Comments from Uzukunoichi
|2012-09-18 02:08:10||Amariel's Adventures: Chapter 4, The Worst Race||Very well done. Don't forget to heal Amariel's body of any damage after those two brothers did what they did. Oh and I do hope she achieves immortality at some point, eternal youth makes an excellent happy ending.
Who is this mysterious elf? Is she her mother or her inner self.
If it's her inner self, I hope she gets to meet her mother (who will feel incredibly guilty for abandoning her) but doesn't forgive her since it was because her mother left her that she suffered so much!
Her elven powers awakening must've flushed out her half-human nature. Congrats Amariel! You're a full elf now. :D
Do they have eternal youth or just prolonged life in your story?
Anyway, I wish you good luck!
|2012-11-08 11:44:36||"Man of the House" - Part 2||It's quite good. I'll be looking forward to the rest of it.~
I don't like the Chelsey dating some guy part, but if that's what you want, oh well.
PS: What's with the dating requests in the comments? It's supposed to be for your comments regarding the story only, so stop it please!
|2012-11-10 05:04:24||"The Man of the House" - Part 4||I don't really have much to say, but it was a good chapter. Usually though (where I live) girls always prefer female gynacologists. So maybe her mother could have taken her to a female one instead, if she was uncomfortable (most girls are).|