapter 10 |
Fire Class was inspired after Harry potter and then remebering Avatar (The last airbender).. so I thought it would be a good idea... It's really hard to come up with ideas for Fire Class, because Harrpy potter is so widely known it's hard to stay origional, plus I'm not very good a making up names expsecially surnames and spell names.
Also I did a sequel to The Gift where it's set 13 years ahead and theres new problems to face but that has been put on the back burner. |
| 2012-10-23 16:08:22 |
The Inventor - Part 2 - Chapter 10 |
I would like to finish the Hawk 1984 story, but I only got the inspiration after watching the film Rock of Ages with the trailer for the TV series Arrow in the middle...However I am currently Re-writing Fire Class, to make it a bit more of a story because the part 2 bit I wrote ended the story and was nearly half the length of part 1. |
| 2012-09-19 05:53:34 |
The Tale of Aura |
I appologise for the writing, copying from word bunched it all up together and reading it through I found several major mistakes in my writing... Currently working on the fixed version. |