Comments from pillow humper
|2014-01-28 11:35:55||Babysitting the Twins Again - Part 2 - Sweet Sixteen||Your second installment is just as great as the first but I did notice that you made a couple errors in the girls' names. Sometimes one reading after writing will not prove it. I also made a error like it in haste to get my first two parts published put it away for a week to ten days then read it (slowly) you will notice how you improve your writing with even needing an editor. Looking forward to part three!!!
|2013-05-28 07:32:58||ARE WE TEACHING THE CHILDREN - OR ARE THEY TEACHING US? - PART 1||Your story has a slight tone similar to mine and had surprised me by how the children were so logical. I posted a story and cut parts out of it and I have received nothing but negative comments or talk that I should not submit stories at all. I since have stopped drinking alcohol which has left my mind more clear to concentrate on making them all reader friendly.|
|2013-12-09 16:30:20||My Hot New Family Part 1||Excellent story if you can read my comment through the bullock's cock fights!!!|
|2014-01-07 14:12:21||The Diary, Daddy, and me chapter 2||Your story is developing great. I am enjoying it. I have found some errors that either you have made by keystroke or by words sounding the same but are spelled different ask your assistant about these.|
|2014-01-07 14:36:00||The Diary, Daddy, And Me Chapter 3||I can't wait for chapter 4!|