||The Third Weekend in August (Part 1): Pool Party and Sammi's House
||Okay, that was supposed to be "Pool Party AT Sammi's House." Proof-read the story, didn't proof-read the title. Duh. And this site allows no editing once a story's live. Oh well...
||The Second Weekend in August (Part 1): Upstairs, Downstairs
||I hate the way this site screws up punctuation -- nad they don't give authors a way of fixing anything. Fortunately the last time this happened, the problem corrected itself after a day or so.
Hopefully nobody holds this against the story itself...
||The First Weekend in August (Part 2): Scott and Susie and Carl and Cathy and One Motel Room
||Yes, and the site makes it impossible for the author to fix. It's very discouraging to spend time and effort writing a story only to have it look like crap.
||The First Weekend in August (Part 1): Steve and Kit and the Blackout
||Okay, I'm done with this site: they messed up the formatting, and I have no way of fixing it. There's supposedly an option where an author can e-mail them and ask them to make a change, but I'm still waiting for a response to a 2-month-old request. I am not going to put time and effort into writing a story that just annoys people (and gets me a lower rating because of it).
||Bobby and Keera, Chapter : Sammi's Story
||Anonymous Reader, this is Chapter 4 of the Bobby and Keera series (the "4" got dropped out of the title and it's nearly impossible to edit anything around here). There will indeed be a part 5.
||Josh and Missy, Chapter 3: The Retur of Susie (FORMATTING CORRECTED; PLEASE READ THIS ONE)
||Anonymous, I wasn't going to have anybody get pregnant -- that's not what happened in real life after all -- but for the purposes of the story, I needed something to have happened that was terrible enough to make Josh consider what was essentially a revenge rape.
||Josh and Missy, Chapter 1: The Babysitter
||Anonymous Reader, bringing Susie back is not a bad idea at all. I think I know just how I want to do it.
By the way, for those who mentioned it, Part 1 is a true story, with names and some details changed. Part 2 is somewhat true. Past that is pure fiction, which is why "Susie" can be brought back to face the consequences of her actions.
||Bobby and Keera at the Pool, Chapter 1
||Shit. You're absolutely right, Anonymous: it's been too many years since I last had to fill a pool at the beginning of a season. Unfortunately, this site makes it very difficult to edit a story. So between you and me, what I MEANT was, Bobby had cleaned out the pool the previous day, and Bobby and Keera's dad started the pool filling at night. In the morning, Bobby had to add the chemicals, and then check the levels before he and Keera could swim.
||Bobby and Keera at the Pool, Chapter 2
||I have three openings for Chapter 3 (Bobby fucks Sammi, Bobby fucks Zoe, and Bobby fucks Keera again), and I can't decide which one to go with. Any suggestions?
(Just don't give me a negative rating if you choose one girl and I decide on a different one, okay?) :)