Comments from Gentalman
|2012-09-06 13:06:06||Another Yard||Trib Fan 2012-09-06 11:40:28
Thank you for your honest critique. I appreciate the perspective.
I was trying to get poor Zach educated by a sexually frustrated girl. Now, I see it differently with your view point.
Anonymous reader 2012-09-04 21:18:02
You get it. That hit the nail on the head. Thank you for taking the time to comment.
All others: Thank you for commenting! I enjoyed reading them all.
|2012-09-06 13:16:36||Another Yard II||Anonymous reader 2012-09-06 12:14:17 No worries there; I am no a fan!
Trib Fan 2012-09-06 11:28:11 Thanks again for the perspective.
Anonymous reader 2012-09-06 06:16:45 I was my intent to make it enjoyabe. I'm sorry I failed to meet the same level in Chapter 2.
Once Zach gets his education, things will roll better. But, that's another yard.
|2012-09-06 17:52:26||Allison and the Primdales, Part 1 Chapter 1||A good read. I read it for entertainment and got what I expected.
I recommend Daddycums for any casual reader. Definitely not a novice with his writing.
|2012-09-15 16:27:58||Another Yard VI||Anonymous reader 2012-09-14 23:36:29
Not a fan of build ups I take it. Hang in there, it's going to get crazy!
Anonymous reader 2012-09-14 12:29:33
I don't know. With Zach having an aweful time with his new knowledge, he might look to her for guidance.
Anonymous reader 2012-09-14 04:58:47
I can't see it. Maybe stay with Kate. It doesn't have that feeling of believability to me.
Thanks for the comments, I enjoyed the perspectives.
|2012-09-15 16:31:07||Another Yard V||Anonymous reader 2012-09-13 01:59:45
Glad you've enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting.
angieslover 2012-09-13 12:49:36
Thanks for the ego boost and for commenting.