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Story title |
Comment |
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| 2013-04-02 15:13:25 |
I Dream of Jeannie |
Thanks for all the supportive comments. |
| 2013-03-25 20:18:03 |
Kelly Ripa Wants To Be On Top |
Thanks for your comments. |
| 2013-03-17 18:47:22 |
Kelly Ripa Wants To Be On Top |
I don't mind criticism but you give none. You also seem to have a problem with completing a thought. You commented twice within a few minutes only to repeat yourself and then finish your thought. I really have no time to educate you but it might help if you looked up the definition of a screenplay before you ask me if I'm writing one. |
| 2013-03-10 12:28:50 |
Kelly Ripa Wants To Be On Top |
The story is as real as you want it to be. All you have to do is close your eyes and imagine the possibllities. |
| 2012-11-03 13:58:28 |
The Beverly Hillbillies |
Thanks for the comments. As you can tell, I've had a few fantasies about Elly May as well. |
| 2012-11-03 13:54:19 |
Married with Children |
Christina Applegate, who played Kelly Bundy, has never even posed nude. To say that she has done a porno film is ludicrous. The same goes for Katey Sagal, who played Peggy Bundy. Maybe you are thinking about Kim Kardashian. But then again, I would never write a story about that tank-ass skank. I would check your facts. |
| 2012-10-31 20:49:24 |
The Beverly Hillbillies |
I did not realize that you can't use quotation marks when making comments. The word taut means tight and the word taunt means to insult. I used and spelled the word taut correctly in the story. |
| 2012-10-31 20:28:57 |
The Beverly Hillbillies |
Thanks for the comments. It is a corny story but no more so than the TV series was. I've never given the black and white visualization much thought but it an interesting one. I would like to comment on the mis-spelling comment. As far as can see, I spelled the word "taut" correctly. I'm only an amatuer writer but I take my spelling very seriously. "Taut" means tight and "taunt" means to insult. |
| 2012-10-11 21:07:17 |
Married with Children |
Thanks for all the comments. I'm not sure what all the letters or 2's in the comments mean, but thanks anyway. |
| 2012-09-23 11:58:14 |
I Dream of Jeannie |
Thanks for your comment about Jeannie's vernacular. I was a big fan of the TV show and felt that my portrayal of Jeannie had to rely on the way that she said things. Thank you for picking up on that. I really like writing stories based on TV shows. |
| 2012-09-18 13:54:21 |
I Dream of Jeannie |
Sorry that I posted a response to the comments without logging in. I put a great deal of time in writing this story. I appreciate all comments. If a Barbara Eden look-alike had ever done a porno version; I would have done everything I could to have played Bill Dailey's part. I don't have a 12" dick but I would have given it a great effort. |
| 2012-09-16 11:30:49 |
I Dream of Jeannie |
Thanks. I'll take that as a compliment. |