Comments from bbkradwell
|2012-05-16 13:51:41||Feeling My Daughter: Part Two||Where was the Anal Sex?
Sorry, I had to get that complaint out of the way, first.
All-in-al, it was a rather nicely Erotic story, dear girl. I think you should listen to and take all the criticism that comes your way. Especially, of course, the constructive criticque. Otherwise, how can you expect to grow as a Writer?
Now, with that said, I hope there's a story where little molly loses her Anal cherry. (Hey, I like young girls' backdoors. I'm a Dirty Old Man. What else can I say?)