Comments from JWDD
|2012-09-19 05:53:34||The Tale of Aura||I appologise for the writing, copying from word bunched it all up together and reading it through I found several major mistakes in my writing... Currently working on the fixed version.|
|2012-10-25 20:18:29||the great war 3033 part one||It's not bad, the base line story has promise, I like it.|
|2012-11-04 07:18:42||Captain Jones||my bad on the Brig mix up... Pirate life isn't exactly my forte, I will take you up on the idea of adding themes...
I am currently writing a new version of Fire Class, with more action and a better story line... I have also done a bit of work on the sequel to The Gift. plus I have been writing a new story that consists of Princess's, Criminals and Dragons... Hopefully it will be an entertaining read that you will enjoy.
I have taken more care into my work before posting it as I have had a few mistake pop up that I have missed. so it will be longer between posts.
Happy reading.... JWDD
|2012-11-06 11:29:42||Damn My Sons Cock Is Huge; Part Four||people like sex stories as their is more emotion, more story and basically just more... your writing about pure none restricted sex, and if I wanted that, i would go watch porn... Granted your writing ability is good, your have (if possibly) too much sex and not enough story, there has to be a reason to sex not because your horny and he there|
|2012-11-10 07:19:22||Fire Class||Very proud of my new Fire Class story, although I have been writing a brand new story which I hope will be even better, I have mixed up my writing style, whilst trying to create a deeper plot. Contains, my whole plot idea has a few twists in it to keep you interested. I will post the first half when I reach it.... JWDD|