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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2012-09-23 11:27:51 |
My Niece and Her Friend on Spring Break - Chapter I |
[hard14U here]: I will begin writing the next chapter this week. If you would like me to update you on its completion, just pm me with said request. |
| 2012-09-21 14:34:23 |
Spying on Big Brother |
~ fucking fantastic story! ~ great job with the 3rd Person omniscient! ... (I too write stories of a similar theme) ~ but I gotta say: you are awesome in your writing style! ... SO turned ON I am! ... (cock in hand, stroking it, wet with precum). |
| 2012-03-05 10:29:34 |
Big Man on Campus |
wow! ~ (previous critic)! ... you must be the type to hold a grudge for a long time! ... IF you followed the chronology of the story, you would understand that the "tattle-tailing" scene occurred many years before the realtime scenario ~ (but, if you wish to pick shit apart unnecessarily and illogically, I certainly can't stop you). |
| 2012-01-01 15:10:04 |
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fantastic fucking story! ~ just fucking fantastic! ... (spelling errors & grammar aside) ~ I can get past such minutia. |
| 2010-09-02 16:31:34 |
Double Cousins |
I'll come back to this after I get over the *sudden thunderstorm* device. |
| 2010-05-10 11:13:35 |
A timely cum uppance, part 1 |
a very erotic story ~ nice tension ... once I acheived the suspension of disbelief and rolled with your sci-fi element, I did become aroused by your description(s)
you can cum in my office anytime |
| 2008-11-03 12:59:00 |
Girls Do It Too {3} |
the rape scene was suggested by an interested reader of the first two parts of this story ~ thought I'd give it a shot ... maybe one reason it took me so long to complete.
(not really my niche) ~ hard14U |
| 2008-08-01 14:10:08 |
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This is a really, REALLY nice story! ... the use of the thunderstorm as a tension-builder is superb ... and the "getting caught" with the first girl, Rachel.
I have read A LOT of the stories on here, and I don't know that I've ever cum so quickly from one ~ and certainly not until I had read others before it, or had been reading for some time.
Last night, I linked to the "sex stories" for a browse. I clicked on the link to your story. I began reading. I became increasingly hard with the *study scene* with Rachel. Then the build-up with the storm was very well done.
I came the moment Ari lifted the sheet to look at her brother's cock. |
| 2008-05-18 15:42:18 |
Ally's Sleepover |
this story is fucking great |