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| 2013-05-12 13:37:53 |
Ticonderoga – Episode 1: Adrift |
as usual great writing cant wait for future episodes keep up the good work. also we have been paitently waiting for the return in book format |
| 2013-05-03 21:44:12 |
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you should remove this from the site, IT IS Ka Hmnd work |
| 2013-02-15 14:25:05 |
Little Bird |
don't listen to Anonymous 4:29:03, We have seen the same comments several times for other writers (we beleive he suffers from penis oops writers enve.) your story was very good nice and erotic had us at it right away took a couple of hours to finish kept getting distracted |
| 2013-02-10 13:14:11 |
the new student |
very good foor first story, keep at it as you go it will get better and better, so keep at it and don't listen to the nay sayers |
| 2013-02-04 00:44:55 |
My Pretty Little Slaves – Chapter 16 – Moving into the New Mansion with New Beginnings and Jessica's Decision |
THIS WAS GREAT WE REALLY LIKE IT NICE TO SEE EVERYTHING IS COMING TOGETHER FOR BEN AND FAIMLY |
| 2013-01-22 12:45:16 |
The Porn stars bodyguard part 1. |
We have read this before and we think it was the same author does anyone know what is going on???? |
| 2013-01-22 11:49:38 |
The Adventures of Wicked Tim, part 1. |
We liked the beginning, please continue as to the nay sayers, they are just envious becuase you were able to do what they cannot |
| 2013-01-16 23:28:27 |
WHITE pt VI |
we loved the story it was so hot, and the twist at the end was great. hope to see more from you. |
| 2013-01-16 20:01:43 |
Michelle and Katie – Special Story |
We really liked the story please keep up the good work, do not understand the negative comments (the must have tiny little _ _ _ _'s) |
| 2013-01-15 21:40:28 |
Modern Mage Chapter 18 |
awsooooooooooooooome as usual cant wait for more |
| 2013-01-13 15:30:36 |
slaver or collecter / red head and burka |
Again with the anonymous commentors, if you truly believed in your comments you attach your name, We like the story the layout and formate will improve with time and experance. please keep up the good work. for even the greatest runner in the world had to learn to walk first |
| 2013-01-13 12:21:32 |
THE MOON STONE (Part 4) |
We posted comment 2013-01-13 12:19:40 we believed we were logged in
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| 2013-01-13 01:47:20 |
My Pretty Little Slaves - Chapter 14 - Becky's gift to Ben, a fashion show trip to Paris and New York City --- Part Two |
You must have a tiny penis, at least that is Angies opinion, we love the story and he has not stolen a single woman they have come to him, of course the assholes that messed with there own women have gotten what they deserve. |
| 2013-01-10 19:12:14 |
Petite… And Marvelously Sweet! |
that was hot, we loved it really got our blood going |
| 2013-01-09 23:21:12 |
Stepson Matt...One Hot Summer (Reprint/Update) |
we really like the story, as to the anonymous post, you are full of it she deserves Matt, John has been an ass the whole story he has been cheating like crazy if he wanted something else then he should have told her it was over before he went out and hunted something else up, we are not saying that she is in the right, but her and matt's relationship was accidental and she did not go hunting for it being left alone, horny and feeling unloved will drive any woman crazy. as angie says if john would have taken care of her needs she would have been able to shuck off Matt's advances |
| 2013-01-07 18:11:28 |
Driven Wild |
dam, that was great, you continue to drive us crazy with your stories please keep up the good work |
| 2012-12-20 20:49:19 |
A MOTHER'S LOVE |
we love the story, we to will read more of your stories please keep up the good work |
| 2012-12-20 15:56:15 |
Tough Lesson |
we hope there is more to come |
| 2012-12-20 15:22:06 |
Berry Patch Cherry Picker Chapter 7 |
we are enjoying your story, don't listen to the nay sayers , keep up the good work (anybody that has been paying attention to this site knows about the age ups and downs) |
| 2012-12-20 01:10:36 |
Forced To Believe |
it would be nice if you continued, we love the premis, but you should follow your heart and desires |
| 2012-12-18 20:21:29 |
The Man In The Grey Suit - The Candle |
this story was excellent, made us cry and feel for blake, please keep up the man in the grey suit going. |
| 2012-12-18 14:15:27 |
Arianna's Secret |
we cant wait to read the next chapter |
| 2012-12-16 23:53:20 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt17 |
WE ARE DEEPLY SADDENED BY YOUR LOSS, OUR PRAYERS AND LOVE GO OUT TO YOU, SAKI AND ERIN. MAY THE ANGELS GREET YOU LOVED ONES WITH OPEN WINGS. |
| 2012-12-15 15:03:18 |
Training Mother and her Daughters, Part 4 |
we would love to see how pam and jennifer progress thru the submissive training. but really like the story, |
| 2012-12-13 19:24:35 |
Robert's Story Chapter 7 |
we are really enjoying this series, hope all ends well with robert and the girls. |
| 2012-12-13 15:17:28 |
Seduction in Venice |
we really enjoyed the story at first and it is well written however the last couple of paragraphs really turned us off. |
| 2012-12-12 13:01:52 |
Mothers Aid 2: The Return of Mark |
we have to agree with the anonymous reader, jerry needs to come back with a serious vengance and expose Mark and take his mother |
| 2012-12-12 12:41:27 |
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that was soo hot, we are going to go work out and then practice some weight lifting |
| 2012-12-10 21:01:18 |
The Baby Maker & Moms Helper |
we really enjoyed your story hope you can write more in the future |
| 2012-12-10 20:57:23 |
My Son's Cum Rag, part 4 |
we are enjoying this story the slow build up and the anticipation is fantastic, story lines and writers like you are what keep us coming back to this site. keep up the great work. |
| 2012-12-06 21:37:22 |
Emily (Chap 4) |
this is cool we like it alot |
| 2012-12-05 21:28:44 |
Surviving Dawn part 5 |
really like the story line, we wait deligantly ffor next chapter |
| 2012-12-02 19:07:31 |
Hunting The Hunter (Part Three) |
geat story, yea the "A" are showing in all stories and the whole site is acting wierd stories not updating and new stories not uploading into sytem in a timely manner |
| 2012-11-30 21:55:43 |
James gives Ally a visit |
keep at it this is good story, editing and stuff will come lter |
| 2012-11-30 21:18:41 |
Lessons Learned Day One |
we like it like both perspectives dont listen to the nay sayers |
| 2012-11-15 00:08:56 |
"The Man of the House" - Conclusion |
we have really enjoyed this story. can't wait for your next story |
| 2012-11-15 00:07:37 |
Twin Japanese Nieces Pt14 |
damm this just keeps getting better and better |
| 2012-11-14 11:03:12 |
House Girl IX-Sri Lanka |
We are really enjoying this story line, and hope you continue on with it, We have noticed several nasty or negative comments but that is to be expected by those unwilling to be named and stay anonymous,
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| 2012-11-02 23:34:57 |
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alright really enjoy your stories keep it up |
| 2012-11-02 23:10:57 |
Maria and her sister Connie |
you are one sick individul |
| 2012-10-23 21:36:44 |
Broken Birds, Part 19, Kat Reborn |
allright keep it coming, these characters are really developing |
| 2012-10-18 22:31:34 |
A sharp knock at the door. |
interesting is there more???????? |
| 2012-10-08 11:08:13 |
little sister and me |
dont listen to the nay sayers, they have there heads up their own arse, for the first time it is good the paragraphing, punctuation all comes with expereance and time, so keep up the good work |
| 2012-10-07 19:59:51 |
Another Wave prt 4 |
allright keep it coming |
| 2012-10-07 19:51:20 |
Uncharted territory chapter 2 |
man cant wait to see what happens to matt next |
| 2012-10-07 14:21:02 |
Another Wave |
we like it, lets get to the next part, |
| 2012-10-07 14:12:09 |
Dennys Breakfast Treat 9 |
allright the story line just kkeeps getting better and better cant wait for the next installment |
| 2012-10-04 10:23:17 |
Fun with Alchemy |
love the premise, lets see how far you can take this |
| 2012-10-03 10:29:13 |
Pipe Crew, Part III |
allright keep it up this is great |
| 2012-10-03 09:34:15 |
Breaking in Katee |
hey, just to say i liked the story dont understaand all the negative stuff, it entertainment nothing else and this was entertaining |
| 2012-10-02 19:09:32 |
Very Loving Family Chapter Two |
this is good cant wait to see what follows |
| 2012-09-22 23:03:55 |
From the heart |
good story, dont listen to the negative keep up the good work |
| 2012-09-20 17:55:52 |
The Gift |
that was fucking awsome man keep up the exaleent writing |
| 2012-09-18 22:50:44 |
Bobby and Keera, Chapter 3: A Thunderstorm and a Shower |
i agree hurry up with next installment |
| 2012-09-18 22:13:25 |
House Girl VII |
thanks really like the story line cant wait for the next chapters keep the imagination going |
| 2012-09-18 13:07:17 |
Laura, a.k.a. ( The Little Nympho ) |
keep up the story line cant wait to see more, and dont listen to the negative comments some people are just stupid and rude and you know you cant fix stupid |
| 2012-09-18 12:31:47 |
my story |
please continue to write and develope this story line |
| 2012-09-18 00:14:36 |
Another Yard IX |
keep it up this one of the best story lines i have ever read, love the humor |
| 2012-09-16 21:42:49 |
My Pretty Little Slaves Chapter 10 Marty's family training, and a surprise |
keep up the fantastic story line, cant wait to see what happens in chapter 11 |
| 2012-09-16 16:07:57 |
Solomon's Daughters: Risa's and Kylie's Chapter |
this is getting better and better, love the premise of the vamps, look forward to next chapters |
| 2012-09-14 03:16:11 |
My first love - part 7 |
keep up the good work and to hell with the negative bitches out there they are just rude and enviouse of what you have |
| 2012-09-13 12:49:36 |
Another Yard V |
this is so funny, keep up the good work can't wait to see what happens next |
| 2012-09-09 00:34:05 |
Another Yard III |
keep up the good work, we really enjoyed the story exciting and funny |
| 2012-09-09 00:31:21 |
Another Yard III |
keep up the good work, we really enjoyed the story exciting and funny |
| 2012-08-25 21:54:01 |
Gypsy Summer |
so what happens next, continue on seems a good line started |